Scheme of Marking for 014 2016 Format. This marking scheme with renamed renamed bands and altered descriptors for marking 014 (Paper 2 – Penulisan) is an analysis of a supposed marking scheme which will only be made known after arch 201!" #ue to con$dentiality and pending alteration if any% the scheme below is merely a guide for teachers to carry out their assessment" assessment" &e'ertheless% the scheme below ser'es as a guide to more eecti'e marking"
Section A (10 marks) Section B (i) (* marks) Section B (ii) (12 marks) Section (2. marks)
Scheme of Marking for 014. ward 2 marks for each correct answer with NO error" ward 1 mark for each correct answer with spelling or punctuation errors" &o mark for distorted or unclear meaning in answer" ward 1 mark for each correct answer with NO speing or punctuation errors" &o mark for answer with errors and distorted or unclear meaning"
S!per "# Ban$ (11 + 12)
"%ceent Ban$ (,% - + 10)
&oo$ Ban$ (.% ! + /)
(2* 2.)
(1, – 22)
( 12 – 1/)
All ideas are very relevant and well organied in wellplotted paragraphs"
Most ideas are well organied organied and relevant in in se3uenced paragraphs"
Some ideas Some ideas are relevant and organied in paragraph(s)"
Very excellent and and profcient use of the language throughout with hardly any error in grammar and structures" Almost perfect in punctuation and spelling with a high command of
Excellent use of the language throughout with a ew errors in grammar and structures"
Profcient use of the language with some errors in both grammar structures"
Some errors A ew errors ew errors in spelling and in punctuation punctuation" and spelling ocabulary is and correct just su5cient" su5cient" use of 'ocabulary"
Satisfactor' and (* + 4) (. 11)
6deas are in paragraph(s)"
eak Ban$ (0% 1 + 2)
(0 4)
ost ideas are in chunks and almost disorganied"
7se of language is just su5cient with requent errors in grammar and structures"
Poor use of the language with too many multiple errors in grammar and structures"
requent errors in spelling and punctuation "ocabulary is barely su5cient"
8pelling and punctuation errors are found throu!hout" ocabulary
'ocabulary"
can hardly con'ey any meaning"
Sample answers Section A - 1) a/ the Sri MutiaraRini apartment
(2 marks)
2) 4 rooms and 2 bathrooms
(2 marks)
3) a 24-hour security, swimmin poo!, p!ayround and car park
(2 marks)
4) "ree i"t/ token (#ccept reasonab!e answers$)
(2 marks)
%) dri&e
(2 marks)
Section B(i) - i)
#ny o" the three anima!s
(1 mark)
ii)
as !isted be!ow
(1 mark)
iii)
in SINGULAR or PLURAL "orm$
(1 mark)
( Gorillas / Tigers / Elephants / Panas / !"gongs / #hales / Shar$s / T"rtles )
Section B(ii) 1) 'irst!y, stop huntin them to eat their meat$ et, reduce *un!e c!earance to bui!d more bui!dins and roads$ +his wi!! preser&e their habitats$ +hird!y, we must not dump a!! toic wastes into the sea and ri&ers as po!!ution ki!!s them in masses$ e must a!so en"orce stricter !aws to "orbid huntin anima!s "or !eather, "ur and tusks$ ""enders must be *ai!ed$ e see too many incidents o" e!ephants bein ki!!ed *ust to et their tusks$ ." a!! these are done, these anima!s !i&e$ (82 words) (This is a suggested answer. The total number of words is around 80. It is Super EX 12$)
2) +hese endanered anima!s are "acin the "i&e threats be!ow$ hen peop!e c!ear *un!es to bui!d roads and houses, the natura! habitats are destroyed$ unters ki!! these anima!s "or "ood$ Rich peop!e demand "or their skins and body parts$ +heir number ets !esser$ 0ncarin businessmen dump toic wastes into the ri&ers and sea$ .t po!!utes and ki!!s these anima!s$ (58 words) (Suggested answer for 9 or 10 marks$)
3) +he "irst step is to re!ocate them in anima! sanctuaries$ et, "ine the hunters who hunt them$ +hird!y, p!an, reduce or stop bui!din roads throuh the "orests$ e must a!so pre&ent water po!!ution$ ast!y, we must stop huntin and eatin the meat o" these anima!s$ (45 words) (Suggested for 7 marks$) 4) o eat meat$ ont po!!ution$ o hunt anima!s$ o cut trees$
(2 marks)
Section % &' One day !ily was "y"ling home after s"hool. The sun was scorching hot' As Lil t"rne a *en into the main roa+ she saw a large crow gathering at the mile o, the roa' She stoppe ccling an ran towars the onloo$ers' There was an accient an a peestrian was $noc$e own * a car' The ri-er was calling . to irect help to the scene' A,ter a*o"t ten min"tes+ the am*"lance arri-e 0 an the attenants attene to the -ictim' A,ter *arel 0 min"tes+ the li,te the girl on a stretcher into the am*"lance' It 1oome its wa to the hospital as the siren waile lo"l' Lil contin"e ccling home'
(100 words) 2% marks$
&'2 3ne morning+ Princess Ai$o saw a tall woman wearing her iamon *racelet' She recogni1e it was hers' Princess Ai$o con,ronte her an tol her to ret"rn it to her' The woman insiste she was not wearing an *racelet' Princess Ai$o as$e her i, she was wearing a *racelet with white an ellow iamons' So+ she hel the woman4s han an p"lle the slee-e o, the co-ere wrist' Inee+ the *racelet was hers' 5er palace g"ars came an ca"ght the woman' 6inall+ Princess Ai$o ,o"n her ,a-o"rite *racelet' (83 words) 2% marks$
+he two suested answers ha&e a!! the descriptors !isted in the scheme o" marks$ ence, they 5ua!i"y "or the Super 6 band$ Reard!ess o" the !enth o" the answer, as !on as the answer i&en is within the rane o" words !isted and its content matches a!! the descriptors in a band, it 5ua!i"ies "or the hihest mark o" that band$ e&e rthe!ess, p!ease bear in mind that markin is sti!! sub*ecti&e$
