M.O.R.E 1119 Module for Remedial English SPM 1119
PROGRAM PENINGKATAN PRESTASI BAHASA INGGERIS SPM
JABATAN PENDIDIKAN KEDAH
2016
Patron Datuk Hajah Azuyah Hassan Director of Kedah Education Department Advisor Mr. Abdul Aziz bin Selaiman Head of the Academic Sector Coordinator Mr. Choong Kok Hung The Principal Assistant Director (English Language) Committee Members Mr. Thamil Selvan a/l Perinan (Academic Sector) Mr. Saw Beng Hup (Academic Sector) Mr. Mat Shaari bin Abu Hassan (Academic Sector) Mr. Syed Fazli bin Syed Zainol Abidin (Academic Sector) Mdm. Abriza binti Baharom (Academic Sector) Mdm. Siti Masyura binti Mohamad (Academic Sector)
Module Writers Head: Zanurin bin Mohamad Safar (SMK Kulim) CONTINUOUS WRITING Zanurin bin Mohamad Safar (Head) (SMK Kulim) Mohamad Iqram bin Khalid (SMK Keladi) Ahmad Azrul Afeze bin Ahmad Rosdi (SMK Keladi) DIRECTED WRITING Sarb Jeet Kaur d/o Kashmir Singh (Head) (SMK Pendang) Tan Shi Min (SMK Syed Ibrahim) Siti Sarah binti Udzir (SMK Kubor Panjang) READING COMPREHENSION AND SUMMARY Lim Ju Vian (SMK St. Theresa) Parimala Devi d/o Kesavan (SMK Convent Father Barre) INFORMATION TRANSFER Rozita binti Abdul Razak (Head) (SMK Jitra) Nor Azira binti Aziz (SMK Hosba) Mohammad Kamal bin Ayub (SMK Megat Dewa) NOVEL Sharon Taty binti Mokhtar (Head) (SMK Changlun) Yusnianida binti Yazid (SMK Paya Kemunting) Masnida binti Mokhtarudin (SMK Sanglang)
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TABLE OF CONTENT UNIT 1. Information Transfer (Section B)
2. Reading Comprehension
3. Novel
4. Directed Writing
CONTENT How to answer: SPM 2015 Section B Common keywords Tips to answer Section B (SPM 2015) Practice 1 Practice 2 Practice 3 Practice 4 Practice 5 Practice 6 Practice 7 Practice 8 Practice 9 Practice 10 Answer scheme
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Preamble for Section C Passage 1 Passage 2 Passage 3 Passage 4 Passage 5 Passage 6 Passage 7 Passage 8
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Passage 9 Passage 10
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Synopsis Characters Characteristics Plot Themes Moral values Guidelines on answering the novel question Marking method Practice 1 Practice 2 Practice 3 Practice 4 Practice 5
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Practice 6
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Types of format Common structures in Directed Writing Expanding the content points Elaborating the content points Task for expanding and elaborating the content points Informal letter Practice 1
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5. Continuous Writing
Practice 2 Formal letter Practice 1 Speech Practice 1 Practice 2 Article Practice 1 Practice 2 Practice 3
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Report Practice 1 Practice 2 Practice 3 Practice 4
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Sentence Construction Practice Sentence Construction Practice 1 (Task) Sentence Construction Practice 2 (Task) Sentence Construction Practice 3 (Task) Sentence Construction Practice 4 (Task) Sentence Construction Practice 5 (Task) Sentence Construction Practice 6 (Task) Sentence Construction Practice 7 (Task) Sentence Construction Practice 8 (Task) Sentence Construction Practice 9 (Task) Paragraph Writing Practice
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Paragraph Writing Practice 1 (Task) Paragraph Writing Practice 2 (Task) Paragraph Writing Practice 3 (Task) Paragraph Writing Practice 4 (Task) Paragraph Writing Practice 5 (Task) Paragraph Writing Practice 6 (Task) Paragraph Writing Practice 7 (Task) Paragraph Writing Practice 8 (Task) Paragraph Writing Practice 9 (Task) Essay Writing Practices 1-10 (Task) Sample sentences, paragraphs and essays
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INFORMATION TR ANSFER (SECTION B, PAPER 2) What to transfer? Ten questions will be asked based on the given stimulus which can be in a graphic or nongraphic form. Students need to find the correct informationbased on the stimulus. How to transfer? 1. Study the stimulus carefully –read everything printed to get the general idea. a. The stimulus can be a/an passage, advertisement, notice, brochure, movie/book review, news report, catalogue or factual extract. 2. Pay attention to the details (title, date, time, names, etc.) 3. Read and study each question carefully. 4. Take note of the ways to answer the questions. It is not fixed; it can be a graphic organiser, table, flow chart or short text with blanks. 5. Look for common vocabulary or keywords that have similar meaning in the questions and stimulus. Underline the keywords. 6. Answers should be short and straight to the point. a. Transfer only what is needed (if your answer is too long, your answer might not be correct) b. Avoid over lifting. Over lifting occurs when you include irrelevant part/s in your answer. 7. Spell the words correctly. 8. Use correct grammar forms (pronoun, punctuation, tenses and subject-verb-agreement). a. You might need to change the words to suit the required answer. For example, you might need to change 1st person pronoun into 3rd person pronoun to answer what the individual in the stimulus did. b. Make sure that proper noun is written using appropriate capital letter/s. Refer to the stimulus. c. Look at the word / parts of speech before the blank. REMEMBER! 1. Only give ONE answer per question. 2. Do not lift the part which does not answer the question. 3. Do not over lift.
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COMMON KEYWORDS: These are the common words/ keywordsthat you should know: NO.
WORD
SIMILAR WORD
MEANING
1
Title
Headline / topic
Tajuk
2
Purpose
Objective / aim
Tujuan
3
Quantity
Amount
Kuantiti, bilangan
4
Price
Cost
Harga
5
Fare
Harga / tambang
6
Rent
7
Free gift
Free of charge, complimentary
Hadiah percuma
Sewa
8
Discount
Less
Potongan harga
9
Souvenir
Cenderamata
10
Menu
Senarai
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Dishes
Lauk pauk
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Meal
Makanan
13
Category
14
Date
Group
Kumpulan, kategori Tarikh
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Location
16
Contact number
Place / venue
Tempat
17
Organiser
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Event
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Registration
Pendaftaran
20
Membership
Keahlian
21
Fee
Payment
Bayaran
22
Author
Writer
Penulis
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Prize
Hadiah kepada pemenang
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Consolation
Hadiah saguhati
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Benefits
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Sponsor
Penaja / Menaja
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Time
Masa
Nombor untuk dihubungi Penganjur Ceremony
Advantages
Majlis
Kebaikan, kelebihan
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Duration
Period
Jangka masa
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Deadline
Closing date / Not later than
Tarikh tamat/ tutup
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Attire
Costume
Pakaian
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Accommodation
Lodging / put up
Penginapan
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Function
Fungsi
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Ingredients
Materials
Bahan
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Competition
Contest
Pertandingan
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Slogan
Slogan
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In conjunction with
Bersempena
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In collaboration with
Dengan kerjasama
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Transport
39
Facility
Equipment
Kemudahan, Kelengkapan
40
Expiry date
Used by
Tarikh luput
Pengangkutan
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Tips to answer (SPM 2015)
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Two situations when texting is acceptable:
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Sample answers (SPM 2015): *Take a look at the sample answers given. *Pay attention to the words in bold in the question as they serve as keywords for you to find the information in the stimulus.
Question 16 Topic of Survey:
Do you text/message at the dinner table? (correct answer) Around the world with one question… do you text/message at the dinner table? (wrong - over lifting)
Question 17 Number of countries surveyed:
*16 (correct answer) *sixteen (correct answer but not recommended to avoid spelling mistake) 16 countries (correct answer) Of the 16 countries that we polled, only three had majority of respondents answering yes to mealtime texting. (wrong – over lifting)
Questions 18 and 19 (Answers are inter-changeable. Write one answer for each question. Do not write both answers in one question) Two situations when texting is acceptable: 18. during snack (correct answer) 19. when you are alone (correct answer) However, 18. during snack and when you are alone. Or 18. if you just want to have a snack or you are by yourself in the kitchen. (both answers are correct but NOT ADVISABLE)
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Question 20 If you really need to text:
Excuse yourself and return as soon as possible (correct answer) If you absolutely need to communicate with someone who is not at the table, excuse yourself and then return as soon as you can. (wrong - over lifting)
Question 21 People from 21……………………………. text the least at mealtimes.
Canada (Correct answer) canada (wrong answer – proper noun – capitalized word) resident of Canada are…. (Wrong –over lifting)
Question 22 The young generation text less than the older generation in 22…………………
Brazil (correct answer) brazil (wrong answer – proper noun – capitalized word) brazil is the only country in which residents…(Wrong –over lifting)
Question 23 Women text more than men in most countries except in 23………………. Thailand (correct answer) thailand (wrong answer – proper noun – capitalized word) only in Thailand did the male texter out-number females (wrong – over lifting)
Question 24 (rephrasing idea– you have to rephrase the information that you found in your own words) Phillip Lassner and Han Chew are of the opinion that 24………………………..
It is okay to use/text at the dinner table. (correct answer) Using phone at the dinner table is not wrong. (correct answer) Using phone during mealtime is fine/okay. (correct answer) Texting during mealtime is okay/fine. (correct answer) If I receive a text message at dinner table. I’d reply to it immediately. What’s wrong with that? / yes, I text at the table. And use Google and Twitter. I don’t see why it’s a problem. (wrong answer – over lifting – did not change pronoun)
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Question 25 25……………………………….responded that texting at the dinner table is impolite.
Stephanie Kumfort (correct answer) Stephanie Kumfort, 33, (correct answer) Stephanie Kumfort, 33, Montreal, Canada (correct answer) Stepanie kumfort (wrong answer – spelling error – proper noun – capitalised word)
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Practice 1
Read the following notice and complete the graphic organiser on the following page.
I know, I was a bit sceptical about this one too. But I promise that you will get many new friends.
Welcome to Drama Club Alif, 15
Drama Club is the perfect place for young actors or actresses to express themselves! Through Drama Club, students will learn acting warm ups and techniques, play improvisational games,
I used to be scared to do class presentation but not anymore.
perform scenes and monologues and rehearse on a real stage with
stage make up and
costume! Each student will receive a monthly newsletter
with
updates
and
drama
Lily, 13
ideas.
Located at Jalan Teluk Wanjah, Alor Setar, st
rd
STUDENTS' ACADEMIC
classes are conducted every 1 and 3 Monday of the month from 6:00 p.m. – 7:30 p.m.
PERFORMANCE 100%
-Age: 12 – 17 years -Registration fee: RM100 per student To register, contact Mrs. Wong at:
90% 80% 70% 60%
[email protected] Academy of Fine Arts
50% 40% 30% 20% 10% 0%
Non-drama students Drama Students
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Questions 1 to 10
Using the information from the notice, complete the graphic organiser below. Activities:
Acting warm ups and techniques Playing improvisational games
2.________________________________
3.________________________________
Venue:
Benefits of joining the club:
4.____________________________
9.______________________ 10. Improve ______________ _________________________
Notice on:
__________________ _____ 1. __________________
Participant:
Build confidence to present in 5.______________________ class
Those who are interested to join need to write to Mrs. Wong via:
Get:
8.________________________
6.________________________
Enrolment fee for two students: 7._________________________
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Practice 2
Read the survey report below and answer the following questions.
How you spend your leisure time? The survey found that all the respondents had a hobby. The majority of the respondents said that they had been doing their hobby for more than 5 years. The most popular hobby was reading books with 40% of respondents having this hobby. 50% of them read books at school, 100% of them read books at home, and 25% of them read books in library. They liked reading books because they could get more knowledge (75%). Some of the respondents were interested in other hobbies like watching movies, shopping, playing table tennis, collecting stamps (a total of 60%), mostly because these activities were interesting I have worked all my life, so I really don’t have any hobby. Robert Chong, 35.
and educational. Most of them spent above 3 hours or more on their hobbies a week. All the respondents had the hobby that they wanted to try. They were playing chess (20%), roller-blading (20%), cycling, playing basketball, dancing, reading magazines, playing the piano and taking photos (a total of 60%).
People with many hobbies live not only the longest but the happiest. Shariman, 62.
People are spending more on their hobbies to make their free time more enjoyable. Zulaikha, 22.
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Questions 1 to 6
Using the information from the survey report, complete the flow chart below. Title of Survey: How People Spend Their Leisure Time
Most Liked Hobby:
Other favourite pastimes:
1. _____________
Reason: 2. ___________________________
Watching movies
3. ____________________
4. ____________________ Collecting stamps
Reasons:
5. __________________ Interesting
Questions 6 to 10
Complete the sentences with appropriate information from the survey report. 6. Half of the respondents gave ____________________________ into keeping up with their hobbies and activities.
7. Robert Chong could not find time for a hobby because _______________________________. 8. Shariman is of the opinion that those with hobbies are _____________________________ and live the longest.
9. Those who like reading did the hobby at ________________________________________. 10. The respondents spent ________________________ or more for their hobbies in a week.
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Practice 3
Read the article and answer the questions on the following page.
WHY YOU SHOULD LEARN A NEW LANGUAGE The first reason is that you will be exposed to different cultures. People who have culture are people who are knowledgeable and who know their way around life. If you know another language, you will be more cultured simply because this would permit you to travel more and you will know the world better. The second reason is because people will like you. People admire those with knowledge, whom they can learn from, as long as you are not showing off. People like listening to stories from other countries, so by telling them about your travels and experiences learning new language, you may develop new friendships. The third reason is because you will discover many new things. Not only will you be more open to a whole new culture, you will be able to meet thousands of other people. No one knows where life will take us, and knowing other languages might just make your life completely different. The fourth reason is because you will develop your mind. By learning, you are exercising your brain, and you will be better at memorising and doing simple mental exercises. When you learn a new language you need to put words together, which works your brain. You will be very good at associating other things as well. The fifth reason why you should learn another language is because it is fun. By integrating interactive games, you will enjoy the experience and have a lot of fun. You can also learn from or with someone else, which should be amusing for both of you. In my advanced Japanese course, we are taught entirely in Japanese and the reading materials have no translations. The method has made me master the language in no time. Sharon, Penang
Studying a language builds my overall language abilities and strengthens my skills in interpretation and understanding. Kamal, Megat Dewa
“You live a new life for every new language you speak. If you know only one language, you live only once” Czech Proverb
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Questions 1 to 6
Using the information in the article, complete the graphic organiser below. LEARNING A NEW LANGUAGE Reasons: 1. _____________________________________________________________
Knowledgeable Permits you to travel more You will be liked by many people
People like knowledgeable individuals 2. ____________________________________________________________
3. _____________________________________________________________
Meeting a lot of people You will develop your mind
A good brain exercise 4. _____________________________________________________________
5. _____________________________________________________________
Questions 6 to 10
Complete the sentences using the information in the article. 6.
Kolej Height Selatan offers _______________ foreign language courses.
7.
_____________ is the most popular foreign language course at Kolej Height Selatan.
8.
____________ of the students at Kolej Height Selatan chose French for foreign language course.
9.
Sharon _____________________________________________________ because she was taught entirely in the language.
10. According to Kamal, studying a language develops ________________________________.
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Practice 4
Read the following article and complete the graphic organiser on the following page. Heat Can Be Deadly for High School Athletes Football season kicked off at high schools across the country last week, smack in the middle of one of the hottest weather on record for many states. For high school athletes, high temperatures can be deadly. According to a recent report a total of 40 high school football players have died from heat stroke since 1995, with 5 of those deaths occurring in 2011. Dozens more are hospitalised each year with heat-related illness. Precautions should be taken to prevent the death caused by heat stroke. The precaution that can be taken are such as limiting the number of practices in one day, giving athletes extended breaks and making sure players stay hydrated. Parents should also play an important role to safeguard teen athletes from the heat by ensuring that they are hydrated before and after practices. Parents could also replenish any nutrients they lost during practice by putting extra salt in the meals.
Problem
Symptoms - Flush skin - Heavy sweating -
Heat Exhaustion
Heat Stroke
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Nausea and vomiting Headache
- Hot and red skin Confusion - Rapid or weak pulse - Rapid, shallow -
breathing High body temperature Skin may be wet or dry
Treatment -
Move to cooler place Remove or loosen clothing
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Apply coola and wet Give half glass of cloth water every 15 minutes
- Call 999 - Immerse in cool bath - If the victim vomits or loses
consciousness, do not give anything to eat or drink
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Questions 1 to 10
Using the information given, complete the graphic organiser below.
Heat Can Be Deadly for School Athletes
Total fatalities:
Parents’ Roles:
Preventive measures:
1. _________________
4. Ensure athletes are ________
2. _______________________
3. _______________________
____________________________
Players must stay hydrated.
HEAT EXHAUSTION
5. ________________________
HEAT STROKE Symptoms
Effect on complexion: 6. ________________
Hot and red skin
Heavy sweating
You feel doubt: 8. __________________
7. _________________________________
Rapid, shallow breathing
Treatment
To add liquid in body: 9. ________________
___________________________________
Apply cool and wet cloth
Call 999 To lower the body temperature: 10. ____________________________
[10 marks]
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Practice 5
Read the article and complete the graphic organiser on the following page.
DEFORESTATION Kuala Wok, Malaysia - High up in the remote mountain jungles of Malaysia's eastern state of Kelantan, massive deforestation and the country's worst flood in decades have left indigenous tribes reeling. According toa 2012 study by the University of Maryland Malaysia has one of the highest rate of deforestation in the world. Most of the land is cleared for palm oil or rubber plantations, which have played a major role in Malaysia's economic growth. After decades of rapid development, the country is now one of the richest in the region. While Orang Asli in Kuala Wok have been told by local contractors that 3,000 hectares of land will be left to them after the logging, no formal contract has been signed - and already, the entire forests surrounding the villages have been cleared. The same University of Maryland study estimated that the state of Kelantan lost around 15% of its natural forest between 2001 and 2012. According to theCIA World Factbook, almost 12% of Malaysia's population belongs to one of dozens of indigenous ethnic groups, each with their own individual language and culture. Most indigenous Malaysians live in the states of Sabah and Sarawak on the island of Borneo. The term Orang Asli is used to refer to the various indigenous tribes of peninsular Malaysia. The roughly 180,000 Orang Asli make up less than one percent of the country's population.
Excessive clearing of forest causes global warming. Siti Saleha, Alor Setar.
Environment protection is an integral part of the development process; it cannot be considered in isolation. World Summit, 2002
“Humans are to be blamed for the problems faced today” -Dr. Mostafa K. Tolba, Director, United Nations Environment Programme
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Questions 1 to 10
Using the information given, complete the graphic organiser below.
Headline: 1. _______________________
Affected region:
Purposes of land clearing: To open:
Country: 2. _____________________ Area
: 3. _____________________
4. ______________________________ 5. ______________________________
Malaysia has the highest rate of deforestation based on a 6. ____________ conducted by a foreign university. Between the period of 7.__________________ Kelantan lost around 50% of its natural forest. 8.__________________________ who live in Kuala Wok are badly affected by deforestation. Forests around their settlements 9. __________________________. All these environmental issues 10. ____________ by those Orang Asli today are due to humans.
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Practice 6
Read the following article and complete the graphic organiser on the following page. PETALING JAYA: The number of dengue cases last year paints a scary picture. There was a more than 50% jump in the number of deaths caused by dengue compared to 2014. This, according to the Health Ministry, was the highest number of dengue deaths ever recorded in the country. The ministry also identified a number of dengue hotspots in the country, with Selangor having the highest number of hotspots at 107. Other hotspots are in Johor (23), Perak (9), and Penang (3), while Kuala Lumpur, Putrajaya, Negeri Sembilan and Sabah have one each.
“Climate change could be one of the factors contributing to the spike in dengue cases. Alternate rainy and hot seasons cause the Aedes breeding to increase. Water collected in stagnant containers could worsen the situation. Another factor is serotype changes in the dengue virus. Poor community behaviour also contributes to the prevalence of the Aedes mosquitoes. Littering and inappropriate solid waste disposal could result in the high Aedes breeding index.” - Dr Ammar Muaz, an epidemiologist.
“Most Malaysians are quite aware of the dangers of dengue but they don’t proactively go around and try and prevent it. They just take care of the areas around their house. The main breeding areas for Aedes mosquitoes are construction sites and places with a lot of debris and litter. Many of the hotspots are close to construction areas. The community could take part in preventing Aedes breeding by cleaning their neighbourhood and the council could visit construction sites to check on the cleanliness.” - Dr Ashok Zachariah Phillip, Malaysian Medical Association (MMA) president
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Questions 1 to 10
Using the information given, complete the graphic organiser below.
Statistics DENGUE CASES IN MALAYSIA
Number of cases
Lowest: 19 884 (2011)
Highest: 1. _____________
Number of deaths (2010-2015)
Contributing factors:
4. ________________________
Serotype changes in the dengue
2. ______________
Number of 3. _________________
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virus
Humans’ bad habits
5. _____________________
6. _____________________
Preventive measures:
Action by residents:
______________________
_______________________
Action by authorities:
Aedes breeding spots:
9.______________________
10. ____________________ ______________________
7. ________________________ Places with a lot of debris and rubbish 8. ________________________ __________________________
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Practice 7
Read the following report and complete the graphic organiser on the following page. Cigarette Smoking Smoking damages our health and can lead to serious diseases like lung cancer and heart disease. Non-smokers who are passive smokers, also have a 25 per cent increased risk of the diseases. Children who are exposed to tobacco smoke at home have increased risks of developing lower respiratory tract infections such as bronchitis and pneumonia. Our government has tried discourageofsmoking putting Despite warning this, labels cigarette packets and banning thetoadvertising tobacco by products. theon number of smokers in Malaysia continues to increase. According to the World Health Organization (WHO), about half of all Malaysian men and about 30 per cent of adolescent Malaysian boys (aged 12 to 18) smoke.
Poisonous Chemical Substances in Cigarettes and the Use: Chemical substance Used in Carbon Monoxide Car exhaust DDT Insecticides Vinyl Chloride Plastic Arsenic Rat poison Methoprene Pesticide Sulfuric Acid Car batteries Nicotine Bug sprays Hydrogen Cyanide Gas chamber poison Formaldehyde Preserving dead bodies Tar Road material Butane Cigarette lighter Ammonia Cleaning products Acetone Nail-polish remover Why teenagers smoke? Reasons Smoking parents Peer influence Advertisements Coping with stress
% 20 45 15 20
* 200 students of SMK Panglima Awang participated in the survey
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Questions 1 to 5
Using the information given, complete the graphic organiser below. Cigarette Smoking
1. ____________________________________ Effects of tobacco smoke on children 2. ____________________________________
Smoking parents: 40 respondents
Peer influence: 3. __________________
Advertisements: 30 respondents
Coping with stress: 40 respondents
Reasons for smoking
4. _____________________________________ Efforts by the government to discourage smoking
5. _____________________________________
Questions 6 to 10
Using the information from the report, complete the sentences below. 6. Two serious illnesses caused by smoking are ______________________________________.
7. Passive smokers face ___________________ more risk of diseases caused by smokers. 8. _________________, a chemical substance found ni cigarette is also used to keep dead bodies in good condition.
9. Cigarettes are harmful because they contain thirteen types of _______________ chemicals. 10. The total of _______________ respondents cited smoking parents and coping with stress for their smoking.
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Practice 8
Read the following advertisement and complete the graphic organiser on the following page.
JUMBO OLIVE BATH & SHOWER GEL Packed with skin-softening oleic acid, olive oil has been used for centuries throughout the Mediterranean as a moisturizer. Legend has it that athletes in ancient Greece would rub olive oil onto their bodies. So it is only natural that our Community Trade organic olive oil should come from southern Italy where it is grown on family farms. Olive oil is rich in oleic acid and natural antioxidants that help to restore skin’s natural moisture level. It is a natural moisturizer for normal to dry skin. BEST SELLER
DIRECTIONS Lather up in the bath or shower using hands or a bath lily. Rinse thoroughly. Recommended to be used with other products from the Olive collection as part of a body care layering regime.
THE HEART INSIDE OLIVE OIL Our Community Fair Trade organic olive oil comes from southern Italy. The Nuovo Cilento
Co-operative
uses
traditional
production methods. The fruits are shaken from the trees and caught in nets to prevent bruising, then washed and cold-pressed. The co-op also runs courses on traditional cooking, as well as farming and natureeducation programmes. To find out more, visit our Community Fair Trade section.
SMELL GOOD! “I got it as Christmas gift, fall for it! After comparing with many other brands, I still find this olive shower gel the best and cheapest!” - Siew Mei REFRESHING “My new favourite product that makes me leave the bathroom feeling fresh and smell good!” - Nasrul
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Questions 1 to 5
Using the information given, complete the graphic organiser below.
Jumbo Olive Bath and Shower Gel
How to use:
Main ingredient: 1._________________________
Step 1: 4.________________________ Step 2: 5. _______________________
Benefits: 2. __________________________ __________________________ 3. __________________________ __________________________
Questions 6 to 10
Using the information given, complete the radio advertisement below. Introducing a new best seller bath and shower gel!!! This product is rated 6. ____________________. The main ingredient, organic olive oil, is produced using 7. ____________________________. It is srcinated from 8. __________________. Compared with other brands in the market, Jumbo Olive Bath and Shower Gel is 9. _________________________. It makes you 10. __________________________ after leaving the bathroom. Get your bottle now!!
[10 marks]
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Practice 9
Read the article and complete the graphic organiser on the following page.
Technology is the application of scientific knowledge for practical purposes, especially in industry.
Technology has made it easy for students to use theircomputers and mobile devices to continue learning outside of traditional classrooms. The ability to take notes electronically during class results in the conservation of valuable study time. In addition, many students find they are able to use digital notes more effectively than handwritten notes by conducting keyword searches to locate specific information quickly.
32% - Tools to facilitate collaboration and communication among children, teachers and parents.
Today’s college students are also able to annotate and share notes with studygroup participants by using cloudbased tools such as Evernote and Google Drive. These powerful tools enhance collaboration by allowing students to access their notes from any device, add comments and track changes. Technology enables learning to take place outside of the classroom and the library. Students use technology to meet, collaborate and create content virtually. Technology also helps students make valuable networking connections with others in their field of study.
62% - Updated daily on children’s homework assignments, projects and upcoming tests.
22% - Videos and podcasts of lectures from teachers.
WHAT PARENTS & STUDENTS SAY ABOUT THE USE OF TECHNOLOGY IN EDUCATION 74% - Access to curriculum materials and online textbooks to use at home. 42% - Updates from teachers about class activities and topics studied.
51% - Special alerts when children are missing assignments, low grades, or is failing a class.
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Questions 1 to 6
Using the information given, complete the mind map below.
Questions 6 to 10
Using the information given, complete the sentences below. 6. Digital notes are more effective because ________________________________________ _______________________________________.
7. ________________________ are some cloud-based tools used by students to share notes. 8. Students are meeting _____________________ tocollaborate and create learning content. 9. Majority of parents and students responded that technology provides ________________ ________________________________________________________________________.
10. ____________ of parents use technology to have updates on children’s homework assignments, projects and upcoming tests.
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Practice 10
Read the article and answer the following questions. Global warming worsens with record widespread coral bleaching Six months after 195 nations vowed tougher action to curb global warming, the problem has only grown worse, with higher accumulations of greenhouse gas emissions, record worldwide temperatures and widespread coral bleaching from hotter ocean waters. The primary greenhouse gas that leaders at a global summit in Paris last December agreed to reduce — carbon dioxide (CO 2) released from burning of fossil fuels — is now fixed above the historic milestone of 400 parts per million that was reached for the first time last year. A direct result of accumulating CO 2 is warmer, more acidic ocean waters creating havoc with coral formations by bleaching great stretches of reefs
CARBON DIOXIDE LEVELS RISE Seasonal adjusted CO2 concentration at Mauna Loa Observatory:
in the world's oceans. The bleaching occurs when algae that live inside and nourish coral, providing their brilliant colours, wither from the warming waters and die, leaving behind white coral skeletons.
Coral Bleaching In Northeastern Australia
81% 93%
Bleaching
Severe Bleaching
Adapted from: USA Today News
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Questions 1 to 6
Using the information given in the article, complete the table below.
Where
1. ____________________________
When
2. ____________________________
3. _____________________________________
Global Summit How
4. ______________________________________
Number of
5. _____________
countries involved
Questions 6 to 10
Using the information given in the article, complete the following sentences.
6. The accumulating carbon dioxide causes the seawater to be _______________________. 7. Coral bleaching occurs when ________________________________________________ because of the warming water. 8. __________________________ produces nutrients for the coral. 9. 81% of the north eastern Australia is facing ______________________________. 10. According to the text, ______________________________ are the most affected by air pollution.
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ANSWER SCHEME
Practice 1:
1. Drama Club 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10.
Practice 2:
1. Reading (books)
Performing scenes and monologues Rehearsing on a real stage Jalan Teluk Wanjah, Alor Setar Students aged 12 to 17 (years old) (monthly) newsletter (with updates and drama ideas) RM 200 e-mail get (many) new friends (students’) academic performance
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(Could) learn more knowledge Shopping Playing table tennis Educational some effort he has worked all his life the happiest school, home and library 3 hours
Practice 3:
1. You will be exposed to different cultures 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10.
People like listening to stories You will discover many new things It is fun Integrating interactive games 4 / four Korean 12% mastered the language in no time his overall language abilities
Practice 4:
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Practice 5:
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Deforestation Malaysia Kuala Wok, Kelantan Palm oil plantation Rubber plantation study 2001 and 2012 Indigenous ethnic groups/ orang asli have been cleared faced
Limit the number of practices (in one day) Give athletes extended breaks hydrated before and after practices replenish nutrients lost flush skin nausea and vomiting / headache confusion give half a glass of water every 15 minutes immerse in cool bath
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120,836 (2015) 848 dengue hotspots Climate change littering inappropriate solid waste disposal Construction sites Water collected in stagnant containers Clean the neighbourhood Visit construction sites to check on the cleanliness
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Bronchitis 1. Pneumonia 2. 90 respondents 3. Putting warning labels on cigarette packets 4. Banning the advertising of tobacco 5. products 6. lung cancer and heart disease 7. 25% 8. Formaldehyde 9. poisonous 10. 80 / eighty
Practice 9:
1. the application of scientific knowledge for 1. practical purposes 2. 2. easy for students to use their computers 3. and mobile devices (to continue 4. learning...classrooms) 5. 3. able to annotate and share notes 6. 4. enables learning to take place outside of 7. the classroom and the library 8. 5. helps students make valuable networking 9. connections (with others in their field of 10. study) 6. keyword searches locate specific information quickly 7. Evernote and Google Drive 8. virtually 9. Access to curriculum materials and online textbooks (to use at home) 10. 62 %
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Olive oil Rich in oleic acid Natural anti-oxidants Lather up (in the bath/ shower) Rinse thoroughly 4.8 / 4.8/5 Traditional (production) method southern Italy the best and cheapest feel fresh and smell good
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Paris December curb global warming reduce carbon dioxide release 195 warmer and more acidic algae (that nourish coral) wither and die Algae coral bleaching urban population
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Section C : Reading Comprehension This section requires you to answer questions based on a passage. All 5 questions are subjective which means that you have to read and understand the given passage, then write your answers in the space provided, no options are given. This section carries 10 marks; some questions will be 1 mark each whereas some questions will be 2 marks each. How to answer comprehension questions 1. Read all the questions first BEFORE you begin to read the text! Take note of ALL the wHquestions. 2. Then read the passage to get the general idea of what it is about. 3. Questions always start with “From paragraph…”. 4. Underline or tick the answers as you read the passage 5. Write the answers in the space provided 6. Read the passage again for the more difficult questions 7. Check your answers especially the tenses and pronouns. Your answers must be in the same tense as the question and it should not be in the first person pronouns, that is ‘I’, ‘we’, ‘our’, ‘us’, ‘me’ and ‘you’. All these pronouns may be found in the passage but you will have to change them to ‘he’, ‘she’, ‘they’, ‘them’ and ‘it’. (Refer Passage 3) 8. If there is a difficult word that you do not know the meaning of, try to understand it in context of the sentence, paragraph or the passage itself. (Remember: reading comprehension just needs you to follow the story!) 9. Be careful when lifting because you are allowed to lift only the particular line that has the answer. If over lifting is done, no mark will be awarded. Answers can be written in a word, a phrase or a sentence. You can even lift lines from the passage that have the answers. But do not overlift. You do not need to answer in complete sentences. 10. For vocabulary question, if ONE word is required, make sure you give only ONE WORD . 11. Understand the terms used in comprehension questions. Type of questions Needed techniques Jenis soalan Teknik yang diperlukan What is the purpose / intention … Why (tujuan) – give reason Which phrase…/ Quote a sentence… Mesti petik seluruh ayat dengan tepat “… …” Explain in your own words what the Mesti tukar Ganti nama “I’ kepada he / she author meant Mesti menggantikan perkataan penting Find a word in paragraph which tells us that Mesti beri SATU perkataan sahaja dan ejaan … mesti tepat Give evidence to show that… Cari bukti – petik terus dari teks Give proof to show that (The evidence/proof is in the sentence “……” Cari sebab atau alasan dari teks Why … (mengapa) Cari faktor masa When … (bila) How … (bagaimana) Beri kaedah… / Nyatakan cara… What … (apa) Cari faktor … Where … (di mana) Cari aspek tempat What was the effect … Apakah kesan / akibat … In your opinion … / what do you think Beri pendapat sendiri
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How to answer summary questions Summary: Suggested techniques (15 marks) 1 Write in ONE paragraph 2 Read the summary question carefully and check the aspect being asked, e.g. …what the writer saw? Senaraikan semua yang dilihat oleh penulis …what the writer did? Senaraikan semua perbuatan aktif, terkawal dan dilakukan oleh penulis (bukan apa yang dilihat) …the writer’s reaction. Reaksi ---perbuatan DAN perasaan penulis …how the writer felt. Senaraikan apa yang dirasai oleh penulis (perasaan) 3 Check which part of the text you must use. DO NOT read other parts 4 You must use the first ten words and CHECK the pronoun used. Follow the same pronoun for the rest of your summary. (Refer Passage 3) 5 Do not write more than the word limit (130 words, including the 10 words given) 6 If you lift a sentence, do not lift the whole sentence. Lift the main point(s) only. But make sure ALL sentences start with a subject. e.g. Took the boy to the hospital. 0 mark He took the boy to the hospital. 1 mark 7 If possible try to use your own words. Use some short connectors to join the points. 8 A summary is marked under two categories: a Content = 10 marks 1 mark is given for EACH CONTENT point, that is, the facts that you are asked to select from the passage b Language = 5 marks A mark is given for STYLE, that is, the accuracy and quality of your writing and the extent to which you are able to use your own words. 9 Read the rubric carefully and identify the task words. These tell you what you have to summarise. Keep them in mind as you write your summary. Otherwise, there is a danger that your answer will become irrelevant. 10 You must pay close attention to the instructions given, and follow them, if you are to write a good summary. a) Keep to the word limit allowed i. Hyphenated words are 1 word e.g. better-paid odd-job hard-earned part-time b) Use only the area of the text allowed c) Use the opening 10 words provided (they are specially constructed to lead you to the 1st point) d) Write in continuous prose e) Summarise the text according to the task given. f) There may be two required tasks, but you need not separate the tasks. Write ALL in ONE PARAGRAPH.
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Passage 1: THE EXPERIENCE THE WRITER HAD WITH A WOLF Read the following passage about the experience of the writer had with a wolf. Then answer questions 1 – 5. Question 6 is summary. 1
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I can still remember the day it happened. I was taking a walk after work. I wanted to get a picture of the camp with the rugged mountains as the background before leaving for home. After about 15 minutes, I came across a broken branch which was three feet long. It was of a unique colour and shape and I thought to myself that it would make a perfect addition to my picture. I picked it up and continued my journey. Then, I realised I was no longer alone. I saw the wolf, a mere 20 metres away. He was heading towards my path, I stopped. The wolf kept walking until he was directly in front of me. Then he turned and looked at me as though he had known all along that I was there. Wolves seldom, if ever attack, I’ve read that somewhere. Yet, there it was, looking at me with those hungry eyes. I knew that I could not show fear. I studied my situation. My mind raced in search of a solution. If he should attack, my first line of defence would be to flash my camera at him. Then, maybe I could use the branch. It had six sharp ends, two of which were broken. I couldn’t say how long we looked at each other. Ten seconds, 30 minutes, or less, it seemed like eternity. There was no place to run and hide. My camp was another 10 kilometres away. Whatever it is, I keep my cool and was ready for his attack. I looked at him intently to show I meant business. We moved a dozen steps towards each other ……*
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6. Using the text on the experience the writer had with the wolf, summarize in your own word -
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Use material from lines 1 – 16 Begin your summary with: Before I left for home, I went for a walk….. Exercise: Read and decide which of the following points are correct. 1. Went for a walk 2. Wanted to get a picture of the camp 3. I came across a broken branch 4. It would make a perfect addition to my picture 5. I picked it up 6. And continued my journey 7. I realised I was no longer alone 8. I saw the wolf 9. He was heading toward my path 10. I stopped 11. The wolf kept walking until he was directly in front of me 12. Looking at me 13. I knew that I could not show fear 14. I studied my situation 15. My mind raced in search of a solution 16. Would be to flash my camera 17. Could use the branch 18. We looked at each other *N.B. only 6 points are correct Suggested Answers Sentence 1. Went for a walk 2. Wanted to get a picture of the camp 3. I came across a broken branch 4. It would make a perfect addition to my picture 5. I picked it up 6. And continued my journey 7. I realised I was no longer alone 8. I saw the wolf 9. He was heading toward my path 10. I stopped 11. The wolf kept walking until he was directly in front of me 12. Looking at me 13. I knew that I could not show fear 14. I studied my situation 15. My mind raced in search of a solution 16. Would be to flash my camera 17. Could use the branch 18. We looked at each other 5. 5.
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Passage 2: MOKHTAR SHAH Read the following passage about Mokhtar Shah. Then answer questions 1 – 5. Question 6 is summary. 1
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Most people look forward to a relaxed life once they retire but not 57year-old Mokhtar Shah. He is still up and about. Mokhtar is his own boss and keeps busy driving a taxi, more as a hobby than anything else. Mokhtar's life tells us the reason for the contentment he feels today. How did it all begin? Mokhtar was srcinally from Muar, Johor. After leaving school at the age of twelve, he worked for his uncle at a small food stall. He earned RM30 a month. After three years, he decided to set out on his own instead. He became an odd-job labourer doing different things for different people. He managed to make a little more. Not long after that, Mokhtar moved on to greener pastures. He worked as an odd-job labourer in Kuala Lumpur. Later, he was employed as a gardener, keeping a rich man's lawn neat and tidy. During this time Mokhtar got married and began to raise a family. However, the pressures of raising a family of four children and living in the city were too much for him. So, he opted for a betterpaid job and became an ambulance driver with the General Hospital in Jalan Raja Muda. Those were difficult days. He realised that the duties of an ambulance driver included duties like picking up patients and doing despatch work. At other times, Mokhtar had to ferry sick students to and from examination centres. The working hours were long and the salary was still not enough. Mokhtar had to support his growing family. He decided to become a parttime fruit and vegetable seller. In the evenings, after he had finished his work at the hospital, he would go home and pack fruits and vegetables to market them at the pasar malam in his neighbourhood. The extra income he earned came in useful to pay for amenities, medical bills and his children's education. His four children became the focus of his life. Mokhtar had only completed primary six and therefore wanted his children to do better than he had done. He believed that although he could not teach them, he could give them support by being there with them while they were studying. He made it a point to take his children to the public library and often spent his hard-earned money on books for them. In the 1980s, when his children were growing up, Mokhtar and his wife were worried. They needed to ensure their children would not be influenced by the teenagers in the neighbourhood who played truant or indulged in unhealthy activities like using drugs. "My wife and I kept a strict eye on our children," he said. "Every time they went out, we would check on them to make sure they were in good company." Once in a while, the Mokhtar family could be seen at picnic spots enjoying themselves. Mokhtar's children have grown up to be responsible and independent adults. A typical day in Mokhtar's life now begins at 5 a.m. with morning prayers. Then, he has breakfast and begins work. His work ends before lunch time after he has done at least four hours of driving his taxi. It has been some thirty years since Mokhtar left Muar. He is a contented man. "The years of hard work and the sacrifices I made for my family have paid off," he said. He takes pride in his children: one is a lecturer, another, a development project consultant, the third, a secretary and the youngest, a bank employee. As for what the future holds, Mokhtar's only hope is that he remains healthy and is able to lead a useful life, both for his family and society. (Adapted from The Star July 2003 and SPM 2006)
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2. From paragraph 4, besides patients, who did Mokhtar fetch in his ambulance? _____________________________________________________________ (1 mark) 3. From paragraph 5, which word has the same meaning as the word ‘sell’? _____________________________________________________________ (1 mark) 4. From paragraph 6, a) what was the highest level of education Mokhtar had achieved? __________________________________________________________ (1 mark) b) how did Mokhtar help his children in their studies? State two ways. i) ________________________________________________________ (1 mark) ii) ________________________________________________________ (1 mark) 5. a)
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Answer discussion 1. a) busy driving taxi Clue: Line 3 (‘keeps busy…’) From text: Lines 2-3 (‘Mokhtar is…..else’) b) keeping a rich man’s lawn neat and tidy Clue: Line 11 (as a gardener) From text: Lines 11-12 (‘Later, …neat and tidy’) 2. sick students to and from examination centres Clue: who (siapa – merujuk kepada orang) 3. market Clue: sell – kata kerja, jawapan juga kata kerja 4. a) primary six **[standard six / UPSR --- 0 mark] – jawapan mesti dari petikan b)
i) take his children to the public library ii) spent his hard-earned money on books for them iii) give them support (by being there with them while they were studying) (accept any two)
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6. The article describes the life of Mokhtar Shah. Write a summary about what Mokhtar did to earn money, and what he and his wife did to make sure that their children grew up well. Your summary must :- be in continuous writing (not in note form) - not be longer than 130 words, including the 10 words given below. - use material from lines 5-39 Credit will be given for use of own words but care must be taken not to change the srcinal meaning Begin your summary as follows: After leaving school at the age of twelve, Mokhtar worked … Guide: Read sentence by sentence tosee if it contains a point. Underline the points identified. Pre-summarising Activity Read the sentences below and place a tick ( / ) where you think is a point. Paragraph 2 a) Mokhtar was srcinally from Muar, Johor. b) After leaving school at the age of twelve, he worked for his uncle at a small food stall. c) He earned RM30 a month. d) After three years, he decided to set out on his own instead. e) He became an odd-job labourer doing different things for different people. f) He managed to make a little more. Paragraph 3 a) Not long after that, Mokhtar moved on to greener pastures. b) He worked as an odd-job labourer in Kuala Lumpur. c) Later, he was employed as a gardener, keeping a rich man's lawn neat and tidy. d) During this time Mokhtar got married and began to raise a family. e) However, the pressures of raising a family of four children and living in the city were too much for him. f) So, he opted for a better-paid job and became an ambulance driver with the General Hospital in Jalan Raja Muda. Paragraph 4 a) Those were difficult days. b) He realised that the duties of an ambulance driver included duties like picking up patients and doing despatch work c) At other times, Mokhtar had to ferry sick students to and from examination centres. d) The working hours were long and the salary was still not enough. Paragraph 5 a) Mokhtar had to support his growing family. b) He decided to become a part-time fruit and vegetable seller. c) In the evenings, after he had finished his work at the hospital, he would go home and pack fruits and vegetables to market them at the pasar malam in his neighbourhood. d) The extra income he earned came in useful to pay for amenities, medical bills and his children's education.
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Sample summary After leaving school at the age of twelve, Mokhtar worked at a food stall. Three years later, he was an odd-job labourer. He continued to be an odd-job labourer when he moved to Kuala Lumpur. Later, he worked as a gardener. To earn more to support his
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Passage 3: HUMMINGBIRDS Read the following passage about Hummingbirds. Then answer questions 1 – 5. Question 6 is summary. 1
The thrill of seeing the first hummingbird in my garden has never left me the sight of this unbelievably tiny creature with striking feathers flitting boldly from flower to flower. To attract other birds, I began growing their favourite plants. Soon, more hummingbirds began visiting my garden from May through late September, before departing for countries with warmer climates. In 1998, the last one left on 5 October 3 - or so I thought.
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bird had nothing outside to eat that day, the next day wouldn't be any better. And sending him south was not practical. However, I could provide suitable living 25 conditions to keep him warm in my conservatory. I named him Squeak because of his constant squeaky chirping. Offering Squeak a balanced diet now became my main concern. Besides nectar, hummingbirds need protein from insects. The ornithologist then suggested Nektar-Plus. I kept two feeders of this complete diet going at all times. As 30 hummingbirds love to bathe, I also bought a small plastic bird bath for Squeak. But he had different plans as bath time was always a game to him. He would rather slide around on the wet leaves and get his entire body soaked. After bathing, he would fly around the room to dry himself. Once when he became sick, I had to nurse him back to health. 35 As winter turned to spring, we had strengthened our friendship. Hoping that he would make my garden his territory, I gave him a special treat. I filled a feeder with a particularly sweet solution and held it in my hand. After just one taste, Squeak loved it. He began watching for me and waiting eagerly by the door handle for this treat. By then, he would even allow me to stroke him. I began to spend more 40 time with him. In early May, the other hummingbirds returned and when Squeak spotted them outside, he became excited, chattering and flying rapidly to and fro. One day, I saw him and another hummingbird hovering beak to beak with the window between them and I knew then what had to be done. As much as I loved having 45 Squeak, I realised that I had to let him go. That morning, as usual, Squeak had a shower after which I opened the door in the conservatory. I then coaxed him with a treat in my hand. He came over for a sip, then flew back inside. He did it again and again. Each time I moved farther away and after much coaxing, he finally came all the way out to where I was. He took a drink, then inspected a plant hanging on the 50 46
porch. Suddenly he lifted up, flew over the roof of the house - and was gone. My eyes filled with tears. I was sorry for releasing him - yet I also knew it was for the best. (SPM 2011) Based on the passage about HUMMINGBIRDS. Answer all questions. You are advised to answer them in the order set. 1. From paragraph 1, what did the writer do to encourage more hummingbirds into her garden? _____________________________________________________________ (1 mark) 2. From paragraph 2, a) why was the writer surprised to see the hummingbird? _____________________________________________________________
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b) there were three choices suggested by the ornithologist. Which option did the writer choose? _____________________________________________________________ (1 mark) 4. a) From paragraph 4, what evidence is there to show that Squeak had fun during bath time? _____________________________________________________________ (1 mark) b) From paragraph 5, give two pieces of evidence to show that Squeak enjoyed his special treat. Evidence 1 : ________________________________________________ (1 mark) Evidence 2 :_________________________________________________ (1 mark) 5. In your own words, give two reasons why the writer was sad to release Squeak. Reason 1 :____________________________________________________ (1 mark) Reason 2 :____________________________________________________ (1 mark) Answer discussion 1. The writer began growing the hummingbirds' favourite plants. (Pronoun “I” --- [x]) 2. a) She thought all the birds would have migrated together. (Pronoun“I” --- [x]) b) The writer put some liquid nectar in the feeder for the bird. He hung out a feeder containing liquid nectar. (Pronoun “I” --- [x]) 3. a) hesitated. (Beri SATU perkataan sahaja.) b) The writer chose to keep the bird warm in her conservatory during winter. (keep warm --- 0 mark) (keep warm during winter --- 1 mark) 4. a) The evidence is that Squeak is said to treat bath time as a game and would rather slide around on the wet leaves and get his entire body soaked. b) Evidence 1: He watched and waited for the writer eagerly by the door handle for his treat. Evidence 2: He allowed the writer to stroke him. 5. Reason1: The writer was sad to release Squeak because she has developed affections for him and a bond with him. Reason2: She personally loves hummingbirds a lotand this experience was athrill and joy to her.
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6. Summary: Based on the passage, write a summary on how the writer showed her love and care for the hummingbird. Use material from lines 10 to 41. Your summary must not be more than 130 words. Begin your summary as follows: To show her love and care for the hummingbird, she... The points are: (You are awarded a maximum of 10 marks= 10 points)
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hung out a feeder containing liquid nectar. placed a trail of plants leading to her conservatory closed the door behind him to keep him safe set up another feeder called an ornithologist provide suitable living conditions keep him warm a balanced diet kept two feeders complete diet going at all times bought a small plastic bird bath he became sick, she nursed him back filled a feeder with a particularly sweet solution spent more time with him
Sample summary To show her love and care for the hummingbird, she hung out a feeder containing liquid nectar for the hummingbird to feed on. As the hummingbird was confused, sheplaced a trail of plants that led him to her conservatory. The hummingbird began to feed there. After receiving an ornithologist's advice, she decided to keep the hummingbird all winter, making sure that he was warm before letting it go. She also kept two feeders with Nekter-Plus at all times. She made sure he had a balanced diet and even catered to his love for bath time. She bought a small plastic bird bath for him that he thoroughly enjoyed. When he got sick, she nursed him lovingly. She also fed him a sweet solution that he loved and spent more time with him.
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leading to my conservatory, a special room where I grew my flowers. When the hummingbird came inside, I closed the door behind him to keep him safe and then set up another feeder. The bird went from flower to flower before he discovered the feeder. He liked the nectar and fed on it for the rest of the day. Although I loved the idea of a hummingbird spending the winter in my conservatory, I hesitated to take away his freedom. But I also didn't want him to die. So I called an ornithologist, an expert on birds, for advice. He warned me that this bird was probably not going to live and gave me three choices: I could keep the bird all winter, or I could fatten him up and let him go after a few days, or I could find someone to release him down south where it was warmer. I reasoned that if the bird had nothing outside to eat that day, the next day wouldn't be any better. And sending him south was not practical. However, I could provide suitable living conditions to keep him warm in my conservatory. I
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Passage 4 : V ARIOUS TYPES OF TOURISM AND THEIR FUNCTIONS Read the following passage about various types of tourism and their functions. Then answer questions 1 – 5. Question 6 is summary. 1
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There are many reasons why people travel widely throughout the world. Today, travelling has been made into an investment opportunity that the government in every country tries to promote. In most countries, the development of tourism is seen as a partnership between the private and public sectors. Travel is considered a multifaceted product. It includes accommodation, 5 transport, restaurants, shopping facilities, entertainment, public infrastructure support and others. In Malaysia, the Travel Fair has been widely promoted. The Travel Fair aims to develop a tourism sector which is of high quality. The Travel Fair helps to distribute the economic benefits of tourism to the host country that is promoting tourism. Besides, it gives the impression that there is a real connection between tourism and culture. Malaysia is a cosmopolitan country rich in cultural heritage. Hence, the Travel Fair encourages the use of tourism for both cultural and economic exchanges. With this, the employment sector is also increased where more job opportunities are created for the local people. Tourism is hailed as a ‘smokeless industry’ which brings considerable multiplier effects to the economy, and help in the country’s economy growth, therefore, be fully supported. People travel for many purposes. So, there are many types of travel. In ethnic tourism, the purpose of the travel is to observe the cultural expression and lifestyles of truly exotic people. A very good example is shown by the travels to places of interest in Sarawak such as to study the lifestyle of the Dayaks. Typical destination activities would extend visits to native homes, attending cultural dances and possibly participating in religious rituals. In cultural tourism, the main aim of the travel is to experience the vanishing
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lifestyle that lies within the human memory. Destination activities typically include 25 having meals in a rustic inn, costume festivals, folk dance performances, arts and craft demonstrations. The emphasis is on culture and traditions of the country. Malaysia has a wonderful potpourri of different races comprising three main groups– Malays, Chinese and Indians in peninsular Malaysia; and numerous native groups in Sabah and Sarawak. Visitors from all over the world can enjoy the colourful and kaleidoscopic 30 nation of Malaysia. On the other hand, business tourism is characterised by the business entrepreneurs undergoing meetings and seminars as part of the travel. The business associates travel to cover some business deals and go sightseeing as the deals are settled. 35 In historical tourism, the museums and memorial tours help to stress the glories of colonial times. Historical events, legends and monuments are favoured destinations for the tourists to see the picturesque view of past histories. Moreover, Malaysia’s promotion of Melaka in particular and some of the sites of Kuala Lumpur and Penang, dwell on this aspect of the country’s tourism resources. In regard to the colonia l 40 experience, for example, is repackaged as ‘heritage’ and incorporated into a generalised notion of Malaysian culture. Finally, in environmental tourism, the emphasis is on natural and environmental attractions. The purpose is to be back with nature where natural attractions such as lush green forests, wetlands and caves are real things to see. The typical activities 45 available for environmental tourism include photography, hiking, canoeing, mountain climbing and camping. In Malaysia, the attractions of nature are specifically promoted in East Malaysia territories while ‘Green Holidays’ are a feature of certain parts in peninsular Malaysia such as Taman Negara and the east coast states are cases in point. 50 (Adapted: English 1119 Form 5, Penerbit Cemerlang) 50
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develop a tourism sector which is of high quality distribute the economic benefits there is a real connection between tourism and culture. ethnic tourism observe the cultural expression and lifestyles of truly exotic people. cultural tourism experience the vanishing lifestyle that lies within the human memory. business tourism
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travel to cover some business deals and go sightseeing as the deals are settled historical tourism stress the glories of colonial times / see the picturesque view of past histories. environmental tourism to be back with nature
Sample Summary Our Malaysian government tries to promote the tourism sector to its highest quality. Having Travel Fair helps to distribute economic benefits to the country. It also shows a real connection between tourism and culture. There are 5 types of tourism. The first is ethnic tourism that aims to observe the cultural expression and lifestyles of truly exotic people. Next, cultural tourism provide experience of the vanishing lifestyle that lies within human memory. Moreover, business tourism helps cover some business deals and go sightseeing as the deals are settled. In addition, historical tourism stresses on the glories of colonial times and enable one to see the picturesque view of
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activities typically include having meals in acraft rustic inn, costume festivals, folk dance performances, art and demonstrations. The emphasis is on culture and traditions of the country. Malaysia Penjelasan has a wonderful potpourri of different races comprising three main dan contoh groups – Malays, Chinese and Indians in peninsular Malaysia; and numerous native groups in Sabah and Sarawak. Visitors from all over the world can enjoy the colourful and kaleidoscopic nation of Malaysia. On the other hand, business tourism is characterised by the C8 – type 3 business entrepreneurs undergoing meetings and seminars as part of the travel. The business associates travel to cover some C9 - description 3 business deals and go sightseeing as the deals are settled. In historical tourism, the museums and memorial tours help to C10 – type 4 stress the glories of colonial times. Historical events, legends and monuments are favoured destinations for the tourists to see the C11 –description4 picturesque view of past histories. Moreover, Malaysia’s promotion of Melaka in particular and some of the sites of Kuala Lumpur and Penang, dwell on this aspect of the country’s tourism resources. In Penjelasan regard to the colonial experience, for example, is repackaged as dan contoh ‘heritage’ and incorporated into a generalised notion of Malaysian culture. Finally, in environmental tourism, the emphasis is on natural and C12 – type 5 environmental attractions. The purpose is to be back with nature C13 –description5 where natural attractions such as lush green forests, wetlands and caves are real things to see. The typical activities available for environmental tourism include photography….
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Since his childhood days, Amir had lived alone with his grandpa and the two of them shared a very special relationship. They were always seen together and seemed inseparable. Both of them had a common passion - football. Amir was the smallest of the class when he entered secondary school. Although he loved football, he was only selected as a reserve player as he was not 5 good enough and was also considered too short. He was always sitting on the substitute's bench watching the game. However, as a determined person, Amir always hoped he would be given a chance to play when he became a senior. All through secondary school he came early for all the games, but remained a substitute throughout the five years. Amir was very envious of the 10 other players who were all very much better than he. In his free time, Amir would be watching videos of great football matches to improve his skills. Determined to become a better player, he asked for extra tips from his coach. Not wanting to disappoint him, the coach agreed but knew it would not make any difference. Using the tips he had learnt, he practised regularly. His faithful grandpa would be 15 in the stands, always with words of encouragement for him. The coach and his teammates were very impressed with his grandpa. When Amir went to college, he decided to try out for the football team there. Everyone was sure he would not be selected, but he proved them wrong. He made the team but again as a reserve. The coach admitted that he kept Amir 20 on the reserve list because he had always put his heart and soul into every practice. Besides, his dedication inspired the rest of his team. The news that he had been selected thrilled him so much that he rushed to the nearest telephone to call his grandpa. The old man was equally excited. Each time Amir's team played, he made it a point to be there. The persistent young athlete never missed practice 25 during his four years at college but still he never got to play in any matches. It was the end of his senior football season and, as he trotted onto the practice field shortly before a match, the coach met him with a message. Amir read the note and he turned pale. Swallowing hard, he mumbled to his coach, "My grandpa ... died this morning. Is it all right if I miss practice today?" 30 The coach put his arm gently around his shoulders and said, "Take the rest of the week off, son. And don't even plan to come back to the game on Saturday. Take care." Saturday arrived, and the game was not going too well. In the second half, when the team was two goals behind, a silent young man quietly slipped into the changing room and put on his football gear. As he ran onto the side-lines, the 35 coach and his players were astounded to see their faithful teammate back so soon after his grandpa's death. A whistle sounded. A player was injured and had to be taken off the field. A substitute was needed. Amir boldly approached the coach. "Coach, please let me play. I have just got to play today," Amir pleaded. 40 The coach pretended not to hear him. There was no way he wanted his worst player in such an important game. But Amir persisted and, finally feeling sorry for him, the coach gave in. "All right," he said. "You can go on." Before long, the coach, the players and the spectators could not believe their eyes. This unknown little reserve, who had never played in the team before, 45 was doing everything right. The opposing team could not stop him. His team began to triumph. The score was soon tied at 2-2. In the closing seconds of the game, Amir took control of the ball and raced past three defenders. The cheering was thunderous. Amir had scored the winning goal! The fans were overjoyed. His teammates hoisted him onto their shoulders. It was indeed a sweet victory for 50
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c) From paragraph 9, why do you think Amir was sitting all alone in the corner? ___________________________________________________________ (1 mark) 5. What kind of man was Amir's grandpa? Give one quality and provide a reason to support your answer. Quality : ___________________________________________________ (1 mark) Reason :___________________________________________________ (1 mark) Suggested Answers 1 a) Amir was not good enough. b) The coach did not want to disappoint Amir. 2. Amir felt thrilled when he was selected as a reserve player. 3. a) The message conveyed the news that his grandpa died that morning. b) They did not expect him to be back so soon after his grandpa's death. 4. a) Amir was the worst player, hence the coach had no confidence in him. b) 'thunderous'. (*question asked for ONE WORD, give answer in ONE WORD) The word is thunderous (0 mark) The cheering was thunderous. (0 mark) The word is “thunderous” (1mark) c) Amir was probably thinking about his grandpa. 5. Quality: Supportive. Reason: Although he was blind, he made it a point to be at all Amir's games and practices to lend him moral support. 55
6. Based on the passage given and use material from lines 9 to 51 , write a summary of: * Amir's effort to achieve success in football after he became a reserve player, and * how he surprised his coach on the day of the important match Your summary should not be more than130 words including the first 10 words given below: After Amir had been chosen as a reserve player, he ...
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would watch videos of outstanding football matches asked for additional tips used them in his regular practices put his heart and soul into every practice never missed any practice was there each time his team played he appeared so soon after his grandpa's death pleaded with his coach he did everything right his opponents could not stop him he took control of the ball, raced past the defenders scored a winning goal
Sample Summary After Amir had been chosen as a reserve player, he would watch videos of outstanding football matches to improve his skills. He asked for additional tips from his coach and used them in his regular practices. In college, he remained a substitute but put his heart and soul into every practice and never missed any practice. He was there each time his team played. On the day of the important match, he surprised hiscoach and teammates when he appeared so soon after his grandpa's death. He pleaded with his coach to let him play. Finally, the coach agreed andAmir surprised everyone as he played. He did everything right and his opponents could not stop him. He took control of the ball, raced past the defenders and scored a triumphant, winning goal. (133 words) **133 words with 13 points *** at 130th words, candidates already gave 12 points.
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Ari stood there listening to the stern words of his father. His father had gathered the three children into their enclosed patio and had the look on his face that said that one of them erred. ‘Which one of you did this?’ the father asked with a loud voice. Ari, his elder sister and elder brother all stared down at the floor containing 5 the art of a child’s handwriting in chalk. Ari stood there, trembling on the inside and hoped that no one else could see it. Will Father know it was him? Ari secretly wondered. Scared, the only words that came from his mouth were, ‘Not me, D ad.’ The others denied it as well. Of course, they knew that one of them must have done it. But, Ari, being the youngest and smallest of the three, just couldn’t find the nerve to tell the truth. It wasn’t that he was a bad kid. Lying was not normal for him. But the look on his dad’s face that evening sent a chill up and down his spine and somehow he couldn’t bring himself to tell his father the truth. The father had a way about him that made Ari afraid. But he loved his father for it too, because it gave Ari his limits, his boundaries of what he could and could not do. Ari wanted to please him, of course. Maybe that’s why he held back the truth that day. He was afraid of disappointing the one man he looked up. Without saying a word, the father disappeared for only minutes and came back with a piece of paper and a pencil. He was so determined to find the culprit! ‘I want each of you to write exactly what you see on the patio floor.’ Ari was not a stupid kid, and when his turn came, he desperately wrote the words differently. So when his dad compared the handwriting, he still couldn’t tell which one of them did it. Frustrated, he stood a step above them and looked down at his three small kids. ‘I’m going to give you one more chance to confess.’ He continued to stand there for a few minutes, but to Ari it seemed like an eternity. Not surprisingly, neither his brother nor his sister spoke up. Why should they? He was the one who did it. Should he say something? Is it too la te? He’ll be mad! So again, panicky, Ari held his tongue. ‘Well, if someone had come forward when I asked, there would have been no chastisement.’ Oh, no! I’ve lost my chance! But now it’s too late. Stupid, stupid, stupid! I should have confessed! Now I’m gonna get it! Ari thought to himself. Father took them all in the house as tears welled up in Ari’s eyes. ‘Since none of you seemed to have done it, then you all get a spanking.’ What?! Still, Ari stood there and said nothing. The last thing he wanted was a spanking! ‘I did it,’ someone said and Ari was pretty sure it wasn’t him. He looked around to see his sister come forward. Huh? She did it? No, she didn’t, because he did. Why was she taking the blame for something he d id? Feeling guilty, yet still scared to confess, Ari stood there knowing his sister was going to get spanked for something he did. And he let it happen. He didn’t speak
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up. They refrained from talking about the day for many years. Not until they were all older and Ari knew it was safe to finally tell his father it was really him. By that time, he had already figured out why his sister had taken the rap for it. She had become his protector, his worrywart, his best friend. And because 45 of that, she would have rather taken the pain herself than see him suffer. They joke about it now – all of them, including his sister. And as he always felt guilty because of it, that was the last time he let anyone take the blame for him. When he thinks back on that day, he knows he learned the value of family ties, of a sister who would do anything for him. And he’s glad to be ab le to say he 50 knows that now he would reciprocate her actions for her. 58
(A Lesson Learned by Lynn Lombard, Source Unknown http://www.inspirationalstories.com/5/524.html) Adaped from English Form 4 KBSM : Pelangi Publication
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Credit will be given for use of own words but care must be taken not to change the srcinal meaning. Your summary must be in continuous writing form (not in note form) use material from lines 2 to 44 not be longer than 130 words, including the 10 words given below
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gathered the three children into their enclosed patio all stared down at the floor containing the art of a child’s handwriting in chalk father asked with a loud voice The others denied it as well Ari couldn’t find the nerve to tell the truth the father came back with a piece of paper and a pencil He was so determined to find the culprit Ari wrote the words differently his dad compared the handwriting, he still couldn’t tell which one of them did it Frustrated, he stood a step above them and looked down at his three small kids neither his brother nor his sister spoke up (Father took them all in the house and) wanted to give them a spank his sister come forward his sister was going to get spanked
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Passage 7: THE LESSONS Read the following passage about The Lessons. Then answer questions 1 – 5. Question 6 is summary. 1
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Credit will be given for use of own words but care must be taken not to change the srcinal meaning. Your summary must be in continuous writing form (not in note form) use material from lines 8 to the end not be longer than 130 words, including the 10 words given below
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Passage 8: THE FIRE Read the following passage about The Fire. Then answer questions 1 – 5. Question 6 is summary. 1
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Credit will be given for use of own words but care must be taken not to change the srcinal meaning. Your summary must be in continuous writing form (not in note form)
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Passage 9: RAHIM AND SALIM Read the following passage about Rahim and Salim. Then answer questions 1 – 5. Question 6 is summary. 1
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the relationship soon after Rahim’s and Salim’s father’s death and the relationshi p after Rahim’s son got injured
Credit will be given for use of own words but care must be taken not to change the srcinal meaning. Your summary must be in continuous writing form (not in note form) use material from lines 7 to 50 not be longer than 130 words, including the 10 words given below
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“Hurry up children, your Ong Ngoai must be hungry by now,” Mother called out from the front room of our family home in TayNinh, Vietnam. She had carefully placed steamed rice, fried chicken and vegetables in each compartment of the lunch rack, all set to be delivered to Ong Ngoai, our grandfather. My father, a staff sergeant with the Philippine Air Force, worked as a surgical technician for eight years and had married 5 Mother, a local girl. Because of his work, he was away from home for weeks at a time. Mother was a housewife who took great care of Trang and me. She gave us the daily noon time job of taking lunch to our grandfather, who lived alone in a small rented apartment. “Here, send the food to Ong Ngoai quickly. Be careful not to spill the food,” she 10 added. I was six years old. Trang, my sister, who was eight years older, was helping me get dressed. I was excited at the thought of getting out of the house. Mother, ever-concerned, recited her list of reminders as she always did every day: “Stay on the side of the road. Look both ways before crossing the street. Don’t 15 stop to talk to strangers. Come back straight to the house after you have delivered the food. Do not stop anywhere along the way. Run along now.” So hand in hand, with Trang carrying the lunch rack, we scurried one block down the road to our grandfather’s place. He was a retired judge and I was happy to see him every day. It was he who gave me my first cac (the equivalent of cents at that 20 time). It was 1974 and war was spreading all over Vietnam, but in TayNinh life was peaceful and continued as usual. However, on that particular day, as Trang and I made our way to grandfather’s place, whizz! “Duck!” Trang cried as we walked along. “Stay low and take cover!” 25 Ratatatatat! Somewhere in the mountains just outside town, Vietcong soldiers fired their flying bullets down our path. I bent so low that I actually dragged my face along the ground as I ran. As we squatted at the side of the road, covering our heads, I started to worry about Ong Ngoai. He liked his food served hot. If we did not get there on time and his 30 lunch turned cold - oh, I did not like the thought of it! I refused to let this outbreak of shooting slow us down. “Let’s just run for it!” I said. Trang suggested duckwalking down the road but it was not a good idea. After a few paces, my short little legs began cramping. We tried all the manoeuvres that could save our lives but nothing seemed to work. We were ready to sit things out until the 35 shooting was over. Then I suddenly remembered. If we ever came under fire, our elders had told us time after time, we should run from side to side. “Bullets trav el in a straight line,” they said. “Run in a zigzag.” So taking a deep breath, we set off again, running wildly back and forth across the road. After what seemed forever, the shooting ceased. “God Almighty be praised, 40 the food is still warm,” was all I could say after we arrived at our grandfather’s apartment, completely unaware of the danger from which we had just escaped. Five cents awaited each of us! As an adult, I sometimes look back on that eventful day. I now know what my young mind could not understand then: it is impossible to go through life without 45 hardship and struggles being thrown at you. They come when you least think they would, like when you are happily walking down a street and bullets start flying at you. You can try to avoid them all you want, but as long as you are alive, they will keep coming, from all directions. Sure, you might get wounded, but you just have to bandage your wounds, pick yourself up and start walking again. 50 (Adapted from Reader’s Digest,May 2006) 70
Based on the passage about Being Safe, answer all questions. You are advised to answer them in the order set. 1. a) From paragraph 1, what did the writer and her sister have to do every day at noon? ___________________________________________________________ (1 mark) (b) From paragraph 3, what made the writer feel happy and enthusiastic? ___________________________________________________________ (1 mark) 2. From paragraph 5, (a) which word has the same meaning as the word “hurried’? _____________________________________________________________ (1 mark) (b) how did the writer feel when she met her grandfather each day? _____________________________________________________________ (1 mark) 3. From paragraph 6, (a) how was life in TayNinh different from the rest of Vietnam? _____________________________________________________________ (1 mark) (b) what do you think had made the “whizz” sound? _____________________________________________________________ (1 mark) 4. (a) From paragraph 11, what did the grandfather give the writeras a reward? _____________________________________________________________ (1 mark) (b) From paragraph 12, what does the word “they” in line 34 refer to? _____________________________________________________________ (1 mark) 5. Do you agree with the writer that when we are facing problems, we need topick ourselves up and walk again? Give a reason for your answer. ____________________________________________________________ (2 marks) 6. Based on the passage given, write a summary on: the advice the writer’s mother gave her and her sister a nd what the writer and her sister did during the shooting
Credit will be given for use of srcinal meaning.
own words but care must be
taken not to change the
Your summary must be in continuous writing form (not in note form) use material from lines 10 to 44 not be longer than 130 words , including the 10 words
Begin your summary as follows: The writer’s mother reminded her and her siste
given below
r not to…
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Passage 10: Be Safe Suggested Answers: 1. (a) take lunch to their grandfather (who lived alone in a rented apartment). (b) The thought of getting out of the house 2. (a) scurried (b) (She was) happy to see him. 3. (a) Life was peaceful (and continued as usual). (b) (The Vietcong soldiers’) bullets 4. (a) Five cents (b) Hardship and struggles 5. Accept any reasonable answer. Aw ard eith er 0 mark or 2 marks. If answer is only ‘Yes’ or ‘No’, award 0 mark Sample answer: Yes. (0 mark) No. (0 mark) Yes, we should be brave to face problems. (2marks) No, we are still young. (2 marks)
Summary The suggested points are: (You are awarded a maximum of 10 marks= 10 points) 1. spill the food 2. stay on the side of the road 3. look both ways before crossing the street. 4. do not stop to talk to strangers. 5. come back straight to the house after they have delivered the food. 6. do not stop anywhere along the way. 7. ducked down / stayed low and took cover 8. bent so low (that she actually dragged her face along the ground) as she ran 9. squatted at the side of the road 10. covered their heads 11. duck-walked down the road 12. tried all the manoeuvres that could save their lives 13. ran from side to side /ran in a zigzag / ran wildly back and forth across the road
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NOVEL - DEAR MR. KILMER The question on the novel focuses on several literary elements: 1. 2. 3. 4. 5.
Plot Characterisation Theme Moral values/Lessons Setting
1. SYNOPSIS
During winter in 1917, Richard went hunting with his family. He had EMPATHY for people and animals. He did not kill the buck. He always helped Angie at home. He liked writing poems.
After listening to Mr. Kilmer’s poem, he wanted to be a poet. He sent a letter to Mr. Kilmer. He always
Read and wrote poetry secretly.
Mr. Kilmer replied his letter. Richard was happy. Kilmer motivated Richard to write poetry. In the letters, they shared their interest in poetry. Later, Richard became close with Hannah. Richard
Met Hannah’s family. They were Germans. They were good people. Everybody thought that Richard supported Germany. Richard was sad when Mr. Kilmer was killed in the war.
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2. CHARACTERS
Richard Knight
Hannah Schermer
Joyce Kilmer
CHARACTERS Richard’s
Mrs. Hansen
brother Gus Knight
Richard’s father Pa
Richard’s sister
Angie
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Exercise 2.1
Match the charcters with the descriptions given.
CHARACTERS
1. RICHARD KNIGHT
2. HANNAH SCHERMER
JOYCE KILMER
PA (RICHARD’S FATHER)
ANGIE KNIGHT
DESCRIPTIONS
A. She began taking over the role of Ma when her mother died. She quit school after her eighth grade and became fulltime farm woman’s life.
B. He is a famous poet who works forThe New York Times. He volunteered to fight in the war. But later, he was killed.
C. He always helped his father at the farm. He also helped his sister in the kitchen. During his free time, he loved writing poems.
D. She was an English teacher. She was strict but cared a lot about what she was teaching.
E. Although her parents were from Germany, she was born in the United States. She was pretty, blue-eyed girl with blonde hair. Most boys loved to look at her
GUS KNIGHT
F. He was a reserved man. He spent most of his time at the farm. He lost had his wife and his elder brother in a war.
MRS HANSEN
G. He was a mediocre student, who was more concerned with sports and socialising. He disliked poems. He joined the Army after he graduated.
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3. CHARACTERISTICS BRAVE He signed a sympathy card for Hannah although his classmates did not want to do so.
RESPONSIBLE He always helped his Pa doing farm work. He also helped his sister at home doing the chores.
SOFT HEARTED
Richard Knight
Richard went hunting with his father and his brother, Gus. He purposely missed shooting the buck. He disliked killing animals.
DETERMINED He loved to write poems. His friends teased him as being a sissy but he did not care. He still continued writing until his poem was published in The Turtle Lake Weekly.
Exercise 3.1
Write a short paragraph about Richard Knight based on the qualities given above.
Richard Knight was a ________________________________________________________
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MATURE She declined the part of Lady Liberty although she won the essay writing competition because she did not want to cause more trouble.
SENSITIVE
Hannah Schermer
She cried in the hallway when someone wrote “Dirty Huns” all over her book cover. BEAUTIFUL She was pretty with blue eyes and blonde hair.
INTELLIGENT She took part in the essay competition and wrote an essay about the war. She won the first place.
Exercise 3.2
Match the textual evidences with the suitable adjectives.
Textual Evidence
Adjectives
She was sad when people called her
Mature
“Dirty Hun”. She won the essay writing contest and
Beautiful
was chosen to play “Lady Liberty”. She did not want to cause more trouble. She decided not to play “Lady
Intelligent
Liberty”. Richard thought that she was a pretty girl.
Sensitive
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Exercise 3.3
Write a short paragraph about Hannah Schermer based on the qualities given above.
Hannah Schermer was a _____________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________
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4. PLOT
2
Important events/incidents
Richard wrote a letter to Mr Kilmer. He got Mr. Kilmer’s address from The New York Times.
1 Richard went hunting with his father and his brother, Gus. He purposely missed shooting the buck. He disliked killing animals.
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4 Richard received a letter from Mr. Kilmer. He told the news to his family during dinner. Everyone was not excited about it.
Richard signed the sympathy card for Hannah Schermer although his classmates refused to do so.
6 Richard received the news that Mr. Kilmer was killed in the war.
5 Richard was chosen to be Doughboy but he turned it down. He wanted to show his support to Hannah Schermer.
7 Richard wrote a poem as a tribute for the late Mr. Kilmer. He sent to The Turtle Lake Weekly after Hannah had encouraged him.
8 Richard’s father read his poem in The Turtle Lake Weekly. Pa started telling Richard about his brother, Roland who died in the war.
9 Richard’s poems became a regular feature in The Turtle Lake Weekly.
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Exercise 4.1 - Write down a number in each of the spaces provided to show the correct sequence of events/incidents.
Events/Incidents
Sequence
Richard’s poems became a regular feature in the Turtle Lake Weekly. Richard received the news of Mr. Kilmer’s death. Richard purposely missed shooting the buck when he went hunting with his father and brother. Richard told his family about Mr. Kilmer’s letter during dinner. Richard wrote a letter to Mr Kilmer after listening to Mrs. Hansen reading Kilmer’s poem on Trees. Richard signed a sympathy card for Hannah Schermer although his friends refused to do so. Richard wrote a poem as a tribute for the late Mr. Kilmer and sent it to the local newspaper. Richard’s father read his poem and told Richard about his brother who had died in the war. Richard was chosen to be Doughboy but he turned it down.
5. THEMES 1. Appreciating nature. 2. Appreciating our loved ones. 3. Being brave 4. Being helpful 5. Being responsible. 6. Being honest. 7. Being sensitive towards others’ feelings. 8. Never give up to achieve your dreams. 9. Determination 10. Friendship
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6. MORAL VALUES 1. We must appreciate nature.
2. We must be kind towards animals. 3. We must be honest about what we like and dislike doing. 4. We should be aware of what is happening in real life. 5. We should be sensitive to what is happening around us. 6. We should appreciate people who motivate us. 7. We must be hard working and determined to achieve our dreams. 8. We must be brave. 9. We must not easily give up. 10. We must not have prejudice towards others.
Exercise 6.1 Match the events in A and the moral values in B.
Character
Events 1. Richard hoped to be a poet someday. He wrote letters to Mr. Kilmer and they shared their poems. 2. Knight’s family went hunting. He did not like to kill animals. Richard purposely misfired the buck.
RICHARD KNIGHT
Moral values A. We must appreciate nature. We must be kind towards animals.
B. We must have humanity towards others. We must be kind to others when they face difficulties.
3. Richard received the news that Mr. Kilmer had been killed in the war. He knew the reality of warfare.
C. We must be honest about what we like and dislike doing.
4. Richard signed the sympathy card for Hannah’s family but his f riends
D. We should be aware of what is
did not.
happening in real life.
5. Richard told his family that he wrote poetry.
E. We must be determined to achieve our dreams.
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7. GUIDELINES ON ANSWERING THE NOVEL QUESTION.
1. Be familiar with the elements of the novel. e.g. characters, plot, themes, moral values.
2. Read and understand the question carefully. Underline the keywords.
3. Plan you answer.
Write an introductory paragraph which includes keywords from the question. Provide 2 to 3 content points together with suitable textual evidences from the novel. Give relevant personal response for each point Write a suitable conclusion.
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8.
MARKING METHOD 1. For this question, marks are awarded as follows: Content Language TOTAL
10 marks 5 marks ________ 15 marks
9. ANALYSIS OF PAST YEARS’ QUESTIONS
YEAR
2011
QUESTION Which part of the story do you like most?
LITERARY ELEMENT Plot
Give reasons for your choice with close reference to the text.
2012
Based on the novel you have studied, write about an event
Plot
that makes you angry. With close reference to the text, give reasons why the event makes you feel this way.
2013
Write about an important decision made by one of the
Character
characters. With close reference to the text, explain how it affects the other character(s).
2014
“One has to struggle to improve one’s life.” With close
Theme
reference to the text, how far is it true?”
2015
Suggest one character in the novel you have read who you think is a good role model for teenagers.
Character
Briefly describe the character and give reasons for your choice with close reference to the text.
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Practice 1 Write about an event where courage is shown by the main character in the novel. Explain. A. Fill in the blanks with suitable answers provided in the box. Richard Knight stands up correspondence
Hannah Schermer poems objection
family support
Based on the novel Dear Mr.Kilmer, the main character is _____________________. The difficulties faced by him is his friendship with ____________________________, a German girl, is put to a test when World War 1 breaks out. Richard
realises
that
discrimination
against
Hannah’s
family
is
wrong
and
________________ for her. His classmates and his ______________ are angry with him. His ______________________ with Mr Kilmer continues and draws comfort, encouragement and ____________for him. Richard’s family disapproves him to write _____________ . He is afraid of people knowing that he writes poems and hides them from others. He realises that he has to be true to himself and tells his family about his enjoyment of writing poems despite his family’s __________________. In short, it is clear that Richard has to face some challenges and he faces them courageously. C.
Rewrite the completed essay in paragraphs.
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Practice 2 With reference to the novel that you have studied, write about a good family relationship that is shown in the novel.
A. Number the sentences according to a logical sequence. Sentences
Sequence
In conclusion, a good family relationship is very important in our life. After school, he worked on the farm to help his father. Based on the novel Dear Mr. Kilmer, a good family relationship is important in life. We must love our family. Even though he felt uncomfortable with his father, he tried to tell his family about his love to write poems. Love is something important for a good family relationship. Richard was responsible and hard working. His sister also sacrificed for the family after the death of their mother. When Richard told his family about writing poetry, his father disapproved it. However, his sister, Angie tried to show her support for him. B. Rewrite the sentences in paragraphs. __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________
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Practice 3 Choose one character in the novel who you think can set a good example for teenagers. Briefly describe the character and give reasons for your choice with close reference to the text.
A. Write a short paragraph using the notes given. a) Richard Knight - 15 years old – lived - family – Pa – brother – sister - mother passed away - Turtle Lake - loved poetry. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________
b) Richard - brave – signed – sympathy card – Hannah Schermer – classmates – did not . He – fought – Harry – Abner _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________
c) Richard – soft hearted – hunting – not – shoot – buck – loves - animals ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________
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B. Fill in the blanks with the correct answers on your own.
The
novel
that
I
have
read
is
“ _______________________________”
by
_______________________ . One character in the novel whom I think can set a good example for future generation is ___________________________________.
_______________________
is the main character in this novel. He lived with
his________________, his ________________, Gus, and his_______________, Angie. His mother ____________________ when he was seven years old. They lived in Turtle Lake, Iowa. He loved writing ___________________.
First of all, I think Richard is a good example for teenagers because he is ______________. After the Schermer’s tavern was vandalized, he signed the ________________ card. His classmates _________________ to do so . Later, he fought with_____________ and ______________. He was a ________ person.
Another reason I choose Richard is because he is __________________. When he went hunting with his father and brother,he purposely________________ the buck. Not only that, he always helps ______________ in the kitchen. He was a _____________person.
To sum up, _____________________is a good example for teenagers to follow. He taught us to be_______________ and _________________ .
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C. Rewrite the response in paragraphs. __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________
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Practice 4 With close reference to the text, write about a character who has to struggle to achieve his/her dream. A. Fill in the blanks with suitable words or phrases. The novel that I have read is “Dear Mr. Kilmer” written by Anne Shcraff. Introduction
One character in the novel who ________________________________ is ___________________________. Richard Knight is the main character in this novel. He lived with his __________,
his
brother,
______________and
his
sister,
_____________. They lived in Turtle Lake, Iowa. He loved writing poetry.
Content
First of all, Richard wanted to be a poet. He liked to _____________ secretly because he was afraid to be called a sissy.
Textual Evidence
When Mrs. Hansen read the poem by Mr. Kilmer, he was excited and motivated. He wrote a letter to Mr. Kilmer and they became friends. He sent his poems to Mr. Kilmer. Richard had to struggle to tell his family about his dream to be a _______________. When he shared his dream with his family, Pa only told him to focus on schoolwork and chores. He was not excited but Richard did not give up. Only Mrs. Hansen supported him to become a poet. _____________________ encouraged Richard to share his poem with his classmates. At first, he was afraid. However, he struggled to overcome his fear and shared his poem with his class. He ignored people’s remark about being sissy. When ________________ was killed in the war, Richard was very sad. He wrote a poem in memory of him. It became a success for him when the poem was published in the Turtle Lake Weekly.
Conclusion
I like this character because he _______________________________ and succeeded.
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B.
Rewrite the essay in paragraphs
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Practice 5 Write about an important decision made by one of the characters in the novel. With close reference to the text, explain how it affects the character. A. Complete the blanks with suitable phrases given in the box. began to appreciate read Richard’s poem showed no interest talked to him about his brother wrote a memorial poem In Dear Mr Kilmer written by Anne Schraff, Richard Knight made an important decision in his life. He ____________________________ for Mr.Kilmer after his death. The poem was published in the Turtle Lake Weekly. It brought a change in his life . It was after Pa ___________________________. The line “a precious little world has died” had an emotional impact for Pa. He started to open up to Richard and _______________________________________, Roland. Pa felt the same way like Richard when Roland died in a war many years ago. Before this, Pa ________________________________ in Richard’s poetry and took it as a passing phase. Richard’s decision made Pa finally understood the reason why h e wrote poems. He ________________________ Richard’s poems and their relationship started to become closer. Pa even gave suggestions or corrections to Richard after reading his poems. In short, Richard’s decision affected his father greatly and led them to a closer parentchild relationship.
Rewrite the completed pa ragraphs.
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Practice 6 Based on the n ovel you have learnt, suggest a character who shows determination in achieving success in his/her life. A. Fill in the blanks with suitable words/phrases found in the notes given. In the novel “_______________________________” by_________________ a character who shows determination in his life is Richard Knight. His determination to achieve his dream has changed his entire life. The first example is when Mrs Hansen asked her students to sign thesympathy card. Richard was determined to ________________________ He wanted to show his sympathy towards __________________. However, his classmates ______________________. Richard took all the trouble to write something on Hannah’s card and signed it himself. He thought that being mean to Hannah ________________________. Furthermore, Richard was also determined to pursue his dreams to become a_______________. At the beginning, Richard had to write poems secretly. Then, he told his family that ___________ _______________. Richard taught me that we must _________________________ As a conclusion, Richard Knight is a good example of a character who shows determination in achieving success in his life.
B. Rewrite the paragraphs.
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DIRECTED WRITING – TYPES OF FORMAT 1. Formal Letter
2. Informal Letter
19, Jalan
9, Jalan Wangi, Taman Bunga Melur, 08000 Sungai Petani, Kedah. __________________________________ _______________________
27, Lorong Usaha, Taman Bunga Raya, 08000 Sungai Petani, Kedah. 8/6/2016
The Principal, SMK Maju, 08000 Sungai Petani, Kedah.
27 SEPTEMBER 2016
Dear Sir, A Complaint about the Condition at the School Library I am writing to complain about ………………………..………………. ................... ……………………………………………………………………… 2. The first complaint is …………………………………………………………………...
Dear Rahman, How are you? I hope you are fine. …………..…………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………………… …………….................................................……………………….… ………………………………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………..
………………………………………………………………………
3. Next,……………………………………………………………………………………………. …………………………………………………………………. Thank you.
……………………………………………………………………………………. ………………………………………………………………….……………………………… …………………………………..
I have to go now. Thank you.
Yours faithfully,
Azlan
Yours sincerely,
Elena
(AZLAN BIN MANSOR) Head Prefect of SMK Maju
3. Speech/Talk Good morning to the Principal, teachers and friends. I, __________, the Head Prefect/ ___________ would like to talk about “The Benefits of the National
4. Article (2 types) Type 1
How to Cope with Stress By: Nur Azlina Azman
Service Programme”.
Students face a lot of stress nowadays. We There are many benefits of the National Service Programme. The first benefit is…………………………………….………………. ………………………………………………. The second benefit is ………….………... …………………………………………………………………….
have to learn how to cope with stress.
………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………….
Finally, ………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………….
Well, that’s all for now. Thank you for listening.
Type 1 To : The Principal of SMK Sri Pelangi From : The Head Librarian of SMK Sri Pelangi Title : The Condition of the School Library
I am the Head Librarian of the school. I want to report on the condition of the school library. The first problem is ………………….....
There are many ways on how to cope with stress. The first way is to …………..
The final problem is ………………….. The second way is to………...............
I hope that you will take immediate action. Finally, ………………….…………..…
……………………………………………….. Furthermore, ……………………………….
5. Report (2 types)
Reported by, I hope you will try to follow my advice. ______________________________________ Type 2 How to Cope with Stress
Linda (Linda binti Haziq) Head Librarian of SMK Sri Pelangi _______________________________________ Type 2
Students face a lot of stress nowadays. We have to learn how to cope with stress. There are many ways on how to cope with stress. The first way is to …………
Canteen Day 2015 Our school has just carried out a canteen day successfully. It was held with the aim of ………
The second way is to………............
The event was a great success and we hope it could be made an annual affair.
Finally, …………………………………
By,
I hope you will try to follow my advice.
(Linda binti Haziq) Head Librarian of SMK Sri Pelangi
Linda
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INFORMAL LETTER (SPM 2010 and 2012) Sample question
Explanation
has been chosen to take part in the National Service Programme and is worried about going. You have decided to write a letter to tell him/her about the benefits of this programme and to encourage your cousin to go.
The SPM 2010 question
Your cousin
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------_________________ Format: ___(Your address)__ _________________ F1= Address + Date 24 November 2010 F2 = Dear Amir
Dear Amir,
[salin isu dari How are you and everyone at home doing? I hope everyone is fine and has Aunt soalan & guna Kamariah recovered from her flu? semua isi yang Well, you have been chosen to take part in the National Service Programme and diberi. that you are worried about going; why is this so, Amir? Let me assure you that joining this programme will be verybeneficial for you. Now, I will tell you the benefits of….………………………….. Bye and take care. Yours sincerely,
Ganti nama; I, You] F3 = Closure (Yours sincerely,)
Johari FORMAL LETTER (SPM 2003 and 2013) Sample question
Explanation
Your class would like to make a trip after the end-of-year examination. You are the class monitor. You get a message from your teacher, who is away from school, asking you to discuss with the students where they would like to go. Write a formal letter to your teacher stating the choice made by your class and give reasons for the choice.
The SPM 2003 question
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------_____________________ ____(Your address)____ _____________________
Format:
___________________________________________________________________
+ Recipient’s Address + Date
______________________ __(Recipient’s address)__ ______________________
F1= Your Address
14 November 2003
Dear Sir, End of the Year Trip for 5Sc1
F2 = Title 96
Our class would like to make a trip after the end-of-year examination. After I discussed with the students where they would like to go, I am writing you this letter to state the choice made by our class and give reasons for the choice. 2. We choose to go ____ because of several reasons. Firstly, _________________ ____________________________________________________________________
[salin isu dari soalan & guna semua isi yang diberi. Ganti nama; I, our]
3. Secondly, ________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ 4. Lastly, ___________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 5.
I hope you can consider and approve our choice of the trip.
Yours faithfully,
F3 = Closure (Yours faithfully,)
Atikah (ATIKAH BINTI JOHAN) Class monitor of 5Sc1 SMK Tanjong Melor SPEECH/TALK (SPM 2007 and 2011) Sample question
Explanation
Yo u have been asked by your teacher to give a talk on a reference book that is useful The SPM 2007 for secondary students. Yo u have decided to give a talk about a science book. question
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Good morning teachers and students. This morning, I would like to give a talk about one Science reference book that I have found to be very useful in m y studies.
Format: F1 = Good morning, F2 = Topic of talk (Content: guna The book I have chosen is “Science Made Simple” .............................................. semua isi diberi. …………………………………………………………………………………………………… Perhatikan cara ganti nama diubah.) Thank you. F3 = Thank you
(Source: PROGRAM SKOR – A SPM 2014 – BAHASA INGGERIS 1119/1 and 119/2)
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ARTICLE (SPM 2008) Sample question and Sample format
Explanation
You recently attended a lea dership cam p organised by your school. At the camp, one of your frie nds was chosen as the best group leader. Yo u have been asked to write an article about your friend for your school magazine.
The SPM 2008 question
She’s the Best Last week, together with 95 other students of our school, I attended the Youth Leadership Camp organised by our school. At this camp, the participants were divided into eight groups, each under a Group Leader. On the last day the best Group leader was announced. The members of my group were thrilled whenwe heard that it was our group leader, ..…............................................................................. …..................................... …………........................................
Format: F1 = Title (untuk Content : guna semua isi diberi. Perhatikan cara ganti nama diubah)
I/We hope that all students of this school will take Zainab Zainol as their role model and be a leader one day.
Give an ending (F2)
Written by, Roshidah Ahmad.
F3 = name of writer
REPORT (SPM 2009) Sample question and Sample format
Explanation
Many of your schoolmates are not interested in sports. Yo u have carried out a survey The SPM 2009 on the reasons for their lack of interest. Based on your findings, write a report to the question principal regarding the matter. In your report, give reasons for the lack of interest in sports and provide suggestions to overcome the problems. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------To: En. Rashid Rahman, Principal, SMKMaju Jaya Format: Title : Reasons for the Lack of Interest in Sports Among Students F1 = To…… A survey was carried out among 200 students of our school, SMK Maju Jaya, on F2 = Title the reasons for their lack of interest in sports. There are some suggestions on how we can overcome the problems. …………………………………………………………………………… Prepared by: Aznil Karim (if there is a post, state the post)
[guna semua isi diberi. Perhatikan cara ganti nama diubah] F3 = Name of writer State the post too. (post = jawatan)
(Source: PROGRAM SKOR – A SPM 2014 – BAHASA INGGERIS 1119/1 and 119/2)
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COMMON SENTENCE STRUCTURES IN DIRECTED WRITING GIVING REASONS 1. The first reason/suggestion/way is… + idea 2. The (noun e.g. project /campaign/ show) + is/was organised to… GIVING SUGGESTIONS/ADVICE 1. 2. 3. 4. 5.
The (noun e.g. teacher/ principal/ parents) must/should + verb … Firstly, we must/should… + idea You must think of your… Teenagers must think of their … Gerund + can + verb … (Cycling can burn our fat/ Watching television can widen knowledge) 6. Do not … MAKING STATEMENTS 1. There is /are… + number/s 2. The project/camp is + adjective 3. Students are/were … 4. It is cheaper/ better/ more economical/ more acceptable to… 5. We can see … + noun (e.g. rubbish everywhere/ many colourful murals) 6. Abstract noun (eg. Vandalism/Happiness is …) DESCRIBING NOUN (EVENTS/ INCIDENTS/ ACITIVITIES) 1. The show/project/exhibition is/was… 2. The ………………. is/was (negative e.g. crowded/noisy) 3. Our (special event e.g. Sports Day/ Teacher’s Day) is/was… 4. The accident/landslide/flash flood is/was… DESCRIBING NOUNS (PEO PLE) 1. The students/teachers/residents are + adjective 2. The students/teachers + verb… 3. The (people outside school e.g. beggars/strangers) are/were… 4. The (people in neighbourhood e.g. residents/ headman) is/was/are/were… DESCRIBING NOUNS (PLACES/BUILDINGS) 1. The beach/island/resort is/was… 2. The canteen/library/public toilet is/was… 3. My housing area / hometown is/was …
(Source: ZANURIN BIN MOHAMAD SAFAR, Master Teacher of English, SMK Kulim, Kedah 2014)
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A. EXPANDING THE CONTENT POINTS 1. Event Sample sentences
Content point Date
i) The date was 2 March 2016. ii) It was held from 2 March to 4 March 2016. iii) The competition was on 2 March 2016.
Duration
i) The duration of the camp was 3 days. ii) The camp was held for 3 days. iii) It was a two-day event.
Venue
i) The venue was Kem Teguh Jaya. ii) It was held at Kem Teguh Jaya. iii) The seminar took place at Seri Mutiara Hall.
Date / Duration / Venue
i) The camp was held at Kem Teguh Jaya for 3 days starting from 2 to 4 March 2016. ii) The 3-day camp was held from 2 to 4 March 2016 at Kem Teguh Jaya.
Participants
i) There were many participants in the camp. ii) The participants were Form 5 students. iii) 150 Form 5 students participated in this camp. iv) All of the club members were involved in this competition. v) 100 Form 5 students joined this seminar.
2. SPM 2007: A talk on a reference book Content point
Sample sentences
Title: Science Made Simple
i) The title of the book is “Science Made Simple”. ii) The book is titled “Science Made Simple”.
Author: Sharifah Shazana
i) The author is Sharifah Shazana. ii) It is written by Sharifah Shazana.
Publisher: Bunga Publications
i) The publisher is Bunga Publications. ii) It is published by Bunga Publications.
Reasons why the book is useful
i) Here are some reasons why the book is useful. ii) There are many reasons why the book is useful. iii) The book is useful for many reasons.
attractive presentation
i) The first reason is its attractive presentation. ii) Firstly, it has attractive presentation.
clear explanations
i) Secondly, it has clear explanations. ii) The explanations are clear.
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3. SPM 2009: Lack of interest in sports Content point Reasons
Sample sentences i) Here are some reasons for the lack of interest in sports. ii) There are many reasons for the lack of interest in sports.
Students
i) The first reason is students’ attitude.
- attitude
ii) Firstly, it is the attitude of the students.
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i) They lack of time for sports.
lack of time
ii) Students have no time for sports.
Parents -
Tuition classes
i) Another reason is that parents send their children to tuition classes. ii) Parents want their children to go to tuition classes.
Suggestions
i) Here are some suggestions to overcome the problems. ii) These are some suggestions to overcome the problems.
Stress importance of
i) Teachers should stress the importance of sports to
sports Improve facilities
students. i) The school has to improve the facilities. ii) Improving the facilities may increase students’ interest.
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B. ELABORATING THE CONTENT POINTS
1. SPM 2012: How to spend money wisely
shopping list
compare prices
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necessary items
cheaper brands
Content point
Detail
Firstly, you must have a shopping list.
Write down all the things you want to buy.
You should put the necessary items
Buy the necessary items first.
on top of the list. Next, you must compare the prices.
You should buy cheaper brands.
2. SPM 2015: Farewell speech
Achievements -
100% passes English Language
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Innovative Teacher Award
Contributions to the school -
Head of English Panel
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Teacher advisor – debating team
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Organiser – charity event
Content point One of his achievements is 100% passes in the English Language. He also won the Innovative Teacher Award. He is the Head of the English Panel.
Detail All his students passed their English Language SPM. He created new and fun ways of learning.
He is also the teacher advisor for the debating team. He is one of the organisers of many charity events.
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3. SPM 2013: Park in poor condition
not enough facilities -
rubbish everywhere -
no restaurants
not enough dustbins
grass not cut -
snakes Content point
There are not enough facilities in the park.
Detail The park only has two toilets and a few benches.
There are no restaurants too.
Visitors have to bring their own food.
I can see rubbish everywhere.
The park does not have enough dustbins.
The grass is not cut.
Snakes may hide in the grass.
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4. Terengganu Trial SPM 2015: Camping
Activities -
camping at a secluded river site
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nature walks in the jungle
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night animal spotting
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water activities
problems - punctuality -
tight schedule
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rain
Content point
Detail
We had our camping at a secluded river site. We also had nature walks in the jungle.
Another activity was ………………………… …………………………………………………. We also had water activities.
The first problem we faced was punctuality.
The second problem was ………………….. …………………………………………………. The third problem was ……………………… …………………………………………………
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C. TASK FOR EXPANDING AND ELABORATING THE CONTENT POINTS
1. Career seminar (I)
date and venue organiser
Content point Detail Content point Detail
2. Career seminar (II)
benefits - career choices - qualification requirement - application process
Content point Detail Content point Detail Content point Detail
3. Cultural week
activities - cultural performance - exhibition booths
Content point Detail Content point Detail
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4. Healthy lifestyle
balanced diet exercise
enough sleep
Content point Detail Content point Detail Content point Detail 5. Social media
advantages - share information - connect with friends
disadvantages - less time to study - lack of privacy
Content point Detail Content point Detail Content point Detail Content point Detail 6. Global warming
plant trees proper disposal of waste
recycling
Content point Detail Content point Detail Content point Detail
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INFORMAL LETTER Informal Letter SAMPLE 1: BENEFITS OF NATIONAL SERVICE
Your cousin has been chosen to take part in the National Service Programme and is worried about going. You have decided to write aletter to tell him/her about the benefits of this programme and to encourage your cousin to go. Use all the notes below to write your letter.
Discipline Learn survival skills Learn leadership skills Exciting activities See different parts of Malaysia Be independent Gain new experiences Teamwork Strengthen love for the country Keep fit and healthy (Give another 2 benefits)
When writing the letter, you should remember to:
Lay out your letter correctly (address, greeting, closing) Use all the notes given Give another 2 benefits of National Service Programme
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23, Kg Jagung, 06700 Pendang, Kedah Darulaman. 17/3/2016 Dear Azlina, How are you and everyone at home doing? I hope everyone is fine. I heard that you have been chosen to join the National Service Programme and are worried about going. So, I have decided to write this letter to tell you about the benefits of this programme to encourage you to go. Firstly, when you join this programme, you will train yourself to bedisciplined. You can also learn survival skills like making fire and cooking in the jungle. You will also learn leadership skills because you may be a leader in some of the activities. Secondly, you should join National Service Programme because there are many exciting activities like flying fox and abseiling. In addition, you get to see different parts of Malaysia because they will bring you to visit places during weekends. Another benefit is you will learn to be independent as you need to do things on your own like washing your clothes. Furthermore, you will gain new experiences when you try out new things like kayaking and community service. When you work in groups, you will also learn teamwork. Moreover, you can strengthen your love for the country when you listen to talks about Malaysia. Besides, you can also keep fit and healthy because you will have to do some exercises every morning. Lastly, you should join this programme because you can develop good habits like sleeping and getting up early. You will also make new friends because the participants are from many schools. I’ll stop here for now. Azlina, I really encourage you to join the National Service and enjoy yourself there.
Your cousin,
Hazmiza
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Informal Letter PRACTICE 1: BENEFITS OF CO-CURRICULAR ACTIVITIES Your sister is studying in a residential school in another state. She has written to you, telling you that she is unhappy as her school wants all students to be active in co -curricular activities.
Write a letter to your sister to encourage her to be active in co-curricular activities, telling her the benefits of participating in co-curricular activities.
You should include the following points in yourletter to your sister.
Interesting ways of exercising
Good form of relaxation
Develop socialising skills
Develop leadership qualities
Encourage sportsmanship
Help to get scholarship
Make more friends
Help tap potential
Instil good time management skills
When writing the letter, you should remember to:
Lay out your letter correctly (address, greeting, closing) Use all the notes given Give another 2 benefits of being active in co -curricular activities
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Informal Letter SAMPLE 2: HOW T O OVERCOME TEENAGE BLUES Your young cousin, who is studying at a residential school, is going through a period of teenage blues. She is feeling depressed and stressed about a lot of things. Write a letter advising her on how to overcome teenage blues.
Use the notes below to write your letter.
Problems Examination pressure
Physical appearance
Ways to Overcome
focus in class
make notes
study group
Weight problem: - balanced diet, exercise, join sports and games
Pimples, body odour: - personal hygiene
Peer pressure
Poor time management
talk to school counsellor
talk to your friends
(Suggest TWO ways to overcome poor time management)
When writing the letter, you should remember to:
Lay out your letter correctly (address, greeting, closing) Use all the notes given Suggest TWO ways to overcome poor time management
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3, Taman Delima, Jalan Delima 1, 06500 Alor Setar, Kedah Darulaman. 17/2/2016 Dear Suzie,
How are you doing over there? I heard that you like your new school but you said that you had been going through a period of teenage blues. I’m going to give you some advice on how to overcome this teenage blues.
Firstly, to overcome examination pressure you must focus in class and pay attention to your teachers. Don’t forget to make notes on the topics. You sh ould also form a study group with your friends.
Secondly, you are worried about your weight. Just remember to take a well-balanced diet and do some exercises. You can join sports activities or games. If you are worried about pimples and body odour, you need to take care of your personal hygiene.
Thirdly, I heard you are having a peer pressure problem. If you have this problem, talk to the school counsellor or talk to your friends. You should also do activities that you like to make you feel relaxed. Besides, practising yoga too can help you to overcome teenage blues.
Lastly, I heard that you are having a poor time management. To improve time management, you should try to make a to-do-list so that you can know which tasks are important and urgent. You can keep a timetable so that you have time to both study and play.
I hope my advice will help you to overcome your teenage blues. Being a teenager is the best years in your life. I will be waiting to hear news from you. Bye.
Your cousin,
Jessie
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Informal Letter PRACTICE 2: HOW TO IMPROVE ACADEMIC PERFORMANCE
Your younger sister has written to you seeking advice on how to improve her academic performance. She is having problems with all the new and challenging elective subjects that she is taking in form four. Write a letter to your sister, offering suggestions on ways to improve her academic performance.
Use the following notes to write your letter.
attend class regularly -
pay attention in class
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make notes to remember points
plan your studies -
list down topics that need more practices
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identify topics tested in examinations
create a study timetable -
divide study into sessions
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manage time efficiently
study in a group
(Give 2 benefits of studying in a group)
When writing the letter, you should remember to:
lay out your letter correctly (address, greeting, closing)
use all the notes given
Give TWO benefits of studying in a g roup
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FORMAL LETTER Formal Letter SAMPLE 1: LETTER OF PERMISSION You are the secretary of your school’s Nature Club. Your club has decided to visit the Ayer Keroh Forest Reserve during the next holidays. You intend to spend two days and one night on the hills. Write a letter of permission to the principal to ask for permission to visit the forest reserve.
AYER KEROH FOREST RESERVE NATURE THE ULTIMATE BEAUTY Enjoy the beauty of nature Close to nature Appreciating God’s gift
Here we organise:
Jungle trekking – watch the exotic flora and fauna Arts and Crafts workshops – drawing and painting Nature treasure hunt - afternoon
In your letter, you should include:
date of your visit
objectives of your visit
number of members going on the trip
duration of your stay
accommodation
types of activities you wish to participate
benefits you gain from the trip
When writing your letter, you should remember to:
lay out the letter correctly use all the information given end your letter appropriately suggest TWO ADVANTAGES of the visit
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The Nature Club, SMK Sungai Long, Jalan Laksamana, 75150 Melaka. ____________________________________________________________________________ The Principal, SMK Sungai Long, Jalan Laksamana, 75150 Melaka.
17 MAY 2016
Dear Sir, Trip to the Ayer Keroh Forest Reserve I am the secretary the Nature Club. The club has decided to visit the Ayer Keroh Forest Reserve during the next holidays. On behalf of the club, I am writing this letter to seek permission to visit Ayer Keroh Forest Reserve. We intend to spend two days and one night there (C4). 2. We are organising the trip from the 10th to 13th August 2016 (C1). About 30 members (C3) and 3 teacher advisors, Puan Norlela , Puan Ratna and Mr Han , will be going o n this trip. The objectives of the trip are to allow members to enjoy the beauty of nature and be close to nature.(C2) We will be camping at the campsites.(C5) 3. We have planned som e interesting and inform ative a ctivities during the trip. The activities are jungle trekking, arts and crafts workshops, nature treasure hunt, slide shows and bird watching. Jungle trekking will help members to see the exotic flora and fauna (C6). Members will be drawing and painting the beautiful nature during the arts and crafts workshops (C7). The treasure hunt activity will be held in the afternoon on the second day(C8). There will be slide shows on nature (C9) and also a bird watching activity, which will be fun and bring a new experience (C10) 4. This trip will help to build close ties (C11) and instil values such as teamwork, responsible and love for nature (C12). 5.
We hope you will give us the permission to go on this trip.
Thank you. Yours faithfully, Melissa
(MELISSA BT AHMED) Secretary, The Nature Club SMK Sungai Long, Jalan Laksamana, 75150 Melaka
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Formal Letter PRACTICE 1 - LETTER OF PERMISSION TO TAMAN NEGARA
You are the secretary of your school’s Nature Club. Your club has decided to visit the National Park or Taman Negara, in the state of Pahang during the next holidays. You intend to spend three days and two nights. Write a letter of permission to the principal to ask for permission to visit the biggest nature park in Malaysia
DETAILS OF THE TRIP
Date of your visit Ojectives – love and appreciate the nature
Number of members going on the trip
Duration of your stay
Where you will be staying
Activities you plan to carry out: DAY 1
- arrive at the Kuala Tembeling Jetty - board a boat to Kuala Tahan
DAY 2 - hike up Bukit Terasek- Bird’s eye view of Taman Negara - visit the Lata Bekeloh waterfall DAY 3 - observing the wildlife and bird watching (Suggest TWO BENEFITS of the trip)
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SPEECH Speech SAMPLE 1: ROAD SAFETY
Your school is organising a road safety campaign. As one of the committee members of the campaign, you have been asked to give a talk to the students about road safety tips.
ROAD SAFETY TIPS
Pedestrians -
pedestrian crossing
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look before crossing
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use overhead bridge
School bus -
wait until the bus has stopped
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queue to board the bus
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no standing on the steps
Motorcyclists or cyclists -
focus on the road
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obey all signs and traffic lights
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ride or cycle single file
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make sure vehicle in good condition
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suggest 2 OTHER SAFETY TIPS for motorcyclists or cyclists
When writing your talk you must:
Use an appropriate greeting
Use all the notes given
State the purpose of your talk
Suggest 2 OTHER SAFETY TIPS for motorcyclists or cyclists End your talk appropriately
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Good afternoon to the principal, teachers and students. Our school is organising a road safety campaign. As one of the committee members of the road safety campaign, I would like to share some road safety tips to all of you.
Firstly, pedestrians should use a pedestrian crossing (C1) when crossing the road. You must look before crossing the road (C2). You should use the overhead bridge (C3) when there is one. Next, when you are taking the school bus, you must remember towait until the bus stop moving to get on or off the bus (C4). You should queue to board the bus (C5). You also have to sit properly on the bus. Remember, you must not stand on the steps (C6) of the bus. Lastly, as a motorcyclist or cyclist, you must focus on the road (C7). You must obey all signs and the traffic rules (C8). You must ride or cycle in a single file (C9) . Apart from that, you must make sure that your bicycle or motorcycle is in a good condition (C10) with working brakes and lights. You must also wear protective gear (C11) like helmet. You should wear bright or light-coloured clothing (C12).
These are some road safety tips that you should practise. With that, I end my talk. Thank you.
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Speech PRACTICE 1: ENVIRONMENTAL AWARENESS CAMPAIGN IN SCHOOL
As an active member of the Environmental Awareness Club in your school, you have noticed the depressing state of your school surroundings. You have decided to give a speech in conjunction with the Environmental Awareness Campaign. You will inform the students of the various activities which will be carried out during the campaign
DETAILS OF THE CAMPAIGN
Duration Objectives – conducive learning environment Activities
DAY
ACTIVITIES
Every Monday to Friday
Collect aluminium cans, bottles, plastic containers Recycling bins – canteen Recycling centre
Cleanliness programme
Clear clogged drains
Every Tuesday
Pick up rubbish around the school compound Herbal Garden Activity -Grow vegetables
Every Wednesday
Every Thursday
Plant Flowers
SUGGEST TWO ACTIVITIES
When writing your talk you must: use an appropriate greeting and closing state the purpose of the talk use all the notes given suggest TWO ACTIVITIES carried out on Thursdays
end your talk appropriately
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A very ..................................................., to the principal, teachers and my wonderful ................................... As a member of the Environment Awareness Club in our school, I had noticed the depressing state of our school surroundings. I am giving a speech in conjunction with the Environment Awareness Campaign. I will talk on the various activities which will be carried out during the campaign.
This campaign will be carried from the 1st June to 31st August 2016. The objective of the campaign is to create a ............................................................................................................ There will be a host of interesting activities to achieve the objective. Every Monday to Friday, all the students need to ....................................................................................................................... ............................................... at put them in the ............................................................ at the ...................................................................................................................................................
Apart from that, every Thursday, there will be a................................................................ Students must ................................................................................ and ......................................... around the school compound. On Wednesdays, there will be ....................................................... .................................................................................................................................................
Every Thursday, there will be .......................................................................................... This campaign will benefit everyone in the school as we will have ................................................ ..........................................................................................................................................
I hope everyone will give their support. Thank you
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Speech PRACTICE 2: HOW TO BOOST SELF-ESTEEM As a member of the Peer Guidance Club of your school, you have been asked to give a speech during the school assembly on how to boost self-esteem.
Accept praises Give yourself credit on a task well done
List your good qualities
Do not worry about making mistakes
Identify your weaknesses to improve yourself
Boost your own morale
Set small goals
Focus on your strengths and use them
Exercise and eat balanced meals
Read books that give you inspiration (suggest TWO MORE ways to boost your self - esteem)
When writing your talk you must: •
• •
use an appropriate greeting State the purpose of your talk use all the notes given suggest TWO MORE WAYS to the environment
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ARTICLE Article SAMPLE 1: REGULATIONS OF STAYING IN THE HOSTEL There is a new hostel in your school. As the chairperson of the hostel committee, you have been asked by the warden to write an article explaining the hostel regulations clearly to the students staying in the hostel. Using ALL the notes given below, write out the article.
Obey the schedule
Permission to go out
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Time for getting up, meals, study and lights out
- Emergency case
Cleanliness -
Follow the duty roster
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Wash own dishes after meals
Take care of hostel property -
Participate in school activities
Do not vandalise
- Keep hostel and grounds in good condition Importance of following the hostel regulations
(GIVE 2 REASONS WHY IT IS IMPORTANT TO FOLLO W HOSTEL REGULATIONS) When writing the article, you should remember to: -
Give a suitable title for your article.
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Give your name as the writer.
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Use all the points given.
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Give 2 reasons why it is important to follo w hostel regulations.
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Hostel Regulations in SMK Dato’ Syed Klasik There is a new hostel in our school. If you are staying in the hostel, you have to follow the regulations set. The first regulation that you need to follow is to obey the schedule (C1). You must obey time for getting up, meals, study and lights out (C2). The second regulation is to ask for the warden’s permission to go out (C3) from the warden when there is an emergency (C4) or when you participate in school activities (C5) such as campings, competitions or trips. The next regulation is you need to maintain thecleanliness (C6) of the hostel. You must follow the duty roster (C7) to keep the hostel clean. You have to wash your own dishes after meals (C8). Your rooms must always be clean. The fourth regulation is totake care of hostel property (C9). Do not vandalise (C10). We must keep the hostel and grounds in good condition (C11). It is important to follow hostel regulations. We will not be punished (C12) Besides we will be safe (C13).
By, Alawiyah Jamulidin
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Article PRACTICE 1: SCHOOL RULES FOR FORM 1 STUDENTS
Your school is welcoming new Form 1 students at the beginning of the year. As the chairperson of the welcoming committee, you have been asked by your teacher towrite an article explaining the school rules to the Form 1 students. Using ALL the notes given below, write out the article.
Obey the school hours - Time to arrive and leave the school - Co-curricular activities
Permission to go out from the school during schooling hours - Emergency case -
Participate in camps, competitions or trips
Take care of school property -
Keep the school compound in good condition
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Do not draw graffiti on the wall
Personal hygiene -
Keep fingernails short
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Wear clean white shoes and school uniform (GIVE TWO OTHER SCHOOL RULES)
When writing the article, you should remember to: -
Give a suitable title for your article
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Give your name as the writer
-
Use all the points
-
Add TWO other school rules
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Article SAMPLE 2: HOW TO OVERCOME STRESS
Stress among students is on the rise in your school. As the president of Counselling Club, you have been asked by your teacher advisor to write an article for your club bulletin explaining how to overcome stress. Using ALL the notes given below, write out the article.
SUGGESTIONS ON OVERCOMING STRESS Plan a timetable
Exercise regularly
Spend time on healthy hobbies
Have a balanced diet
Get enough rest and sleep
Listen to relaxing songs
Go for a vacation
Talk to someone who can be trusted
Build a network of supportive friends
Watch favourite movies or TV programmes
Meditation or yoga Give 2 reasons why it is important to overcome stress
When writing the article, you should remember to: -
Give a suitable title for your article
-
Give your name as the writer
-
Use all the notes given
-
Give 2 reasons why it is important to overcome stress
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How to Overcome Stress By: Julie Chan Stress among students is on the rise in our school. There are many ways to overcome stress. First, we should plan a timetable (C1) for studying, tuition and school activities. Next, we should exercise regularly (C2), at least three times a week. We can play games like badminton, football or go jogging. Next, we can spend some time on healthy hobbies (C3) like watching comedies, reading and playing a musical instrument. Another way to overcome stress is to have a balanced diet (C4). Eating a lot of fruits and vegetables help to overcome stress. In addition, we should also get enough rest and have at least 8 hours of sleep (C5) a day at night. Furthermore, we can overcome stress by listening to relaxing songs (C6) which can relax our mind. Besides, we can go for a vacation (C7) with our loved ones during school holidays. Apart from that, we can overcome stress by talking to someone who can be trusted (C8) like our school counsellors or teachers. Watching favourite movies or TV programmes (C9) can help to overcome stress. Meditation and yoga (C10) can also help in overcoming stress. In addition, we should build a network of supportive friends (C11) . We need friends who can help us. Overcoming stress is important. It helps us to maintain our mental health (C11) and helps us to stay focused in life (C12). I sincerely hope you find the suggestions in this article helpful to overcome stress.
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Article PRACTICE 2: TIME MANAGEMENT A lot of students in your school do not know how to manage their time, causing them to do last minute work all the time. As the president of Counselling Club, you have been asked by your teacher advisor to write an article for your club bulletin on time management. Using ALL the notes given below, write out the article. HOW TO MANAGE TIME WISELY
Make a “to do list”
Plan a timetable
Set priorities right
Pay attention in class
Try to complete homework during school hours
Make time for rest and relaxation
Set a realistic target for examination Join study groups Seek help from parents, teachers and friends Read inspirational books. Give 2 reasons why it is important to have good time management
When writing the article, you should remember to: -
Give a suitable title for your article
-
Give your name as the writer
-
Use all the notes given
-
Give two reasons why it is important to have good time management
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Article SAMPLE 3: DENGUE FEVER The rise of dengue fever cases among students has become a worrying issue in your school. As the president of the Green Club in your school, you have been asked by your school teacher to write an article for your school magazine on dengue fever. Using ALL the notes given below, write out the article.
What is dengue fever? -
a viral disease
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transmitted by Aedes mosquitoes
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breed in stagnant water
What are the symptoms? -
sudden fever
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acute pains in the joints and muscles
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rashes
How to prevent dengue fever -
Get rid of all potential breeding grounds of Aedes mosquitoes
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Stop throwing rubbish into the drain
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‘Gotong-royong’ with neighbours
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Give cooperation to the fogging operation
Why we need to prevent dengue fever -
Give 2 reasons why we need to prevent dengue fever
When writing the article, you should remember to: -
Give a suitable title for your article
-
Give your name as the writer
-
Use all the notes given
-
Give TWO reasons why it is important to prevent dengue fever
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Dengue Fever By: Jega A/L Subramaniam The rise of dengue fever cases among students has become a worrying issue in our school. Hence, it is important for us to know about dengue fever, the symptoms of dengue fever and how to prevent dengue fever.
What is dengue fever? It is a viral disease (C1) which is transmitted by Aedes mosquitoes (C2). Aedes mosquitoes breed in stagnant water (C3). The symptoms of a person who gets dengue fever are sudden fever (C4), acute pains in the joints and muscles (C5), as well as rashes (C6). If the person has these symptoms, he or she must get medical treatment immediately.
As the saying goes, “Prevention is better than cure.” How can we prevent dengue fever? Firstly, we should get rid of all potential breeding grounds of Aedes mosquitoes (C7) including the old tyres, cans, vases and flower pots. Secondly, we should stop throwing rubbish into the drain (C8) which can clog the drains.
Furthermore, we can do ‘Gotong-royong’ with our neighbours (C9) to clean our neighbourhood from time to time. In addition, we should also give cooperation to the fogging operation (C10) to kill Aedes mosquitoes done by the personnel from the Ministry of Health.
Preventing dengue fever is important to ensure the well-being of everyone in the neighbourhood (C11). Dengue fever can cause death if it is not properly treated (C12) . Hence, we should do our best to prevent dengue in our neighbourhood.
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Article PRACTICE 3: 3R PROGRAMME IN SCHOOL In conjunction with the International Earth Day, the Environmental Club in your school is launching the 3R programme. Most of your friends are unaware of 3R programme. You have decided to write an article for your school magazine on 3R programme. Using ALL the notes given below, write out the article.
Reduce the use of polystyrene containers Reduce the use of plastic bags Reduce the use of water & electricity
3R
Recycling bins at Recycling Corner Blue bin – papers Green bin – glasses Yellow bin – plastics
Reuse plastic bottles Reuse papers Reuse old tyres
Based on the diagram above, write out the article: What is 3R? What can you reduce? How to recycle? What products can you reuse? How to promote the 3R programme? - Suggest 2 ways to promote the 3R programme
When writing the article, you should remember to: - Give a suitable title for your article - Give your name as the writer - Use all the notes given - Suggest TWO ways to promote the 3R programme
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REPORT
Report SAMPLE 1: COMPLAINT REPORT TO THE PRINCIPAL You are a secondary school student. You are disappointed by the conditions as well as the services of your school canteen. Write a report to inform your principalabout the unsatisfactory conditions. Use the notes given -
Quality of service
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Not properly attired Dirty aprons
Cleanliness
Food not covered
Plates and mugs not cleaned properly
Leftover food on tables
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Rude workers
Clogged drain
Food
expensive No variety
(STATE TWO MORE PROBLEMS ON CLEANLINESS) When writing your report, you should remember to:
Address it to the Principal Give a title Use all the notes given Add TWO MORE problems of cleanliness End your report appropriately
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To
: The Principal of SMK Jaya Bestari
ADDRESS TO THE PRINCIPAL
From : Siti Nadrah bt Aminudin (4 Science 1) TITLE
Unsatisfactory Conditions at the School Canteen I, Siti Nadrah bt Aminudin of 4 Science 1, am disappointed with the conditions as well as the services of our school canteen. I am writing this report to the principal to point out some of the unsatisfactory conditions at the school canteen. The first problem is the workers in the school canteen are rude (C1). They shout loudly at the students. Besides, the workers are not properly attired (C2). They wear dirty aprons (C3). The second problem is the cleanliness at the school canteen. It is disappointing/ devastating/bad. The food sold is not covered (C4). Plates and mugs are not cleaned properly (C5). Apart from that, there are leftover food on the tables (C6). The clogged drains (C7) give out bad smell. Another problem is regarding the foo d (C8). It is expensive (C9). In addition, there is no variety (C10). The next problem is the floor is dirty and greasy. (C11) The dustbin is full of rubbish (C12).
measures.
I hope the school principal will look into these problems and take effective
Reported by,
(Siti Nadrah bt Aminudin) 4 Science 1 SMK Jaya Bestari Kuala Pilah Negeri Sembilan
SENDER’S NAME
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Report PRACTICE 1: COMPLAINT REPORT ON THE UNSATISFACTORY CONDITIONS AT THE SCHOOL LIBRARY Recently, as a member of the Reading Club of your school, you have carried a survey on why students do not like to spend their free time in the library. As the member of the school’s Reading Club, you have been asked to write a report to the Principal to inform about the findings of the survey and to suggest solutions to overcome the problems. Include the following points in your report: COMPLAINT
SUGGESTIONS
Outdated books and in poor conditions
School library is underfund
materials Get sponsorships
Insufficient chairs and tables
Add new chairs
Less electronic resources
Purchase more computers
Library hours too short
Extend the library hours
(ADD ONE MORE COMPLAINT)
Purchase new books and other reading
(GIVE ONE SUGGESTION)
When writing your report, you should remember to:
address it to the Principal give a title use all the notes given give ONE complaint and ONE suggestion end your report appropriately
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Report SAMPLE 2: REPORT ON SCHOOL TRIP
The members of the Geographical Society of your school visited a rubber estate plantation to see how rubber tapping is done and rubber is processed. As the Editor of the school newsletter, you are required to write a report about the visit.
DETAILS OF THE VISIT
Date
Numbers of students on the trip
Name the rubber estate
Objectives: o
Introduce to participants on how rubber is processed
o
Instil a sense of appreciation of the hard work of a rubber tapper
What you did at the estate: o
Welcomed by the plantation manager
o
Tour into the rubber estate –given safety gears
o
o
Demonstration on: Video of the factory machines how tapping is done
How latex is processed – graded and packed
o
Video of the factory machines
o
Tour along the gallery walkway in the plantation area
Benefit
- Great experience
(GIVE ONE BENEFIT OF JOINING THE TRIP)
When writing your report, you should remember to:
Give a title State the writer’s name
Use all the notes given Give ONE BENEFIT you gained during the trip
End your report appropriately
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A Visit to a Sunshine Rubber Estate On 1
st
May 2016, (C1) the members of the Geographical Society visited a rubber
estate plantation known as Sunshine Rubber Estate (C3). Thirty five members (C2) participated on this trip. The objectives of the trip were to inform participants on how rubber is processed (C4) (and / as well as) appreciating the hard work of a rubber tapper (C5). We arrived at our (destination/ the plantation) at 9 a.m. We were welcomed by the plantation manager who was Mr Edward Lim.He took us to the cafeteria and we were offered some light refreshments like drinks and snacks. The first a ctiv ity was a tour into the rubber estate (C6). Before the tour we were
given safety gears. At the big rubber estate, there was a demonstration on how tapping is done (C7) and how latex is processed (C8). Apart from that how the product is graded and packed. The following activity
, there was a demonstration on was watching a video of the
factory machines (C9). In the last a ctiv ity we had a tour along the gallery walkway in the plantation area (C10 ). It was an interesting activity.
This trip gave a lot of benefits to the members. Besides gaining hands-on experience (11), the members learnt to appreciate the nature and hard work of a rubber tapper (C12). It was an educational trip. Reported by,
Alison Nair (Alison Nair) Secretary of the Geography Society SMK Bandar Seri Andalas
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Report PRACTICE 2 : REPORT ON A FIELD T RIP TO A RECYCLING CENTRE It is the Environment Month in your school. In conjunction with the Environment Month, one of the activities is to visit the Recycling Centre. You, as one of the participants have been requested to write a report to the teacher-in-charge of the visit.
DETAILS OF THE VISIT
Date Numbers of students on the trip Name the recycling centre Objectives: -
Widen students’ knowledge on recycling
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Encourage students to play their role
What you did at the centre? -
Welcomed by the recycling centre manager
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Videos on benefits of recycling and the effects of landfill
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Quizzes on recycling
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Tour along the gallery walkway in the factory
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Visit to Education room – see recycled display items
Benefits (suggest TWO BENEFITS you gained during the visit)
When writing your report, you should remember to:
address to the teacher-in-charge state the writer’s name
use all the notes given
suggest TWO BENEFITS you gained during the visit
end your report appropriately
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Report SAMPLE 3: REPORT PRACTICE ON SCHOOL EVENT In conjunction with the Health Week in your school, the Counselling Department organised a few activities during the event. You, as the Editor of the School Magazine have been asked to write a report for the school magazine. In your report, include the following information:
DETAILS OF EVENT Date Organiser Theme Purpose of the Health Week:
The importance of positive mental health and well-being among students
Facilitators Activities:
Briefing by facilitators
Fun fitness session
Health Workshops
Blood Donation
Dental Check up
(Suggest two other activities)
When writing your report, you should remember to:
give a title state the writer’s name use all the notes given suggest ANOTHER TWO activities End your report appropriately
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Health Week at SMK Bandar Vistana
In conjunction with the Health Week, the Counselling Department (C2) organised a few interesting and informative activities for all the students.
This event was held from the 25 May 2016 to 27 May 2016 (C1). The theme was Healthy Living Week (C3). The purpose of this event was to raise awareness on the importance of positive mental health and well-being among students (C4). During this event, there was a group of facilitators from the hospital and private medical centres in the town. (C5)
On the first day, the students were given a short briefing on the activities which would be carried out throughout the week by the facilitators (C6). The next activity was the fun fitness session (C7) conducted by an experience instructor from a well-known fitness centre. On the second day, there were Health Workshops (C8) on healthy eating habits and healthy lifestyles. During the workshops there were some interactive games like quizzes and crossword puzzles (C11). Apart from that, there was a blood donation campaign (C9). It was a successful campaign. On the last day, there was a dental check-up (C10). Students were also shown a demonstration on oral hygiene. (C12) This event was a successful event as everyone gave their great support. It was also an interesting and an informative event.
Reported by,
Alison Nair (Alison Nair) Secretary of the Counselling Department SMK Bandar Seri Andalas
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Report PRACTICE 3 : REPORT ON A BOOK FAIR During the semester holiday, the Prefect Board organised a trip to a book fair organised by a prestigious bookstore in the country. As a librarian, you joined the trip. You have been asked to write a report about the trip for the Library Newsletter.
DETAILS OF THE TRIP
Date Number of librarians participated
Venue
Organiser
Objectives: - to instil love for reading - to enable participants to get books at cheaper prices
Activities: - Author signing – Mohamad Khalid (Lat cartoonist) - Public speaking on ‘Reading’ - Workshops on creating fun reading activities by Longman Publication - Competition – story-telling (suggest ONE OTHER ACTIVITY) Benefits: o big discounts on various types of books (suggest ANOTHER BENEFIT gained)
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Report PRACTICE 4: REPORT ON A YOUTH CAMP You represented your school in a youth camp. Write a report on the camp to be given to your teacher advisor of Interact Club based on the notes you have made.
DETAILS OF THE YOUTH CAMP
DATE VENUE NUMBER O F P ARTICIPANTS OBJECTIVES : (i) Future leaders (ii) Harmonious nation ACTIVITIES (i) (ii) (iii)
Ice breaking – likes and dislikes Talk on career guidance – scholarship and job opportunities Question and answer session – issues related to youths
(iv)
Cultural night
BENEFITS (state TWO BENEFITS of joining the Youth Camp) When writing the report, you should remember to : - address the report to your teacher advisor - provide a title - include your name as the writer - use all the notes given - suggest TWO BENEFITS of joining the Youth Camp
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To
:...................................................................................................
From : .................................................................................................. Title
: ..................................................................................................
On .................................................., a youth camp was held at ........................................ There were ...................... participants who attended the camp. The objectives of the camp were to mould ..................................................... and to create............................................................. There were a lot of interesting activities during the camp. Everyone had fun during the activities. The first activity was.............................. activity on ...................................................... ....................................................... This was followed by the next activity which was ................. ...................................................................................................................................................... After lunch, there was ....................................................................................... on ........... ....................................................................................................................................................... The last activity was a ......................................................... on .................................................... ....................................................................................................................................................... It was a successful camp. Everyone went back with a big smile on their faces.
Prepared by,
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SENTENCE CONSTRUCTION PRACTICE Topics: 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6.
Self Family People Activities Events Incidents
7. Places 8. Senses 9. Feelings
Instruction: Write three possible sentences to convey the idea given (in Malay). If you do not have the exact vocabulary for any of the words, you may slightly change the idea given. Example: Idea given: Keputusan ujian saya menghampakan. a. My test result is disappointing. b. I failed in my test. I was sad. c. My test result was very bad.
PRACTICE 1: SELF 1.1 Saya gemar makan makanan segera. Best option: _______________________________________________________ Other possible options: a. _______________________________________________________________ b. _______________________________________________________________ c. _______________________________________________________________
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1.2 Hobi saya adalah bermain permainan video dan mendengar muzik . Best option: _______________________________________________________ Other possible options: a. ______________________________________________________________ b. ______________________________________________________________ c. ______________________________________________________________
1.3 Cita-cita saya adalah untuk menjadi seorang doktor . Best option: _______________________________________________________ Other possible options: a. ______________________________________________________________ b. ______________________________________________________________ c. ______________________________________________________________
1.4 Saya lemah dalam Matematik. Best option: _______________________________________________________ Other possible options: a. _______________________________________________________________ b. _______________________________________________________________ c. _______________________________________________________________
1.5 Harga beg itu berpatutan. Best option: _______________________________________________________ Other possible options: a. _______________________________________________________________ b. _______________________________________________________________ c. _______________________________________________________________
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PRACTICE 2: FAMILY Instruction: Complete each of the sentences based on the starting line given or/and write three different possible options to complete the sentence. 2.1 I love my mother. She is … a. _________________________________________________________________ b. _________________________________________________________________ c. _________________________________________________________________
2.2 My father is very rich. He … a. _________________________________________________________________ b. _________________________________________________________________ c. _________________________________________________________________
2.3 My brother is very handsome. a. ________________________________________________________________ b. ________________________________________________________________ c. ________________________________________________________________
2.4 My grandparents … a. _______________________________________________________________ b. _______________________________________________________________ c. _______________________________________________________________
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PRACTICE 3: PEOPLE (e.g. Friends, Teachers, Idols) Instruction: Write three possible sentences to convey the idea given (in Malay). If you do not have the exact vocabulary for any of the words, you may change the idea given. 3.1 Saya amat meminati guru saya. Best option: ______________________________________________________ Other possible options: a. ______________________________________________________________ b. ______________________________________________________________ c. ______________________________________________________________
Instruction: Complete each of the sentences based on the starting line given. 3.2 I have a lot of friends. They are … a. _______________________________________________________________ b. _______________________________________________________________ c. _______________________________________________________________
3.3 I like Justin Bieber so much. I like him because … a. ______________________________________________________________ b. ______________________________________________________________ c. ______________________________________________________________
3.4 Mr. Fazlee is my English teacher. He is … a. ______________________________________________________________ b. ______________________________________________________________ c. ______________________________________________________________
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3.5 Nurul is my girlfriend. She is … a. _____________________________________________________________ b. _____________________________________________________________ c. _____________________________________________________________
PRACTICE 4: ACTIVITIES (e.g. shopping, camping) Instruction: Complete each of the sentences based on the starting line given or/and write three different possible options to complete the sentence.
4.1 Last weekend, my friends and I went to a shopping complex … a. _______________________________________________________________ b. _______________________________________________________________ c. _______________________________________________________________
4.2 I attended my friend’s open house during the last Hari Raya. a. ______________________________________________________________ b. ______________________________________________________________ c. ______________________________________________________________
4.3 Last week, my friends and I joined the school’s language camp … a. ______________________________________________________________ b. ______________________________________________________________ c. ______________________________________________________________
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4.5 I like to play football. I … a. _____________________________________________________________ b. _____________________________________________________________ c. _____________________________________________________________
PRACTICE 5: EVENTS Instruction: Complete each of the sentences based on the starting line given or/and write three different possible options to complete the sentence. 5.1 Yesterday, my school celebrated Teacher’s Day. a. ______________________________________________________________ b. ______________________________________________________________ c. ______________________________________________________________
5.2 It was my birthday. a. ______________________________________________________________ b. ______________________________________________________________ c. ______________________________________________________________
5.3 Our school had just organised the annual Sports Day. a. ______________________________________________________________ b. ______________________________________________________________ c. ______________________________________________________________
5.4 It was my first date. I … a. _____________________________________________________________ b. _____________________________________________________________ c. _____________________________________________________________
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5.5 It was school holidays. a. _____________________________________________________________ b. _____________________________________________________________ c. _____________________________________________________________
PRACTICE 6: INCIDENTS Instruction: Complete each of the sentences based on the starting line given or/and write three different possible options to complete the sentence.
6.1 Alif fell off from his bicycle. He … a. ________________________________________________________________ b. ________________________________________________________________ c. ________________________________________________________________
6.2 Fadhli did not go to school yesterday because … a. ________________________________________________________________ b. ________________________________________________________________ c. ________________________________________________________________
6.3 A fire broke out in my village earlier today. a. _______________________________________________________________ b. _______________________________________________________________ c. _______________________________________________________________
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6.5 It was raining heavily outside. I … a. ______________________________________________________________ b. ______________________________________________________________ c. ______________________________________________________________
PRACTICE 7: PLACES Instruction: Complete each of the sentences based on the starting line given. 7.1 I want to go to Korea because … a. _______________________________________________________________ b. _______________________________________________________________ c. _______________________________________________________________
7.2 Last night, I went to a night market. It was … a. _______________________________________________________________ b. _______________________________________________________________ c. _______________________________________________________________
7.3 My school … a. _______________________________________________________________ b. _______________________________________________________________ c. _______________________________________________________________
7.4 My house … a. ______________________________________________________________ b. ______________________________________________________________ c. ______________________________________________________________
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7.5 My village is … a. ______________________________________________________________ b. ______________________________________________________________ c. ______________________________________________________________
PRACTICE 8: SENSES Instruction: Complete each of the sentences based on the starting line given or/and write three different possible options to complete the sentence. 8.1 The fan is not working. I … a. ________________________________________________________________ b. ________________________________________________________________ c. ________________________________________________________________
8.2 We were on top of Mount Kinabalu. We saw ... a. _______________________________________________________________ b. _______________________________________________________________ c. _______________________________________________________________
8.3 Last school holidays, I went to Pulau Langkawi. a. _______________________________________________________________ b. _______________________________________________________________ c. _______________________________________________________________
8.4 We went to Junjong waterfall for a picnic. a. _______________________________________________________________ b. _______________________________________________________________ c. _______________________________________________________________
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8.5 The weather is really hot. a. ______________________________________________________________ b. ______________________________________________________________ c. ______________________________________________________________
PRACTICE 9: FEELINGS Instruction: Complete each of the sentences based on the starting line given or/and write three different possible options to complete the sentence.
9.1 I lost my cell phone. I … a. ________________________________________________________________ b. ________________________________________________________________ c. ________________________________________________________________
9.2 My best friend moved to a new school. I felt … a. _______________________________________________________________ b. _______________________________________________________________ c. _______________________________________________________________
9.3 My beloved cat, Cici went missing. I … a. _______________________________________________________________ b. _______________________________________________________________ c. _______________________________________________________________
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9.5 I scored straight A’s in my SPM examination. a. _______________________________________________________________ b. _______________________________________________________________ c. _______________________________________________________________
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PARAGRAPH WRITING PRACTICE Topics: 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6.
Self Family People Activities Events Incidents
7. Places 8. Senses 9. Feelings
PRACTICE 1: SELF Task 1: Write about your favourite hobby. Your paragraph should be at least 30 words . Start your paragraph with: “My favourite hobby is…” _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________
Task 2: Things I like about my life (SPM 2000). Your paragraph should be at least 50 words . Start your paragraph with: “The first thing I like about my life is…” _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________
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Task 3: My dream car (SPM 1999). Your paragraph should be at least70 words . Start your paragraph with: “My dream car is…” _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________
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PRACTICE 2: FAMILY Task 1: Large families make happy families (SPM 2001). Your paragraph should be at least 30 wo rds. Start your paragraph with: “I have a really big family.” _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ Task 2: Should parents give children more freedom? (SPM 2012) Your paragraph should be at least 50 words.
Start your paragraph with: “Parents should/should not give children more freedom.” _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ Task 3: Family is more important than friends. Do you agree? Your paragraph should be at least 70 words.
Start your paragraph with: “Yes, I agree that family is more important than friends.” (or the counter argument) _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________
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PRACTICE 3: PEOPLE Task 1: A famous person you admire (SPM 2011). Your paragraph should be at least 30 words . Start your paragraph with: “My idol is…” _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ Task 2: Friends (SPM 2003). Your paragraph should be at least50 word s . Start your paragraph with: “Friends are important.” _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ Task 3: My perfect future husband or wife (SPM 2008). Your paragraph should be at least 70 words . Start your paragraph with: “My perfect future husband/wife...” _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________
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PRACTICE 4: ACTIVITIES Task 1: Imagine you are moving to a new house. Describe the last day in your old house (SPM 1997). Your paragraph should be at least 30 words . Start your paragraph with: “I looked at my old house and…” _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ Task 2: Describe an outing with your friends (SPM 2012). Your paragraph should be at least 50 words . Start your paragraph with: “My friends and I went to…” _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ Task 3: Describe how you spent a free day when the weather was bad (SPM 2001). Your paragraph should be at least 70 words . Start your paragraph with: “It was raining really heavily…” _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________
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PRACTICE 5: EVENTS Task 1: Write about a language camp that you joined last month. Your paragraph should be at least 30 words . Start your paragraph with: “I recently joined a language camp.” _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ Task 2: Describe a festival celebrated in your area (SPM 2004). Your paragraph should be at least 50 words.
Start your paragraph with: “We celebrated…” _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ Task 3: Describe an important family celebration and how you felt about it (SPM 2014). Your paragraph should be at least 70 words. Start your paragraph with: “It was my grandmother’s birthday.” _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________
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PRACTICE 6: INCIDENTS Task 1: You just had a fight with your sister. Write about what happened. Your paragraph should be at least 30 words . Start your paragraph with: “I had a fight with my sister.” _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ Task 2: Write a story that ends with: “If only I had listened to his/her advice” (SPM 2003). Your paragraph should be at least 50 words . Start your paragraph with: “I had an accident when…” _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ Task 3: Write a story with the title: An Unexpected Visitor (SPM 2006). Your paragraph should be at least 70 words .
Start your paragraph with: “I was waiting for the bus when…” _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________
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PRACTICE 7: PLACES Task 1: Write about your recent vacation. Your paragraph should be at least 30 words . Start your paragraph with: “Last week, I had a vacation. I went to…” _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ Task 2: You have been given a chance to visit a country of your choice. Which country would you choose and why? (SPM 2003) Your paragraph should be at least 50 wo rds .
Start your paragraph with: “I would like to visit…” _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ Task 3: Write a letter to a penfriend describing some interesting places in your village, town or home state (SPM 1998). Your paragraph should be at least 70 words .
Start your paragraph with: “Dear ____, there are my interesting places here in…” _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________
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PRACTICE 8: SENSES Task 1: Describe an unforgettable incident that you saw on your way home from school (SPM 2009). Your paragraph should be at least 30 words . Start your paragraph with: “On my way home from school, I saw…” _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ Task 2: Describe an enjoyable weekend you have experienced (SPM 2003). Your paragraph should be at least 50 words .
Start your paragraph with: “I enjoyed my weekend with…” _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________
Task 3: Beauty (SPM 2009). Your paragraph should be at least 70 words .
Start your paragraph with: “I like…” _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________
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PRACTICE 9: FEELINGS Task 1: Describe a day at school when you were unhappy (SPM 1998). Your paragraph should be at least 30 words .
Start your paragraph with: “It was a day when…” _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ Task 2: Describe what makes you happy and explain why (SPM 2015). Your paragraph should be at least 50 words .
Start your paragraph with: “There are many things that can make me happy like …” _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ Task 3: The day I lost my temper (SPM 1999). Your paragraph should be at least70 wo rds .
Start your paragraph with: “The day I lost my temper was…” _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________
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ESSAY WRITING PRACTICE Write a composition of about 350 words on each of the following topics: 1. Describe an interesting day in school. 2. Write a story about someone who promotes a healthy lifestyle to his or her own family. Begin your story with: “it is very good if family members can …” 3. Why is having a good family important? 4. Is the internet important? Discuss. 5. Where there is a will, there is a way. Describe someone who shows strong determination in his or her life. 6. Describe a visit to a public place with your family members. 7. How do you appreciate your friends? 8. Is shopping a fun activity? 9. United we stand, divided we fall. Describe when this was true to you. 10. Nothing ventured, nothing gained. Share your experience that highlights the importance of taking actions in achieving your goal.
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CONTINUOUS WRITI NG: SAMPLE SENTENCES/ PARAGRAPHS / ESSAYS
SENTENCE CONSTRUCTION PRACTICE. Topics: 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9.
Self Family People Activities Events Incidents Places Senses Feelings
PRACTICE 1: Self 1.1) Saya gemar makan makanan segera. I love eating fast food. Possible options: a. I like to eat pizza, burger, and chicken chop. b. I like to eat. I like to eat pizza, burger and chicken chop. c. I love Coca Cola. I love to go to McDonalds.
1.2) Hobi saya adalah bermain permainan video dan mendengar musik . My hobbies are playing video games and listening to music. Possible options: a. I like to play video games. I like to listen to music. b. I like to play video games but I do not like to read books. I like to listen to music. c. My hobby is playing video games. I like to play Clash of Clans, Plants vs Zombies and Temple Run. I also like to listen to music. I like to listen to Justin Bieber and Selena Gomez.
1.3) Cita-cita saya adalah untuk menjadi seorang doktor . My ambition is to be a doctor. Possible options: a. I want to be a doctor. b. When I grow up, I want to be a doctor. c. I dream to be a doctor. 164
1.4) Saya lemah dalam Sejarah. I am weak in History. Possible options: a. I don’t understand History. b. I got 27% in History. c. I always fail in History.
1.5) Harga beg itu berpatutan. The price of the bag is reasonable. Possible options: a. The price of the bag is good. b. The bag is cheap. The price is low. c. The bag is only RM10. It is a good price.
PRACTICE 2: Family 2.1) I love my mother. She is … a. very kind. b. so beautiful. c. caring and loving.
2.2) My father is very rich. He … a. has twenty cars. b. likes to buy expensive things. c. has a big business.
2.3) My brother is very handsome. a. He looks like me. b. He looks like a movie star. c. Many people like him.
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2.4) My grandparents … a. live in a village. b. are very old. c. are very kind.
2.5) I have a happy family. a. We love one another. b. We have fun together. c. We always spend time together.
PRACTICE 3: People (e.g. Friends, Teachers, Idols) 3.1) Saya amat meminati guru saya. I admire my teacher very much. Possible options: a. I like my teacher so much. b. I really like my teacher. c. I love my teacher.
3.2) I have a lot of friends. They are … a. Ali, Ah Chong and Ravi. b. very handsome. c. very kind and friendly.
3.3) I like Justin Bieber so much. I like him bec ause … a. he is very popular. b. he can sing well. c. he is very cute. 3.4) Mr. Fazlee is my English teacher. He is … a. funny and caring. b. very sporting. c. good.
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3.5) Nurul is my girlfriend. She is … a. really beautiful b. so pretty c. very friendly
PRACTICE 4: Activities (e.g. shopping, camping) 4.1) Last weekend, my friends and I went to a shopping complex. a. We watched the latest movie at the cinema. b. We bought new clothes. c. There were many people at the mall.
4.2) I attended my friend’s open house during the last Hari Raya. a. I helped my friends to prepare the food. b. I met many classmates there. c. I ate a lot of traditional food.
4.3) Last week, my friends and I joined the school’s language camp. a. We had many language games. b. We had drama, spelling and vocabulary competitions. c. We did many fun activities together.
4.4) Ms. Aina was teaching English. My friends … a. were listening attentively. b. were taking down notes. c. did not make noise.
4.5) I like to play football. I … a. play football at the field. b. enjoy playing football with my friends. c. start to play at 5 p.m.
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PRACTICE 5: Events 5.1) Yesterday, my school celebrated Teacher’s Day. a. I was really busy doing much work. b. The students were very happy. c. The teachers enjoyed themselves.
5.2) It was my birthday. a. My friends came to my house. b. My parents gave me a present. c. I was really happy to celebrate it with my friends.
5.3) Our school had just organised the annual Sports Day. a. Many athletes were there. b. The students really enjoyed themselves. c. Teachers and students were busy.
5.4) It was my first date. I … a. felt really nervous. b. could not wait to go out with my girlfriend. c. wore the nicest dress/suit.
5.5) It was school holidays. a. My family and I went to Pulau Langkawi. b. I was really excited to go for a holiday. c. My friends and I went to the cinema to watch a movie.
PRACTICE 6: Incidents 6.1) Alif fell off from his bicycle. He … a. broke his arm. b. injured himself. c. hurt his knee.
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6.2) Fadhli did not go to school yesterday because … a. he was sick. b. of the heavy rain. c. he woke up late.
6.3) A fire broke out in my village earlier today. a. Many people were injured. b. Many houses were burnt down. c. The villagers were really scared.
6.4) I met a cute girl at Starbucks. a. I asked for her number. b. We smiled at each other. c. I bought a cup of coffee for her.
6.5) It was raining heavily outside. I … a. didn’t feel like doing anything. b. slept all day. c. couldn’t go anywhere.
PRACTICE 7: Places 7.1) I want to go to Korea because … a. Korea is a beautiful country. b. I want to meet my favourite K-pop singer. c. I like to watch their drama and listen to K-pop songs.
7.2) Last night, I went to a night market. It was … a. very busy. b. really noisy. c. full of people.
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7.3) My school … a. is very big. b. is nice and clean. c. has many blocks.
7.4) My house … a. is very large. b. has two rooms. c. is very comfortable.
7.5) My village is … a. far from the city. b. very beautiful. c. very nice.
PRACTICE 8: Senses 8.1) The fan is not working. I … a. feel so hot. b. feel uncomfortable. c. must buy a new fan.
8.2) We were on the top of Mount Kinabalu. We saw ... a. a beautiful scenery. b. the most beautiful view. c. the sunrise/a rainbow.
8.3) Last school holidays, I went to Pulau Langkawi. a. There were many tourists there. b. I saw a lot of shopping malls. c. I felt very excited to go to the beach. 8.4) We went to Junjong waterfall for a picnic.
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a. The water was very cold. b. The air was very fresh. c. The place was really nice.
8.5) The weather is really hot. a. I am sweating. b. We feel very uncomfortable. c. She feels really tired.
PRACTICE 9: Feelings 9.1) I lost my cell phone. I … a. felt very sad. b. I cried non-stop. c. got really angry.
9.2) My best friend had moved to a new school. I felt … a. very lonely. b. very sad. c. really unhappy.
9.3) My beloved cat, Cici went missing. I … a. felt very sad. I cried every day. b. was really worried. c. was scared.
9.4) Last week, my friends and I went for an outing. We … a. had a really good time. b. enjoyed our outing so much. c. had so much fun.
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9.5) I scored straight A’s in my SPM examination. a. I felt very happy. b. I was really proud. c. My parents smiled the whole day.
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PARAGRAPH WRITING PRACTICE PRACTICE 1: Self Task 1: Write about your favourite hobby. Your paragraph should be at least 30 words . Start your paragraph with: “My favourite hobby is…” Sample paragraph for low-proficiency level students: My favourite hobby is playing tennis. I have been playing tennis since I was 10 years old. My sister likes to play tennis too. I play tennis with her every day. (30 words)
Task 2: Things I like about my life (SPM 2000). Your paragraph should be at least 50 words . Start your paragraph with: “The first thing I like about my life is…” Sample paragraph for low-proficiency level students: The first thing I like about my life is my family. I love my father, my mother, my brother and my sister. My father works hard every day. My mother takes care of us well. My brother and sister are really nice. They like to buy me things. I love my family. (52 words)
Task 3: My dream car (SPM 1999). Your paragraph should be at least 70 words . Start your paragraph with: “My dream car is…” Sample paragraph for low-proficiency level students: My dream car is a Honda Civic. I have always wanted to buy a Honda Civic. I want to buy it for my girlfriend, Madeline. The problem is I have no money. I should work harder to save up money to buy a Honda Civic. I need to study hard if I want to buy this car. Sometimes I dream driving this car. One day, I will buy it. (71 words)
Glossary:
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dream car : kereta impian save up: simpan
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PRACTICE 2: Family Task 1: Large families make happy families (SPM 2001). Your paragraph should be at least 30 wo rds. Start your paragraph with: “I have a really big family.” Sample paragraph for low-proficiency level students: I have a really big family. I have a mother, a father, four sisters, and five brothers. My father is very handsome. We grow up together in a big house. I love my family a lot. (36 words) Task 2: Should parents give children more freedom? (SPM 2012) Your paragraph should be at least 50 words.
Start your paragraph with: “Parents should/should not give children more freedom.” Sample paragraph for low-proficiency level students: Parents should give children morefreedom. Children need more time to play. Some of them like to play football. Some play video games. Some like to go shopping. They should not study all the time. They should go out with their friends. They will feel bored if they study all day. (51 words) Glossary:
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freedom : kebebasan bored : bosan
Task 3: Family is more important than friends. Do you agree? Your paragraph should be at least 70 words.
Start your paragraph with: “Yes, I agree that family is more important than friends.” (or the counter argument) Sample paragraph for low-proficiency level students: Yes, I agree that family is more important than friends. Our family helps us all the time. Our father and mother take care of us. Family will stay with us forever. We always spend time with our siblings. We can share our problems with our family. Friends do not live with us. Friends will not be there for us all the time. I think we should love our family more. (70 words) Glossary:
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agree : setuju important : penting siblings : adik-beradik
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PRACTICE 3: People Task 1: A famous person you admire (SPM 2011). Your paragraph should be at least 30 words . Start your paragraph with: “My idol is…” Sample paragraph for low-proficiency level students: My idol is Adele. She is a popular and cute singer. I love the way she sings. She has such a great voice. Every day, I listen to her songs. I hope I can sing like her one day. (39 words) Glossary:
1. idol : idola
Task 2: Friends (SPM 2003). Your paragraph should be at least 50 word s . Start your paragraph with: “Friends are important.” Sample paragraph for low-proficiency level students: Friends are important. I need my friends when I feel sad. My friends always make me feel better. I like talking to my friends. I have a lot of friends. My friends are Ali, Abu, and Chong. Ali is very handsome. Ali and Abu are very friendly. We play football together. (51 words)
Task 3: My perfect future husband or wife (SPM 2008). Your paragraph should be at least 70 words . Start your paragraph with: “My perfect future husband/wife...” Sample paragraph for low-proficiency level students: My perfect future husband will be handsome. He must be a Korean. He will look like a celebrity. I want him to look like G-Dragon. I also want my future husband to be kind, funny, and caring. He must also be rich. I want to go for honeymoon in Seoul, Korea. I want to live in a bungalow. He must know how to cook. I want him to cook for me every day. (73 words) Glossary:
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future husband : bakal suami
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PRACTICE 4: Activities Task 1: Imagine you are moving to a new house. Describe the last day in your old house (SPM 1997). Your paragraph should be at least 30 words . Start your paragraph with: “I looked at my old house and…” Sample paragraph for low-proficiency level students: I looked at my old house and felt really sad. I cried non-stop. I remember the time I spent in my room. I fought with my siblings there. I also had fun with them every day. We would watch television together. (41 words) Glossary:
1. fought (past tense of ‘fight’) : bergaduh
Task 2: Describe an outing with your friends (SPM 2012). Your paragraph should be at least 50 words . Start your paragraph with: “My friends and I went to…” Sample paragraph for low-proficiency level students: My friends and I went to KLCC to spend time together. We visited the shops there. We also ate at KFC. My friends wanted to visit the KLCC park. We saw many cute girls. My friends liked one of the girls. We took a lot of pictures and shared them with our family. (53 words)
Task 3: Describe how you spent a free day when the weather was bad (SPM 2001). Your paragraph should be at least 70 words . Start your paragraph with: “It was raining really heavily…” Sample paragraph for low-proficiency level students: It was raining heavily outside. I wanted to go out with my friends but I could not. I decided to read my books. I read my new novel. I loved it very much. My friend, Elsa bought it for me. Elsa was my best friend. She was very cute, kind and friendly. Later, I went to kitchen to cook noodles. I liked noodles. I cooked curry noodles. After eating, I slept all day. (74 words)
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Task 1: Write about a language camp that you joined last month. Your paragraph should be at least 30 words . Start your paragraph with: “I recently joined a language camp.” Sample paragraph for low-proficiency level students: I recently joined a language camp. The language camp was held in Swiss Inn hotel, Sungai Petani. My friends and I did lots of fun activities together. I was so happy that I could join the camp. (37 words)
Task 2: Describe a festival celebrated in your area (SPM 2004). Your paragraph should be at least 50 words.
Start your paragraph with: “We celebrated…” Sample paragraph for low-proficiency level students: We celebrated Hari Raya in my area. A lot of families did open houses. When I went there, I helped my friends to prepare the food. I enjoyed going to open houses because we could eat delicious cookies. I also met many classmates there. We ate a lot of traditional food. Our teachers were there too. (56 words)
Task 3: Describe an important family celebration and how you felt about it (SPM 2014). Your paragraph should be at least 70 words. Start your paragraph with: “It was my grandmother’s birthday.” Sample paragraph for low-proficiency level students: It was my grandmother’s birthday. I love my grandmother so much. We celebrated her birthday every year. This year, we went to Pulau Pangkor to celebrate grandmother’s birthday. I bought her a special gift. I bought the gift from Tesco. It was a ring. My grandmother was very happy. We bought her a big chocolate cake. She ate half of the chocolate cake. We sang a birthday song for grandmother. (70 words) Glossary:
1. celebrate : meraikan/menyambut
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PRACTICE 6: Incidents Task 1: You just had a fight with your sister. Write about what happened. Your paragraph should be at least 30 words . Start your paragraph with: “I had a fight with my sister.” Sample paragraph for low-proficiency level students: I had a fight with my sister. She took my phone. I did not like it when she took my things. I was very angry. I shouted at her. She shouted back at me and said I was lying. (39 words)
Task 2: Write a story that ends with: “If only I had listened to his/her advice” (SPM 2003). Your paragraph should be at least 50 words . Start your paragraph with: “I had an accident when…” Sample paragraph for low-proficiency level students: I had an accident when I was going to the concert. My mother did not want me to go to the concert. I did not listen to her. My mother did not understand me. I wanted to go no matter what. I planned with my friend, Vince to go there quietly. (51 words) Task 3: Write a story with the title: An Unexpected Visitor (SPM 2006). Your paragraph should be at least 70 words . Start your paragraph with: “I was waiting for the bus when…” Sample paragraph for low-proficiency level students: I was waiting for the bus when a cat suddenly appeared. I love cats. It was a brown cat that has big white spots all over itself. I was so happy that the cat came because I was bored. The bus was taking too long. Then I saw a little girl got kidnapped by a man. The man was tall and scary. He drove a red Honda Civic. I shouted for help. (72 words) Glossary:
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kidnapped : diculik
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PRACTICE 7: Places Task 1: Write about your recent vacation. Your paragraph should be at least 30 words . Start your paragraph with: “Last week, I had a vacation. I went to…” Sample paragraph for low-proficiency level students: Last week, I had a vacation. I went to Langkawi. I went together with my family. Langkawi is a really nice place. I went to Underwater World. I bought a lot of chocolates. There were many tourists. (37 words) Glossary:
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vacation : percutian
Task 2: You have been given a chance to visit a country of your choice. Which country would you choose and why? (SPM 2003) Your paragraph should be at least 50 wo rds . Start your paragraph with: “I would like to visit…” Sample paragraph for low-proficiency level students: I would like to visit Estonia. I want to go there because I have friends in Estonia. They told me that Estonia is a beautiful country. The weather is cold too. I love cold weather. I want to visit their museums. I want to buy the chocolates there. I want to try their traditional food. (55 words)
Task 3: Write a letter to a penfriend describing some interesting places in your village, town or home state (SPM 1998). Your paragraph should be at least 70 words . Start your paragraph with: “Dear ____, there are my interesting places here in…” Sample paragraph for low-proficiency level students: Dear Triin, there are many interesting places here in my home state, Kedah. There are paddy fields. The paddy fields are beautiful. The weather is nice too. I want you to come to Kedah. You will love the waterfalls here. We can have a picnic by the beaches too. I can also bring you on a hike up Gunung Jerai. Our traditional food is great. You should try our Nasi Lemak. (71 words) Glossary:
1. waterfall : air terjun 2. hike : pendakian
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PRACTICE 8: Senses Task 1: Describe an unforgettable incident that you saw on your way home from school (SPM 2009). Your paragraph should be at least 30 words . Start your paragraph with: “On my way home from school, I saw…” Sample paragraph for low-proficiency level students: On my way home from school, I saw a cat. The cat was cute. It was brown. The cat came to me. I touched the cat. The cat ran away. (30 words) Glossary:
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incident : kejadian
Task 2: Describe an enjoyable weekend you have experienced (SPM 2003). Your paragraph should be at least 50 words . Start your paragraph with: “I enjoyed my weekend with…” Sample paragraph for low-proficiency level students: I enjoyed my weekend with my friends. My friends are Obama, Hillary and Donald. They were my best friends. We went out shopping at Queensbay. We wanted to watch a movie. We went to the cinema. Obama bought tickets for all of us. Hillary bought popcorns. Donald bought drinks. I enjoyed eating free food. (54 words)
Task 3: Beauty (SPM 2009). Your paragraph should be at least 70 words . Start your paragraph with: “I like…” Sample paragraph for low-proficiency level students: I like my mother. My mother is beautiful. There is no prettier woman than my mother. She uses make up to be pretty. My father loves my mother. My father loves pretty women. Tomorrow is Mother’s Day. I will buy my mother a present. She likes chocolate cake s. I will also buy a chocolate cake. My mother is on a diet. She does not eat too much cake. I have to eat it for her. (75 words)
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PRACTICE 9: Feelings Task 1: Describe a day at school when you were unhappy (SPM 1998). Your paragraph should be at least 30 words . Start your paragraph with: “It was a day when…” Sample paragraph for low-proficiency level students: It was a day when my favourite teacher left the school. I felt so unhappy. I like her classes so much. She taught me so many things. I hope that she comes back to our school. My friends were sad too. (41 words) Task 2: Describe what makes you happy and explain why (SPM 2015). Your paragraph should be at least 50 words . Start your paragraph with: “There are many things that can make me happy like …” Sample paragraph for low-proficiency level students: I was happy that day because my friends celebrated my birthday. I have never celebrated my birthday before. They bought me a cake. I felt so loved. My best friend, Jewel gave me a present. It was a watch. She knew that I loved that G-Shock watch. I thanked her for the present. (53 words) Task 3: The day I lost my temper (SPM 1999). Your paragraph should be at least70 words . Start your paragraph with: “The day I lost my temper was…” Sample paragraph for low-proficiency level students: The day I lost my temper was on Thursday. My best friend, Emily was punished by the teacher. Emily is a cute girl. She is very shy. She does not like to talk. A very naughty boy, Aiman copied Emily’s homework. Aiman is very bad. He is really lazy. He alwayscopies. The teacher was angry with Emily. He thought that Emily copied Aiman’s homework. I got angry and told the teacher the truth. The teacher was angry at Aiman. (80 words) Glossary:
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Essay 1
Topic: Describe an interesting day in school Yesterday was an interesting day in school. It was Teacher’s Day. I love Teacher’s Day. It was a big event (Describing events). All teachers were very happy. All students were also very happy (Describing feelings). Teacher’s Day was a special day in my school. Wehad a special programme yesterday. [41 words] Lim, Bala, Nasir and I played football with our class teacher. Our class teacher was a handsome man. He was a very good teacher (Describing p eople). Our class teacher was very happy. We were also very happy. We played football at the school field. After playing football, we played badminton (Describing activities). [48 words] At 11.00 am, we went to the school hall. My school hall was big. The school hall was also beautiful (Describing places). All students were happy. It was a special day. Many teachers sang songs. Our principal sang a song (Describing activities). He was very good. All students liked him. [46 words] Teachers wore beautiful dresses. Miss Janagi wore a beautiful green sari. The discipline teacher wore ‘baju Melayu’, a traditional Malay dress (Using senses). All classes had a party. There were colourful balloons in the class (Describing places/ Using senses). There were many types of food. My friend, Hani, bought a big cake. We loved the cake (Describing feelings). (48 words) Yesterday was a very interesting day for me. I love Teacher’s Day (Describing feelings). [12 words] [TOTAL: 196 WORDS]
Glossary:
1. 2. 3. 4. 5.
interesting : menarik event : acara school hall : dewan sekolah principal : pengetua colourful : warna-warni
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Topic: Write a story about someone who promotes a healthy lifestyle to his or her own family. Begin your story with: “it is very good if f amily members can …” It is very good if family members can have a healthy life – that is what Uncle Sam strongly believes in. Uncle Sam, my neighbour, loves his family. He loves his father. He also loves his mother. He loves his wife and children [Describing people]. [42 words] Uncle Sam makes sure his family members are always healthy. He loves to cook with his family. He does not go to fast food restaurants. He and his wife cook every day. They love to cook chicken rice. All his family members love chicken rice. All his children know how to cook chicken rice because Uncle Sam and his wife have taught them how to do it. It is easy to cook chicken rice. Uncle Sam also wants his children to eat vegetables. He grows his own vegetables [Describing actions/ activities/ people]. [87 words]. Uncle Sam also wants his family to stay away from stress. His family loves picnic. They like to have picnic at a beach. They love beautiful beaches [Describing places]. They love to swim in the sea. Swimming is good for their body. They love to play beach volleyball [Describing activities]. When they go for a picnic, they enjoy themselves a lot [Describing feelings]. They forget about their problems. They forget about stress. Uncle Sam says picnic is good and healthy for them. [77 words]. Uncle Sam’s family likes to do many things together. They exercise together . They jog, cycle and swim together [Describing activities]. They exercise because it is good for their health. As a neighbour, I like Uncle Sam and his family. They have a very healthy lifestyle. [43 words] [TOTAL: 249 WORDS]
Glossary:
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healthy : sihat fast food : makanan segera
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Essay 3 Topic: Why is having a good family important? I love my family. I love my father. I also love my mother. I love my brother and sisters. My brother is a USM student. He is very kind. He is a clever student. My sisters are in Form 1 and Form 3. They are also beautiful. They are smart students (Describing people). [51 words] My family is good. It is important to have a good family. We do many activities together. I love to cook with my family. I love to cook chicken rice (Describing activities). All my family members love chicken rice. I do not know how to cook chicken rice but my mother has taught me how to do it. It is easy to cook chicken rice. [63 words]. My family is important. My family helps me to reduce stress. I like to do many things with my family members. We love picnic. Going for a picnic with my family members helps me to reduce stress. We like to have picnic at Pantai Ceria (Describing activities/events). Pantai Ceria is a beautiful beach. We love the sea. We love the blue sky (Describing places). We love to play volleyball on the beach. When we go for a picnic, my mother and I will cook some food. We cook some food (Describing activities). [84 words]. A good family loves to share the same hobby. My family and I love to watch television together. We like to watch Malay drama (Describing activities). I love Rosham Nor. He is handsome. My father likes Lisa Surihani. He said Lisa is very beautiful (Describing pople). My mother does not like Lisa Surihani. My mother says she is more beautiful than Lisa Surihani. We love to talk about what we like and dislike. [43 words] My family is important because my family members support me. My family makes my life meaningful (16 words). [256 WORDS]
Glossary:
1. important : penting 2. kind : baik 3. clever : pandai 4. smart : bijak/pandai 5. reduce : kurangkan 6. share : kongsi 7. meaningful : bermakna
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Topic: Is Internet important? Discuss. My friends and I love Internet. We like Internet very much. I have a computer at home. I have an old computer. I have a second hand computer. Boon and Ganesh do not have a computer at home. [38 words] Internet is very important. I get new friends from the Internet. I get new friends from London, New York and Tokyo. Tokyo is a big city (Describing places). My new friends are Rachel, David and Kawasaki. Rachel is beautiful. David likes to help people. I like my new friends. My new friends also like me. They also like Malaysia(Describing people). [56 words] Internet is important because it helps me to study better. I can see many pictures on the Internet. I can see beautiful pictures. I use the pictures for my Geography subject (Describing activities). Last week, my Geography teacher, Miss Rini, asked me to find pictures about Penang Island. The pictures have many colours. Penang Island is a beautiful place(Describing places). It has many popular beaches (Describing places). Some pictures are big. Some pictures are small. I cut the beautiful pictures. I put the pictures in my Geography exercise book (Describing activities). [84 words] Boon and Ganesh always come to my house. We surf the Internet together. Boon and I like to get information about Science (Describing activities). Internet is important to us. We love Science. We also love our Science teacher. He is very sporting (Describing people). Our friend Ganesh does not like science. Ganesh likes to get information about animals. He loves animals. Ganesh likes to know about snakes, tigers and birds (Describing people). [55 words] Sometimes, we go to Vince’s house. Vince has a new computer. He has a very good computer (Describing people). We will surf the Internet together. We love to surf the Internet. Yes, Internet is important. [29 words] [TOTAL: 262 WORDS] Glossary:
1. 2. 3.
second hand : terpakai surf : melayari information : maklumat
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Essay 5
Topic: Where there is a will, there is a way. Describe someone who shows strong determination in his or her life. I have a friend, his name is Siva. Siva is 15 years old. He likes to eat. Siva likes to eat pizza, fries, burger and chicken nuggets. Siva also loves to play games. He plays online games. He plays online games after school. Siva does not like to play football but he likes to play badminton [Describing people]. [56 words] Siva and I study at SMK Jertih. We are in 3 Gagah. We love our class. Our class is clean [Describing places]. All our friends are very good. They are smart. They like to do homework. I also like to do homework. However, Siva does not like to do homework. Siva is weak. Siva fails in many subjects [Describing people]. [49 words] Siva wants to be a smart student. He always wants to get an A for all the subjects. I know Siva is a good boy. Siva says he will not give up. He says he will try his best[Describing people]. I tell him, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” Siva pays 100% attention in class. Siva does not talk in class. He keeps quiet when a teacher is teaching in class. During recess, Siva and I read many books. We go to the library together. Siva reads many books. Siva asks his father to buy many books for him [Describing actions/activities]. [45 words] Siva and I go home at 3.00 pm. We go home by bus. We do our homework at home. Siva starts going for tuition. He stops watching television. He stops playing online games [Describing actions/activities]. In the school examination, Siva passes all his subjects. Siva is so happy. Siva wants to work harder so that he can get some As. [47 words] After six months, Siva is not weak anymore. Siva is one of the best students in class. In the next examination, Siva aims to there get atisleast five As [Describing people]. He knows he must work hard . Where there is a will, a way. [TOTAL: 315 WORDS]
Glossary:
1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10.
will : kemahuan determination : kesungguhan weak : lemah fails : gagal give up : berputus asa pays 100% attention : memberi tumpuan sepenuhnya quiet : senyap recess : rehat library : perpustakaan aims : berhasrat
11. work hard : bekerja keras
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Essay 6
Topic: Describe a visit to a public place with your family me mbers Yesterday, I followed my handsome and caring father to visit my uncle at a hospital [Describing people/ actions]. We left home at about 5.00 p.m. and reached the hospital at 6.15 p.m. The hospital was a new hospital. It was opened two months ago. It was clean and big. There were many people at the hospital [Describing places]. [53 words] My uncle was also handsome. He was more handsome than my father but I was more handsome than my uncle. In short, I was the most handsome man. I was happy to be the most handsome man in the family. My uncle was a chronic diabetic patient. He was in the hospital because his sugar level was very high [Describing people]. [59 words] My uncle‘s ward was on the second floor. The lift was very big and fast. I saw a nurse in the lift. The nurse was my mother‘s old friend. She talked to my father. She told us that my uncle was doing alright. After talking to the nurse, my father and I went to Room 515. My uncle was very happy to see my father and me [Describing activities/ actions/ feelings]. [67 words] There was a young doctor. The doctor said that my uncle was getting better and he could go home soon. My father talked to my uncle for one hour. I felt bored so I went out of the room. I went to level one. I saw a young nurse. She smiled at me. I smiled at her. She looked like Seri, my girlfriend [Describing senses – seen]. [63 words] Then, I went to the hospital café. The café was not big but clean[Describing places]. I saw the young nurse again. She smiled at me again. The young nurse came to my table. I smiled at her. I did not know what to say. I ate my fried rice quickly. After that, I ate my burger. Later, I ate another plate of fried rice. I did not say anything to the young nurse [Describing activities/ actions]. [72 words] Suddenly, the young nurse stood up and left me. She still smiled. I quickly went to Room 515. My father was waiting for me. I said goodbye to my uncle. Then, my father and I went home. I could not forget the young nurse [Describing actions/ activities]. [44 words] TOTAL [358 WORDS] Glossary:
1. 2.
chronic diabetic : penghidap kencing manis kronik second floor : tingkat dua
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Essay 7
Topic: How do you appreciate your friends? Last year, I got 5A+, 1A and 3 B+ in my SPM. I was very happy. My parents were happy too [Describing feelings]. That night, my father took me and all my family members to my favourite restaurant, Bamboo Restaurant. It was only five kilometres from my house. The restaurant was opened three years ago. I liked the restaurant very much because it served Malay, Thai and western food [Describing places]. [67 words] When we arrived at the restaurant, I saw many people. My father took some time to park his car. My family and I walked to a room which my father had booked for us. The room was quite big [Describing places]. When I opened the door, I saw my uncle, my grandmother and my friends. They smiled at me. They were happy. I was really happy to see all my close friends [Describing feelings]. I told my father my friends must come to my party because of our good friendship. They helped me to get a good result. I appreciated all my friends. I invited them to my party. [91 words] I kissed my mother and I thanked her. I liked the party very much. At 8.45 pm, we were ready for dinner. I sat beside Aaron, my boyfriend. He smiled at me. I smiled at him. We looked at each other for some time [Describing actions/activities]. My father ordered my most favourite food – chicken chop with black pepper sauce. We also had chicken soup, pizza and fried rice. I loved all the food very much. They were great food [Describing senses – taste]. To me, the restaurant had the best chicken chop in town. For my friends, I ordered Italian pizza, their favourite food. I really appreciated their friendship. [102 words] My best friends, Liza, Muna and Kim gave me a present. Liza was very hardworking. Muna was a clever girl. Kim was as clever as Muna[Describing people]. I liked them very much because they always helped me in my studies. We always studied together. When we were in Form 5, we always studied together in the school library after school. Sometimes, I would go to Kim’s house to study. After some time, my result improved. To appreciate our friendship and their help, I gave each of them a very beautiful ring. [Describing activities/actions]. [90 words] After dinner, I sang a Justin Bieber‘s song for my family and friends. I really appreciated them. We had so much fun at the restaurant. I was very happy[Describing feelings]. It was really a memorable night. [31 words] TOTAL [385 words] Glossary:
1. appreciate : menghargai 2. party : majlis 3. friendship : persahabatan 4. present : hadiah 5. improved (past tense of ‘improve’) : bertambah baik 6. memorable : dapat dikenang/diingati
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Essay 8
Topic: Is shopping a f un activity? Last week, my family and I went to a shopping complex. We went to Maju Shopping Complex. It was a new shopping complex. The complex was very big(Describing places). There were many people. We saw a group of old ladies. They were shopping at Parkson Grand. They were having a lot of fun (Describing people). They smiled all the time. They laughed too. (Describing senses – seen) Shopping must be fun for them. [65 words] My mother loved to shop at Maju Shopping Complex. She said, shopping was fun for her. That day, my mother bought two new clothes for herself. She bought a black blouse. I did not like black. I did not like the blouse (Describing feelings). My sisters bought magazines and novels. I felt hungry and wanted to go home but my mother still wanted to shop. I was angry. I was bored (Describe feelings). Shopping was fun for my mother but not for me. [79 words] My father also liked shopping. He bought a new car shampoo. Before he bought it, he looked at the shampoo for a long time (Describe activities). It was cheap. The car shampoo was only RM6.99 per bottle. I did not know what to buy. I just walked around the shopping complex. The new shopping complex was very beautiful. I liked the place a lot (Describing places). After one hour, I felt tired. My father asked me to sit down on a chair. I relaxed for twenty minutes. My mother asked me why I looked sad. I told her I did not like shopping. Shopping was not a fun activity (Describing feelings). [105 words] Before we went home, my mother went to a boutique. She looked at all the clothes there. She loved the beautiful clothes. She spent one hour there (Describing activities). I hated shopping. I hated shopping very much. Shopping was not fun at all. I felt sad. I really wanted to go home. I wanted to cry (Describing feelings). I was angry with my mother because she could not stop shopping. My father started to get angry too. My father did not have enough money. My mother asked my father to use his credit card. However, my father did not want to use his credit card. Finally, I told my mother that she must stop shopping (Describing activities/actions). It was time to go home. [116 words] At 7.00 pm, we went home. I did not buy anything. My mother talked about her fun shopping trip. I kept quiet. Shopping was not fun for me. [28 words] TOTAL [393 WORDS]
Glossary:
1. 2. 3.
tired : penat boutique : butik angry : marah
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Essay 9
Topic: United we stand, divided we fall. Describe when this was true to you . Last week, Boboi, Yaya, Gopal, Ying and I joined our school language camp. The camp was held at a two-star hotel in Ipoh. It was a big hotel. The hotel was new. The hotel had many rooms [Describing places]. We did not have to pay anything for the camp. Everything was sponsored. Intel Malaysia sponsored the camp. [55 words] There were ten groups. I was in Group 10. The members in my group came from different classes. But all of us were Form 5 students. Seri, from Class 5 Permai, was our group leader. Seri was a very pretty girl. I liked her so much[Describing people]. I knew the other boys also liked Seri. We named our group Seri Bombastic. In the first activity, we created our group‘s logo, motto and song. At first we did not know how and what to sing. I was afraid to sing alone but my friends gave me motivation. We helped each other. When we presented our song, everybody liked it. I learned that it was true when people said ‘Together we stand, divided we fall’. [Describing activities/ actions]. [119 words] On the second day, we had many language games. We had a spelling competition, vocabulary games, drama and many other games. Our group won the drama competition [Describing activities]. We presented a very good drama. We presented a story about a princess who fell in love with a fisherman. Seri played the role of a princess and of course I was the poor but handsome fisherman [Describing people]. The activities went on until 10.00 p.m. We were very tired but we enjoyed ourselves a lot [Describing feelings]. We won because we worked together well. We had a good leader. Seri always told us that we must stand together. She told us that if we did not work together we would be weak. [115 words] On the third day we had jungle trekking in a forest nearby the hotel. We had to climb hills. It was very difficult. We had many challenges [Describing activities]. Seri was not feeling well. She could not walk fast. I had to walk slowly. I did not want Seri to be alone. We helped Seri. We carried her bag. We stayed together all the time. Finally, we reached our destination. Seri smiled at me. She gave me her photo and thanked me [Describing action/ activities]. She said to me, “You see, united we stand, together we fall.” I agreed. What she said was very true. [100 words] I was very happy. Seri was happy too. After the language camp, Seri and I got closer. We planned to join the language camp again next year. [27 words] TOTAL [416 WORDS]
Glossary:
1. sponsored (past tense of ‘sponsor’) : ditaja 2. presented (past tense of ‘present’) : mempersembahkan
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Essay 10
Topic: Nothing ventured, nothing gained. Share your experience that highlights the importance of taking actions in achieving your goal. I am Mamat Kelaboo. I am 24 years old. I am from Kuala Nerang, Kedah. Some people say I look like Saheizy Sam. Maybe they are right. Some other people say I look like Zizan Raja Lawak. I do not know who is right. I do not want to be Saheizy Sam or Zizan Raja Lawak. I only want to be myself. I only want to be Mamat Kelaboo [Describing people]. [69 words] I came to Kuala Lumpur last year. I started working as a dispatch boy at an international company ten months ago. I have some new friends in Kuala Lumpur. My friends are Babu, Kishen, Babe and Vee. Babu is my housemate. We stay at a flat in Cheras. He is a very kind man. He always helps me. Babe and Vee are my friends at the office [Describing people]. [67 words] Vee is special. Yes, Vee is not a very beautiful girl but I like her very much. I like to see her smile. Her smile is very sweet. Vee is very caring [Describing people]. Vee always calls me every night. Vee always makes sure I eat and rest well. When I have a headache, Vee will give me Panadol [Describing actions / activities]. The problem is, I am not sure if Vee really likes me. I have to ask her but I am so scared to ask her. [81 words] Two weeks ago, Vee and I were alone in the office. I wanted to ask her about her feeling towards me. I was sweating and my hands were shaking. When I was about to open my mouth, Babe opened the door. She talked to Vee for 30 minutes. I said nothing. I just left [Describing actions/activities]. Last Monday, I saw Vee at Kiah Café. She was alone. She was eating chicken rice. I went to her. I ordered my drinks. I was ready to tell her about my feelings. I also wanted to ask her about her feeling. When I started to say a few words, her telephone rang. Her mother called her. She left me at the café because her mother had high fever. She had to take her mother to clinic [Describing actions/activities]. [131 words] Yesterday, I stopped Vee outside our office. I told her directly that I liked her so much and I loved her. I asked her, “Do you like me?” Vee kept quiet. She looked at me for a few minutes. Then, she finally said, “No, I don’t like you….but I love you.” I jumped and screamed! [Describing actions/activities] [55 words] Now, I am very happy. I tell myself, “…so,that is why people say – nothing ventured, nothing gained. If you want something, you must go for it. We cannot give up easily.” [32 words] TOTAL [440 WORDS] Glossary:
1. dispatch : budak penghantar 2. headache : sakit kepala 3. scared : takut 4. sweating : berpeluh 5. shaking : menggigil 6. ventured : diterokai 7. gained : diperoleh
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