Name Class Date Why I deserve an A If asked, “what grade do you deserve in this class thus far,” I would respond with “an A” Despite taking !" credits this semester, along with #eing a part of an enterprise, I have managed to complete all of the assignments and readings for this class, along with contri#uting to classroom discussions Also, during peer review, review, I have managed to help other students with their own papers, marking up countless errors, as well as helping them grow as writers $he point of a class is to learn the material material covered as well as helping others to learn %o far into the class, I have done all of the readings, along with participating in the class discussions a#out the readings $hrough this, I have learned learned the material presented, along with with helping to further educate other students on the material as well Also, through the creative writings, I have engaged into the topic more &etting the freedom to #e a#le a#le to write a#out a topic topic of my choice has greatly pi'ued my interest in the (nglish language in general $his newly found interest will help in other classes that re'uire writing, as well as in the future for any )o# that may re'uire it *verall, I feel that my contri#utions to the class despite my large workload this semester has #een enough to deserve my grade in this class to #e an A so far +y input and opinions on the readings, as well as my usefulness in aiding other students in their own writing, has ultimately led to what I feel is Atype work -opefully, I can keep this up through the course of the semester, resulting in a final grade of an A
$hroughout this writing, I used many emotional appeals to try to convince the reader of the grade that I deserve in the class thus far .irst, I #eing #y appealing to the audience/s emotions, or the use of pathos, when I descri#e my hard workload this semester $he reader then feels sorry for me, and can pro#a#ly relate what I am going through Also, in doing so, I add credi#ility to myself In mentioning that I am part of an enterprise, I have shown that I work hard, showing that I have a good work ethic Ne0t, I appeal through logos, or logic I do this #y presenting actual inclass e0amples on why I deserve an A, descri#ing how I help others to learn, and I include how I do all of the readings $his is a logical appeal #ecause working hard and participating in class, logically means getting a good grade $he whole time, I am keeping in mind that the target audience is the teacher, meaning I do not need to e0plain things that occur in class, that someone e lse might not understand 1astly, since the purpose of the paper is to e0plain why I deserve an A, I end it with an overall summary, descri#ing why I deserve it, giving a #rief overview of what the two previous paragraphs were a#out
