IELTS Writing Task 2-SAMPLE ANSWER(BAND 9)-7 You sou!" s#$n" a%out &' inut$s on tis task So$ #ar$nts %u* t$ir +i!"r$n ,at$$r t$* ask .or/ an" a!!o, t$ir +i!"r$n to "o ,at$$r t$* ,ant Is tis a goo" ,a* to rais$ +i!"r$n0 Wat +ons$1u$n+$s +ou!" tis st*!$ o. #ar$nting a$ .or +i!"r$n as t$* g$t o!"$r0 -It is true that some parents are overly permissive and tend to spoil their children. In my opinion, this is not a good parenting style, and it can have a range of negative long-term consequences. If parents want to raise respectful r espectful and well-behaved children, I believe that a certain amount of discipline is necessary. Having worked with children myself, I have learnt that clear expectations and boundaries are necessary, and it is important to be able to say ‘no to children when they misbehave or try to push against these boundaries. !his is the only way to help young people to regulate their desires and develop self-control. In my view, parents who do the opposite and constantly give in to their childrens demands, are actually doing more harm than good. !hey are failing their children rather than being kind to them. !he children of indulgent or lenient parents are likely to grow up with several negative personality traits. !he first and most m ost obvious danger is that these children will become self-centred adults who show little consideration for the feelings or needs of others. "ne consequence of such an attitude could be that these adults are unable to work successfully in teams with other colleagues. # second negative trait in such people could be impulsiveness. # person who has never lived with any boundaries is likely to lack the patience to carefully consider options before making decisions. !his may lead, for example, to compulsive shopping, unwise financial decisions, or even criminal activity. In conclusion, parents should help their children to develop self-control and respect for others, and I do not believe that the permissive parenting style supports this ob$ective. %&'( words, band )* IELTS AEr%ai3an TEAM
E4TRA56$r$s t$ %an" 7-9 o+a%u!ar* .ro t$ $ssa* +ednesday $ssa* +ednesday -overly permissive
-tend to spoil their children
-parenting style
-a range of negative long-term consequences
-to raise respectful and well-behaved children -a certain amount of discipline
-Having worked with children myself,.....
-clear expectations and boundaries
-to push against these boundaries
-to regulate their desires
-develop self control
-constantly give in to their childrens demands
-doing more harm than
good -failing their children -indulgent or lenient parents
-negative personality traits
-!he first and most obvious danger
-self-centred adults
-show little consideration for the feelings or needs of others -"ne consequence of such an attitude -unable to work successfully in teams -impulsiveness -lack the patience -to carefully consider options -compulsive shopping -unwise financial decisions -criminal activity -I do not believe that..... supports this ob$ective Noti+$ tat tis is a!! 8to#i+ o+a%u!ar*8/ ,i+ +ontri%ut$s to t$ task r$s#ons$ an" !$i+a! r$sour+$ s+or$s T$ ,or"s an" #ras$s a%o$ ar$ t$ k$* r$ason ,* tis $ssa* ,ou!" $asi!* a+i$$ a %an" 9
