Ielts Correction From Ryan

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Yourpurchaseentitlesyouto1correction withme. ItismypleasuretoofferyoumyIELTS ItismypleasuretoofferyoumyIELTSexpertisetobesthelpy expertisetobesthelpyouimproveyour ouimproveyour writing.Ihavepersonallyhelpedover1,000,000studen writing.Ihavepersonallyhelpedover1,000,000studentsachievetheirIELTSgoals tsachievetheirIELTSgoals bothinmyclassroomandthroughmyonlin bothinmyclassroom andthroughmyonlinevideosandIamconfi evideosandIamconfidentafter dentafter workingtogetheryouandIwillgetyour workingtogetheryouandIwillgetyourIELTSscorewhereit IELTSscorewhereitneedstobeforyouto needstobeforyouto besuccessful.

Howdoestheprogramwork? Inthisonlineclass,youandIwillwork Inthisonlineclass,youandIwillwork1-on-1toperfectyour 1-on-1toperfectyourwritingabilities writingabilitiesfor for theTask1andTask2portionsoftheIEL theTask1andTask2portionsoftheIELTSexam(eitherAcademicorGen TSexam(eitherAcademicorGeneral).On eral).On thefollowingpagesofthisdocument,youwillf thefollowingpagesof thisdocument,youwillfind10sampleAcademicTask ind10sampleAcademicTask1 1 questions,10sampleGeneralTask1questionsand20 questions,10sampleGeneral Task1questionsand20sampleAcademicorGeneral sampleAcademicorGeneral Task2questions.Youwillchooseanyoftheseq Task2questions.Youwillchooseanyofthesequestionstorespondto, uestionstorespondto,writeyour writeyour response(pleasesaveasaWord.docor.docxfile)andsubm response(pleasesaveasaWor d.docor.docxfile)andsubmitittomeviaemail. itittomeviaemail.I I willpersonallyreadyourwritingandshare willpersonallyreadyou rwritingandsharewithyoumythoughts withyoumythoughtsonhowyoucan onhowyoucan improve.Youhaveasmuchtimeasyouneedto improve.Youhaveasmuchtimeasyouneedtosubmityourwork submityourworktome.All tome.All responsesaresenttoyouviaemailwithin24 responsesaresenttoyou viaemailwithin24hoursofyouriniti hoursofyourinitialsubmission. alsubmission. Allsubmissionsmaybesentto[email protected].

Beforewebegin… Hereareafewtipstohelpyougetthemaximumbenefitfromourt Hereareafewtipstohelpyougetthemaximum benefitfromourtimetogether: imetogether: 1.PleasereviewmyfreevideosonmyYouTub 1.Pleasereviewmyfr eevideosonmyYouTubeaccountregardinghow eaccountregardinghowtoproperly toproperly composeyourresponse(don’twasteyourtime composeyourresponse (don’twasteyourtimeandmoneyhavingme andmoneyhavingmeteachyou teachyou whatyoucanlearnbyyourselfviatheseonlinetutorials!) 2.Besurethatanyworkyousubmittomehas 2.Besurethatanywork yousubmittomehasbeencreatedunderexam-like beencreatedunderexam-like conditions.Thismeansallottingyourself20mi conditions.Thismeansallottingyourself20minutestorespondtoany nutestorespondtoanyTask1 Task1 questionand40minutestoanyTask2question. 3.AlthoughIacceptscannedcopiesofwrittenwor 3.AlthoughIacceptscannedco piesofwrittenwork,you’llfindmyco k,you’llfindmycommentsmuch mmentsmuch easiertounderstandifyoutypeyourresponse. Now,withoutfurtherado,

…let’sgetstarted!

Task1Questions(Academic) Question1 ThefollowingtablefromStatis ThefollowingtablefromStatisticsUKmakesc ticsUKmakesclearinternet learinternetusagedemog usagedemographicsinthe raphicsinthe UnitedKingdom.Writeabrie UnitedKingdom.Writeabriefreportdescribin freportdescribingthetrends. gthetrends.

Question2 Thefollowingchartsoutline Thefollowingchartsoutlineconsumptiond consumptiondifferencesbetwe ifferencesbetweenmenand enmenandwomen women surroundingValentine’sDa surroundingValentine’sDay-relatedpurcha y-relatedpurchases.Writea ses.Writeabriefreportofatl briefreportofatleast150 east150 wordsdescribingtheinformation wordsdescribingtheinformationdepictedhere depictedhere..

Question3 Thefollowingchartsdepict ThefollowingchartsdepictthetypicalAme thetypicalAmericandietin ricandietin1990and2005. 1990and2005.Writea Writea reportforauniversitylecture reportforauniversitylecturersummarizingthe rsummarizingtheinformationprese informationpresented. nted.

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Question4 Thispiechartoutlinesconsu ThispiechartoutlinesconsumptionintheUS mptionintheUSAfortheyear1999 Afortheyear1999.Writeabriefin .Writeabriefingto gto outlinetheinformationpresen outlinetheinformationpresentedhere. tedhere.

Question5 Thetwochartsshowchanges Thetwochartsshowchangesinthenumber inthenumberofmotorvehiclea ofmotorvehicleaccidentsin ccidentsinselected selected countriesbetween1997and countriesbetween1997and2000,andthe 2000,andtherateofdeat rateofdeathsinmotorvehicl hsinmotorvehicleaccidents eaccidents  forthosecountries.  forthosecountries.

Question6 Thebelowchartillustratesma Thebelowchartillustratesmarriageanddiv rriageanddivorceratesint orceratesintheUKduringt heUKduringthelatterpart helatterpart ofthetwentiethcentury. ofthetwentiethcentury.Composeanart Composeanarticleinatle icleinatleast150wordsou ast150wordsoutliningthet tliningthetrends rends depictedhere.

Question7 Belowisasummaryoftrainus BelowisasummaryoftrainusageintheL ageintheLondonUndergro ondonUnderground.Summariz und.Summarizethe ethe informationpresentedforaun informationpresentedforauniversitylecture iversitylecturer. r.

Question8 Write150wordsillustratingt Write150wordsillustratingtheinformationpre heinformationpresentedinthe sentedinthetablebelow. tablebelow.

Question9 ThischartillustratesNorthAmeric ThischartillustratesNorthAmericanfishingstat anfishingstatisticsforthefou isticsforthefourthquarterofthe rthquarterofthe twentiethcentury.Summ twentiethcentury.Summarizetheinformatio arizetheinformationpresented. npresented.

Question10 Summarizetheinformationpresen Summarizetheinformationpresentedbelow. tedbelow.

Task1Questions(General) Question1 Youhavehadabankaccoun Youhavehadabankaccountforafewye tforafewyears.Recent ars.Recentlyyoureceive lyyoureceivedaletterfrom daletterfromthe the bankstatingthatyouraccou bankstatingthatyouraccountis$240ove ntis$240overdrawnandt rdrawnandthatyouwillbe hatyouwillbecharged$70 charged$70 whichwillbetakendirectly whichwillbetakendirectlyfromyouraccou fromyouraccount.Youknow nt.Youknowthisinformationis thisinformationis incorrect. Writealettertothebank. Writealettertothebank.Explainwhat Explainwhathashappened hashappenedandsaywhat andsaywhatyouwouldlike youwouldlike themtodoaboutit. Youshouldwriteatleast150words. YoudoNOTneedtowriteyourownaddress.Beginyourletterasfollows: DearSir,

Question2 Youhavewonagrantfromt Youhavewonagrantfromthegovernment hegovernmententitlingyou entitlingyoutoreceive$ toreceive$40,000tohelp 40,000tohelp  fundascienceprojecty  fundascienceprojectyouhavebeenw ouhavebeenworkingonwitha orkingonwithasmallteam. smallteam.Thismoneyiske Thismoneyiskey y tothesuccessoftheprojec tothesuccessoftheproject.Mrs.Trace t.Mrs.TraceyPolin,agove yPolin,agovernmentexecu rnmentexecutiveworkingin tiveworkinginthe the ScienceandResearchd ScienceandResearchdepartmentofyou epartmentofyourcountry’sgo rcountry’sgovernment,was vernment,wasinstrumental instrumentalin in helpingyourteamreceivet helpingyourteamreceivethismoney.Write hismoney.Writealettertha aletterthankingherforher nkingherforhereffortson effortson  yourbehalf. Writeatleast150words. YoudoNOTneedtowriteanyaddresses. Beginyourletterasfollows: Dear.......................,

Question3 Youhavereceivednoticet Youhavereceivednoticethatyourapplic hatyourapplicationforaposition ationforapositionwithacompa withacompanyinyour nyinyour cityhasbeenrejected.T cityhasbeenrejected.Thereasonforthis hereasonforthisrejectionisn rejectionisnotentirelycle otentirelyclear.Themajor ar.Themajor requirementslistedfortheposit requirementslistedforthepositioninclude: ioninclude: havingadegreeinCompute havingadegreeinComputerScience rScience havinghadatleast2years havinghadatleast2yearsofexperience ofexperienceworkingatahig workingatahigh-techfirm h-techfirm beingmobileandabletotrave beingmobileandabletotravelaspartofthe laspartoftheposition position • • •

Youfulfillallthreerequireme Youfulfillallthreerequirementsandfeel ntsandfeelyouwerebyfa youwerebyfarthebestcan rthebestcandidateforthe didateforthe  position.Writealetteraskin  position.Writealetteraskingforclarificatio gforclarificationonthecomp nonthecompany’sdecision. any’sdecision. Writeatleast150words. YoudoNOTneedtowriteanyaddresses. Beginyourletterasfollows: Dear.......................,

Question4 Your-haveafull-timejobanda Your-haveafull-timejobandarealsodoing realsodoingapart-timeeven apart-timeeveningcourse.Y ingcourse.Youare ouare  findingitincreasinglydiffic  findingitincreasinglydifficulttocontin ulttocontinuebothcommitm uebothcommitmentsandhave entsandhavethusdecide thusdecidedto dto droptheeveningcourse. droptheeveningcourse.Youhaveonly Youhaveonlycompleted4 completed4weeksofthe18 weeksofthe18weeksrequired weeksrequired  forthecourse. Writealettertothedirect Writealettertothedirectorofthecourse orofthecourseexplainingyo explainingyourdecisionto urdecisiontostop.Inyour stop.Inyour letterinclude: adescriptionofthesituation anapologyforaskingforearly anapologyforaskingforearlyexitofthecou exitofthecourse rse apoliteinquiryintowhetherpa apoliteinquiryintowhetherpartialrefundof rtialrefundofthecoursefee thecoursefeeis is  possible •

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Question5 Yourcityhasstartedanew Yourcityhasstartedanewprogramtohel programtohelpmodernizethe pmodernizethecity.Aspart city.Aspartofthis ofthis  program,officialsareaskingthe  program,officialsareaskingthegeneralpu generalpublictosubmitsug blictosubmitsuggestionsoutl gestionsoutliningareas iningareas thecitycanimprove.Write thecitycanimprove.Writeapolitelett apolitelettersuggesting ersuggestingthecityen thecityenforceanewl forceanewlaw aw restrictingdriversfromhonkingt restrictingdriversfromhonkingtheirhornsafter8 heirhornsafter8pm.Youshoul pm.Youshouldalsothankthe dalsothankthe officialsfortheirproactiveeffortin officialsfortheirproactiveeffortinreceivingfe receivingfeedbackfromcitize edbackfromcitizensofthecity nsofthecity regardingwhatneedstobeimproved. Writeatleast150words. YoudoNOTneedtowriteanyaddresses. Beginyourletterasfollows: Dear.......................,

Question6 Youhavepaidforanitemto Youhavepaidforanitemtobeshippedfroma beshippedfromaforeign,Eng foreign,English-speakingcou lish-speakingcountry.The ntry.The deliveryarrived4weekslate deliveryarrived4weekslateandwassup andwassupposedtoinclu posedtoincludeahandbook deahandbookdescribinghow describinghow toassembletheproductbut toassembletheproductbutthisismissing. thisismissing.Tomakematters Tomakemattersworse,onekey worse,onekey componentoftheitemisdam componentoftheitemisdamaged(partn aged(partno.A305).Writea o.A305).Writealetterofcom letterofcomplaint plaint outliningtheeissuesand outliningtheeissuesandsuggesting suggestinghowthissituation howthissituationcanberect canberectified. ified. Writeatleast150words. YoudoNOTneedtowriteyouraddress. Beginyourletterasfollows: Dear.................,

Question7 Yourentahousethroughan Yourentahousethroughanagency.The agency.Theheatingsyste heatingsystemhasstopped mhasstoppedworking.You working.You  phonedtheagencyawee  phonedtheagencyaweekagobutitha kagobutithasstillnotbee sstillnotbeenrepaired. nrepaired. Writealettertotheagen Writealettertotheagency.Inyourle cy.Inyourletter tter 1.introduceyourself  2.explainthesituation  2.explainthesituation 3.saywhatactionyouwou 3.saywhatactionyouwouldlikethea ldliketheagencytotake gencytotake Writeatleast150words. YoudoNOTneedtowriteanyaddresses. Beginyourletterasfollows: Dear.......................,

Question8 Youhaverecentlywatche Youhaverecentlywatchedanewprog danewprogrammeonTV.You rammeonTV.Youliketheprogra liketheprogrammebuthave mmebuthave  justdiscoveredthattheTV  justdiscoveredthattheTVstationhasmove stationhasmovedittoalat dittoalatertime,when ertime,whenyou’reunablet you’reunableto o watchit.Writealetter watchit.WritealettertotheTVstation totheTVstation.Inyourlette .Inyourletter: r: •

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Question9 Yournewroommateisnotdoin Yournewroommateisnotdoinghischores.W ghischores.Writealettert ritealettertohimcomplainin ohimcomplainingabout gabout thissituation.Inyourletter: •

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Question10 Youlostyourwalletonthe Youlostyourwalletonthetrain.Noone train.Noonehasfoundit hasfoundityet.Writeal yet.Writealettertothest ettertothestation ation masterofthelocaltrainsta masterofthelocaltrainstation.Inyourlet tion.Inyourletter: ter: •

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Task2Questions(AcademicandGeneral) Question1-Theageofinformat Question1-Theageofinformationtechnology iontechnologyhastakenal hastakenalotofpeopleby otofpeoplebysurprise. surprise. Whileithasbecomeawayof Whileithasbecomeawayoflifeforsome,othe lifeforsome,othersknowverylitt rsknowverylittleaboutit. leaboutit.Eventually Eventually wewillhaveapolarisedsoc wewillhaveapolarisedsocietyandthis ietyandthiswillleadtos willleadtoserioussocialproble erioussocialproblems.Forman ms.Forman opinionbasedontheinfoabove opinionbasedontheinfoaboveandwritea andwriteawell-reasoned well-reasonedessay. essay. Question2-Theexpression“Ne Question2-Theexpression“Never,nevergive ver,nevergiveup”means up”meanstokeeptrying tokeeptryingandneverst andneverstop op workingforyourgoals.Doyou workingforyourgoals.Doyouagreeordisag agreeordisagreewiththissta reewiththisstatement?Usesp tement?Usespecific ecific reasonsandexamplestosu reasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswe pportyouranswer. r. Question3-Doyouagreeor Question3-Doyouagreeordisagreewitht disagreewiththefollowingst hefollowingstatement:With atement:Withthehelpof thehelpof technology,studentnowa technology,studentnowadayscanle dayscanlearnmoreinformation arnmoreinformationandlearn andlearnitmorequickly. itmorequickly. Usespecificreasonsandexa Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupport mplestosupportyouranswer. youranswer. Question4-Awardsandprizes Question4-Awardsandprizesaregivenfore aregivenforexcellencein xcellenceinvariousfields. variousfields.Dothese Dothese awardsandprizesserveau awardsandprizesserveausefulpurpose?Us sefulpurpose?Usespecificreason especificreasonsandexampl sandexamplesto esto supportyouranswer. Question5-Somepeoplethink Question5-Somepeoplethinkthathumanne thathumanneedsforfarmland edsforfarmland,housing,an ,housing,andindustry dindustry aremoreimportantthatsaving aremoreimportantthatsavinglandforend landforendangeredanim angeredanimals.Doyouag als.Doyouagreeor reeor disagreewiththispointofview disagreewiththispointofview?Whyorwhynot ?Whyorwhynot?Usespecificre ?Usespecificreasonsandexa asonsandexamplesto mplesto supportyouranswer. Question6-Whatisaveryimpo Question6-Whatisaveryimportantskillape rtantskillapersonshouldlea rsonshouldlearninordertobe rninordertobe successfulintheworldtod successfulintheworldtoday?Chooseones ay?Chooseoneskillanduse killandusespecificreasons specificreasonsandexamples andexamples tosupportyourchoice. Question7-Resolvingproblems Question7-Resolvingproblemsbetweenindiv betweenindividualsorgroup idualsorgroupsisimportant.W sisimportant.What hat shouldbeconsideredorkept shouldbeconsideredorkeptinmindinresol inmindinresolvingproblemsbet vingproblemsbetweenindividu weenindividualsor alsor  groups?Usespecificreasonsan  groups?Usespecificreasonsandexamplesto dexamplestosupportyouran supportyouranswer. swer. Question8-Doyouagreeor Question8-Doyouagreeordisagreewitht disagreewiththefollowingst hefollowingstatement:Sel atement:Self-confidenceis f-confidenceis themostimportantfactorforsu themostimportantfactorforsuccessinschool ccessinschooloratwork.Use oratwork.Usespecificreasons specificreasonsand and examplestosupportyouropinion. Question9-Whydoyouthinks Question9-Whydoyouthinksomepeopleare omepeopleareattractedto attractedtodangeroussp dangeroussportsorother ortsorother dangerousactivities?Usespe dangerousactivities?Usespecificreasonsan cificreasonsandexamplesto dexamplestosupportouran supportouranswer. swer. Question10-Whichismoreimporta Question10-Whichismoreimportantforsuccess ntforsuccess:thenatural :thenaturalabilityyouareborn abilityyouareborn withorhard work?Explainyouropinion,usin work?Explainyouropinion,usingspecificreas gspecificreasonsandexamp onsandexamples. les.

11-Somepeopleprefertoge 11-Somepeopleprefertogetupearlyin tupearlyinthemorningan themorningandstartthed dstarttheday’swork.Others ay’swork.Others  prefertogetuplaterint  prefertogetuplaterinthedayandw hedayandworkuntillate orkuntillateatnight.Whic atnight.Whichdoyouprefe hdoyouprefer?Use r?Use specificreasonsandexample specificreasonsandexamplestosupportyou stosupportyourchoice. rchoice. 12-Whataretheimportantqua 12-Whataretheimportantqualitiesofagood litiesofagoodsonordaugh sonordaughter?Havethese ter?Havethesequalities qualities changedorremainedthesa changedorremainedthesameovertimein meovertimeinyourculture? yourculture?Usespecificrea Usespecificreasonsand sonsand examplestosupportyouranswer. 13-Somepeopleprefertowork 13-Somepeopleprefertoworkforalargecom foralargecompany.Othersprefe pany.Othersprefertoworkforasm rtoworkforasmall all company.Whichwouldyoup company.Whichwouldyouprefer?Usespecific refer?Usespecificreasonsand reasonsanddetailstosup detailstosupportyour portyour choice. 14-Peopleworkbecausetheyn 14-Peopleworkbecausetheyneedmoneyt eedmoneytolive.Whatare olive.Whataresomeotherreas someotherreasonsthat onsthat  peoplework?Discussoneormore  peoplework?Discussoneormoreofthesereason ofthesereasons.Usespecific s.Usespecificexamplesand examplesanddetailsto detailsto supportyouranswer. 15-Doyouagreeordisagree 15-Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollow withthefollowingstatemen ingstatement?Face-to-face t?Face-to-face communicationisbetterthan communicationisbetterthanothertypesofc othertypesofcommunication, ommunication,suchaslette suchasletters,email,or rs,email,or telephonecalls.Usespecif telephonecalls.Usespecificreasonsand icreasonsanddetailstosu detailstosupportyouranswe pportyouranswer. r. 16-Somepeopleliketodoon 16-Somepeopleliketodoonlywhattheya lywhattheyalreadydowe lreadydowell.Otherpeople ll.Otherpeopleprefertotry prefertotry newthingsandtakerisks.W newthingsandtakerisks.Whichdoyoupre hichdoyouprefer?Usespecific fer?Usespecificreasonsande reasonsandexamplesto xamplesto supportyourchoice. 17-Somepeoplebelievethat 17-Somepeoplebelievethatsuccessinli successinlifecomesfromta fecomesfromtakingriskorchanc kingriskorchance.Others e.Others believethatsuccessresult believethatsuccessresultsfromcarefulpl sfromcarefulplanning.Inyo anning.Inyouropinion,what uropinion,whatdoessuccess doessuccess comefrom?Usespecificreasonsa comefrom?Usespecificreasonsandexamples ndexamplestosupportyour tosupportyouranswer. answer. 18-Whatchangewouldma 18-Whatchangewouldmakeyourhometown keyourhometownmoreappealin moreappealingtopeopley gtopeopleyourage? ourage? Usespecificreasonsandexa Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupport mplestosupportyouropinion. youropinion. 19-Peopleattendcollege 19-Peopleattendcollegeoruniversityfor oruniversityformanydifferent manydifferentreasons(for reasons(for example,newexperiences, example,newexperiences,careerprepara careerpreparation,increased tion,increasedknowledge). knowledge).Whydoyou Whydoyou thinkpeopleattendcolleg thinkpeopleattendcollegeoruniversity? eoruniversity?Usespecific Usespecific reasonsandexamplestosu reasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswe pportyouranswer. r.  20-Nowadays,foodhasbecome  20-Nowadays,foodhasbecomeeasiertoprepa easiertoprepare.Hasthischa re.Hasthischangeimproved ngeimprovedtheway theway  peoplelive?Usespecificreaso  peoplelive?Usespecificreasonsandexampl nsandexamplestosupporty estosupportyouranswer. ouranswer.