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BY NGOC NGOC BACH
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below gives information about the preferred leisure activities of Australian Children. Write Write a report for a university lecturer describing describing the information shown. You should write at least 150 words.
DÀN BÀI CHUNG + MỞ BÀI + TỔNG QUAN
+ THÂN BÀI 1 + THÂN BÀI 2
MỞ BÀI CÂU ĐỀ BÀI: The graph below gives information about the preferred leisure activities of Australian children. PARAPHRASE
CÂU VIẾT LẠI: The bar chart illustrates the data about 5 activities Australian children prefer to do in their spare time.
TỔNG QUAN Tìm 2 đặc điểm chung của hình ???
Overall, boys do more of each activity than girls (except Overall, (except for arts and crafts and watching TV or videos) . Another visible trend is that, that, while boys are more active than girls, both still prefer prefer sedentary activities such as TV and video games
THÂN BÀI Body 1
Body 2
The percentage of Australian Australian youngsters in both genders watching TV or videos is equal, at 100%. Electronic or computer games are much more preferred preferred by boys than by girls. The figures are slightly over 80% and 60% respectively. Likewise, Likewise, bike riding also attracts boys more
than girls in their spare time. Boys’ involvement involvement in this activity is nearly 80%, whereas the figure for girls is a little under 60%.
Around 40% of 5-to-14-year-old boys enjoy skateboar skateboarding ding or rollerblading,, while the proportion of girls at this age is only rollerblading slightly more than 20%. In contrast, contrast, the figure for girls spending their leisure time on art and craft is greater than their male counterparts, at just under 60% and approximately 35% respectively
The bar chart illustrates the data about 5 activities Australian children prefer to do in their spare time. Overall, boys do more of each activity than girls (except for arts and crafts and watching TV or videos) . Another visible trend is that, while boys are more active than girls, both still prefer sedentary activities such as TV and video games The percentage of Australian youngsters in both genders watching TV or videos is equal, at 100%. Electronic or computer games are much more preferred by boys than by girls. The figures are slightly over 80% and 60% respectively. respectively. Likewise, Likewise,
bike riding also attracts boys more than girls in i n their spare time. Boys’ involvement involvement in this activity a ctivity is nearly 80%, whereas the figure for girls is a little under 60%. Around 40% of 5-to-14-year-old boys enjoy skateboarding or rollerblading, while the proportion of girls at this age is only slightly more than 20%. In contrast, the figure for girls spending their leisure time on art and craft is greater than their male counterparts, at just under 60% and approximately 35% respectively 181 words Written by Ngoc Bach
IT’S GOOD ENOUGH FOR A BAND 8.0 ? + Task response: (details) - The first paragraph paragraph was a concise and accurate accurate paraphrase paraphrase of what the chart contains. contains. I changed enough words to satisfy the examiner. - I identified identified two key key points and and I provided provided a clear overview overview..
+ Coherence and cohesion (details) The organisation of my detail paragraphs paragraphs was clear, clear, and it enabled me to make comparisons consistently between the leisure activities of boys and girls. The result was was a comprehensive comprehensive and organised organised report.
+ Lexical resource: (details) Vocabulary to express comparison and contrast: Likewise/In contrast/while/wh contrast/while/whereas. ereas. I used a good range of words to refer refer to boys and girls: both genders/male counterparts/youngsters/Australian children + Grammar: (details) The correct correct use of adverb clauses and comparative comparative forms and i varied the structures structures of my sentences.
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